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tich.1990mg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: monika1992
This time m also first...YIPEEE
Awesome update...but who is Bindiya?

WOW dear is baar bhi 1st 😃

hmm bindiya,, u have to wait a lil more, this story is on bindiya's truth...thats all i can say

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tich.1990mg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: meena..
awesome 👏
who is bindiya😕

cont soon

thank u sweety...😳 hmmm bindiya, kya bolu, bear with me,,,, u have to wait a lil long...😉

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Tinu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Wow super
ye bindya kaun hai
pls cont soon

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rubykatariya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: tich.1990mg

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tich.1990mg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

SIRF MERE LIYE PART 6

all three goes to maan's cottage where geet is waiting to apologise to maan, but worried about him as well,coz its 10pm and maan went 3 in the afternoon... maan knock at the door which is new to bindiya,, its his house, he has a key of his cottage so why knocking the door?

bindiya: maan tum knock q kar rahe ho,, ye to tumhara cottage hain aur tum to koi maid nahi rakhte,, to before maan can answer geet open the door...

geet: maan aap agaye, main kitn fikar kar rahi thi apko pata v hain? aise gusse me v koi jata hain kya... she continue her blabbering but soon stop to see aadi and LADY (bindiya)... umm ye kon hain?

bindiya want to answer her but stopped by maan...

maan: geet pehle andar to aane do,, 10 mins se tumhari nautanki dekh raha hu, aur guest aaye to unhe andar bulake chai paani punchte hain, itna to janti ho na, ya ye v kisine nahi sikhaya...
geet was hurt by maan's statesments,, she was worried but all she got taunt and insult infront of a stranger... bindiya and aadi was a silent spectator of the whole picture... both can see the hurt geet, her face was concerned before and now its showng hurt...
geet welcome bindiya and aadi to the small living room... and she goes to prepare some food for them, she was hungry too cause she didn't had her lunch, was waiting for maan to back and she can apologise for her behavour...

maan came to his room, some where he was feeling bad for talking like this to her but the graet EGO is big... maan comes to the living area some time later to join bindiya and to watch geet ofcourse...

bindiya: maan aage kya karna hain,, main aise tumhare ghar me nahi reh sakti ye sirf tumhari musibat badhayega...

maan: bindiya maine tumse pehle v kaha hain tum meri zimmedari ho, aur tum yehi rahogi... main jaldi ye sab nipta dunga aur hum delhi wapas chale jayenge...
geet was silently listening their conversation and wondering who is she... and relation she have with maan... they are quite comfatable with each other...geet's mind was clouded by confusion...

geet brings the food on the dinning table,,, all 3 comes there and seated,, geet serve them food but she herself didn't have that was seen by the 3...

aadi: ye kya geet tum khana nahi khayogi? ajao hamare sath tum v baith jao...

geet: nahi aadi bhai, main nahi kahungi... mera matlab maine pehle hi khana kha liya tha... aap sab dinner karlo main apne room me ja rahi hu... mujhe neend arahi hain...

she goes from there,,, but her face was dull clearly indicating she didn't eat anything... now maan was feeling guilty by behaving like this... so he decided to talk to her and resolve all the thing becoz if she didn't eat how can he enjoy the food...

maan knock the door of geet;s room that was unlocked...

maan: geet, geet,, main janta hu tum abhi tak soyi nahi... kya main andar asakta hu...

geet: maan aap yaha q aaye,, aap thak gaye honge aur apke guest v aaye hain, wo kya kya sochenge aap aise chale aaye, aur mujhe neend arahi hain so plsss kal baat kare...

maan came forward and rest his finger on geet lips...

maan: bas karo geet, tumhe jhoot bolna nahi aata tumhari ankhe sarii sacchai bol deti hain, to jhoot bolne ki kosish v mat karna,,, tumhe neend kaise asakti hain jab k bhuke pet tumse kuch nahi hota... tumne kuch nahi khaya na... to waha se q chali aayi? hmm bolo...

geet was listening his words but couldn't saw in his eyes...

geet: maan plss aap jayiye yaha se, mujhe bhook nahi hain so maine nahi khaya isme konsi badi baat hain,, aur wo aadi bhai n bindiya aapka intezarkar rahe hain aur guest ko intezar nahi karwana chahiye yehi sikhaya gaya hain mujhe...

maan can feel how much hurt she is with his words...

maan: geet,,,,,, i m sorry...

MAAN SINGH KHURANA never said sorry to anyone in his life... but geet, hmm she is special...

maan: i know main kuch jayda hi bol gaya,, subha v mujhe utna gussa nahi karna chahiye tha but geet i m really sorry... tab mujhe bindiya ki yaad agayi thi aur abhi v uski halat acchi nahi thi aut tum sawal pe sawal kar rahi thi to mujhe gussa agaya...
now its geet's anger boiled, she was worried for for.. thats why she didn't have anything and what

she got to face an angry maan and his taunt and now to make the scene more disaster he mention about bindiya...

geet: ohhh to main sawal pe sawal kar arhi thi,,, dopaher se aapki tension me bhuki pyasi baithi rahi k kab aap ayoge aur kab main apse maafi mangu, lekin nahi galti to meri hain... mujhe aapki fikar karni hi nahi chahiye na, aapke liye to itne saare log hain aur aapko meri fikar q hogi main thodi na kuch lagti hu aapki... main to ek bojh hu na jo aapke sar se utre to aapko shaanti mile... main chatter box hu... laparbah, jisse tameej nahi, hain na? aur pura din aapki fikar k liye mujhe kya mila firse aapki taane,, main kaisi hu meri parbarish kaise huyi hogi,,, she held his collar and said subha kya kaha tha aapne main kaisi ladki hu... huh aap kya jaane main kaisi hu, kabhi aapne jaane ki kosis v ki? kya huya mere sath, nahii aapko to charity karni thi to bacha liya mujhe us gundo se, mere ravan jaise bhai se aur ban gaye mahatma...

geet was crying but didn't stop her tears and on the other hand maan was having tears in his eyes... how much she is hurt that he can see in her face...
geet: aapko mere character pe shaq hain na, socha jo ladki ek ladke ko kamre m aane de wo to jarur,,,,,,,,, chiii,, maine to aap pe sirf varosa kiya, aapnemeri jaan bachai thi aur mujhe ye sab samajh nahi aata... main kabhi kisi ladke k kareeb gayi hi nahi... lekin aapko to laga,,,, isse to accha hota aap mujhe milte hi na us din.. na hi aap mujhe bachate na main yaha aati. isse accha hota us din veerjii mujhe jaan se hi maar dete...

maan: GEETTT...

that is enough for maan...he can accept a murder charge but geet's death he can't hear it anymore,, he was here coz he want to see the old bubbly geet but this hurt geet he couldn't tolerate...

precap: bindiya and geet...

i hope ye ss aap sabko accha lag raha hoga,, as i m really in writing all this o m sure im pathetic in it,, but thanks to all he ppl who press the like button, and their lovely cmnts has motivated me to continue this...

guys i have a problem with adding pics here, don't know how to upload in it as m new to IF, help me plsss...

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meena..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

iam first

awesome

feeling bad for geet

reveal who is bindiya soon pls

cont soon

waiting for next

Edited by meena.. - 14 years ago

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tich.1990mg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: meena..
iam first
awesome
feeling bad for geet
reveal who is bindiya soon pls
cont soon
waiting for next

hey meena u r 1st one 👏👏,,,, dear bindiya's part need some more part so have faith on me plsss 😊😊

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bella39

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

awesome!! waiting 4 nxt update..please update soon & pm me plz

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tich.1990mg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

thank u friends for ur support,,,, next update in some mins...

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tich.1990mg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

SIRF MERE LIYE PART 7

Maan: GEETTT...

geet looked at him blanky... why he is over reacting so much, she is nothing to him today or tommorow she have to go,, least she know what place she has to him... and who care about tommorow...

Maan in his angry tone: geet tum kuch v kehne se pehle nahi sochti na,, tumhe nahi pata tum kya ho mere liye? subha v tumne socha nahi tha bolne se pehle aur abh bhi nahi... ek baar v nahi sochti tumhare accusations mujhpe kya effect padhti hain... huh bolo...

she looked at him still blankly, what place she have in his life how can she know... he never told her, more over their relation is 3days old... how can someone say like this... maan became softer and continue...

Maan: geet mujhe nahi pata tum mere baare kya sochti ho aur ye v janta hu k humara relation sirf 3 din ka hain, lekin trust me geet tum kaisi ho kya ho ye mujhe pehle din tumhari ankho me pata chal gaya tha... duniya maine dekhi hain lekin jo sacchai tum apne ankho me leke chalti ho wo kisike pass nahi dekha, sach kahu to kabhi kabhi apne aap se hi dar lagta hain kahi tumhe mujhse dur rakhne k chahat me apne aur kareed na leaayu aur tumhe v taqleef du...

maan came more close to her and slowly raise his fingers to her face and remove the tears with his thumb...

Maan: geet tum bohot khubsurat ho, aur jab tumhe pehli baar dekha tabhi najane kaise tumhari aur khichta chala gaya, sayad tumhari jagah koi aur hoti to usse v main bachata lekin apne ghar sayad hi lata, lekin tumse milke laga jaise we need each other... family se bicharne ka gam kya hota hain mujhe pata hain hala k ye baat alag hain k hamari judai apni family se thodi alag hain... subha jab tumne wo sab kaha mujhse wo saha nahi gaya so maine v overeact kar diya but yakeen mano geet main kabhi us iarade se tumhare kamre me nahi gaya tha,,,

this time geet rest her palm on maan's mouth,,, she want to hear maan's heart out but now he is pouring his gilt, her words that is not neccessary now...

Geet: maan mujhe aap pe varosa hain... wo ye sab maine apne frustations me keh diya... plss i m sorry about the morning...

maan slightly noded his head...and hold her hand...

Maan: i m sorry too geet... mujhe waise baat nahi karni chahiye thi...

geet too noded her head..

.Maan: umm dinner karle, tumne kuch nahi khaya aur mujhe bhook lagi hain...

geet was thinking about maan's words, each n every word was ringing like a bell in her mind and unknowingly she was smiling...aadi n bindiya saw this,, and he gave a sweet smirk to maan to which he passess a angry killing look... all 4 settle in the table and began with the food... now its turn to introduce the two lady... maan become a lil tensed which is unlike him and geet noticed it and thought may be he doesn't want to introduce them...

Maan: geet ye bindiya hain aur bindiya ye geet...

bindiya: maan naam to pehle hi pata chal gaya kuch aur batao iske bare me, kaha se aayi kya karti hain and more important yaha tumhare sath kya kar rahi hain? maid to nahi lagti...

that was BLOW

geet looks at him and said: hii bindiya... main sociology me masters kar rahi hu delhi university se...ye rahi qualification ki baat aur yaha maan k sath hu wo inho ne meri jaan bachayi thi aur yaha lee aaye... unhe kuch kaam hain to main v yaha unke sath ruki hu, baad me ek sath delhi chale jayenge aur main apni study puri kar sakungi...

bindiya aadi and maan looks at her in aww... she is well educated and lived in delhi how come he never saw her... (puri delhi dekhi hogi ye jaruri to nahi, thodi na 10 eyes leke ghumta hoga)...

Geet; aur tum? maan ne naam k alawa kuch nahi kaha...

bindiya smiled at her politely and hold maan's hand: hum bachpan k dost hain geet, ek sath badhe huye... aur delhi me rehte the...

Geet look at the hold: THE? matlab ab nahi rehte aur yaha tum kya kar rahi ho? maan to kaam se aaye honge but tum?

bindiya: nahi geet maan kaam k liye nahi mere liye yaha aaya hain...

ok no chappal plss. cliff hanger accha lagta hain :) .

more to come about geet and bindiya...

bechari bindiya sabki curosity badha rahi hain but ek baat batani hain... reality is bigger and plss be ready to get the SHOCK which is coming soon...

SORRY FOR ALL THE MISTAKE I MADE WHILE WRITING THIS,, EK BAAR V CHECK NAHI KAR PAAYI,, WAITING FOR UR PRECIOUS COMMENTS...

Edited by tich.1990mg - 14 years ago