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Maan:are main to vul hi gaya, geet ko kapre dene the,, chalo abb de deta hu...
at the other hand geet continue her blabbering and cursing session...
Geet:khota mujhe room me vej k abhi tak khud nahi aaya... aab main kya pehnu,, plss babji madad karo... chal geet jab tak wo dust danav nahi aata tab tak ek showe le lete hain... maan ayenge to knock to karenge, fir main unhe dress bahar chodne ko keh dungi aur unke jaane k baad bahar aake lelungi... wahh kya idea hain, sabash puttar...
geet patted her shoulder in appreciation...and goes to bathroom but before that she switched on the radio in full volume... (akhir bathroom tak song ana chahiye na)
aap sun rahe hain 98.3fm, aur main apna fav RJ rohit,, to aaj k haseen din ki haseen suruyat iss gane so ho to kaisa rahe,, main manta hu old id goild,, to aap me se kon kon mere baat se sehmat hain? give me ur view though ur calls but abhi kliye pehle suniye ye gana,,,,,,
Hmm hm hm hmm hmm hmm
haan, kya kaha?
Gum hain kisi k pyar me dil subah shaam
par tumhe likh nahi paayu main uska naam,,
haaye raam, haaye raam...
kuch likhaa?
Gum hain kisi k pyar me dil subah shaam
par tumhe likh nahi paayu main uska naam..
haaye raam, haaye raam..
maan goes to his cupboard and search for something that fit geet easily but all he can found a faded jeans and long white kurta,, so he went to geet's room along with the cloths... at first maan knock the door but nobody open it,, for sometime he called her name and then bang on the door but getting no response he decided to break the door, he was scared for some reason, like something might happen to geet...but to his luck door was not fully locked and his one bang was enough for the broken door... at 1st point all he can only concentrate on the volume of the radio,, he enter geet's room and at same time geet comes out from the bathroom in the bathrob...
geet was shocked to see maan infront of her in that state,, she is just in a bathrob and a man seeing her like that, is not her culture at all...maan was hell shocked to see geet like this but beside that he was surprise to see how beautifull she is...the innocence of her face attract maan, and he unknowingly started walking at her... and geet automatically started walking backward till then she hit the wall... now she is trapped between the wall behind and maan's rock solid chest...
socha hain ek din mainuse milke
keh daloon apne sab haal dil ke
aur kardoon jeevan uske hawale
phir chod de chaha apna banale
main to uska re hua deewana
aab to jaise bhi mera ho anjam
Ho gum hain kisi k pyar me dil subah shaam
Par tumhe keh nahin paaon main uska naam
Haaye raam haaye raam...
geet's breath became heavy and maan lost his breath in her sweet essence... her flowery scent and fruity shampoo made the room's atmosphere intoxicating... he became too close to geet that he can listen rapid heartbeat... maan was just in vest and track pant,,, his well built body and muscles was making geet weak on her knees... all she can want just feel him in her... the musculing scent, the aftershave was making the atmosphere more vunarable for geet... this kind of sensation was new for her,, she is educated but never in her life she came close to any man...
maan's finger goes its own way to her wet locks,, and his eyes travel from her nervous eyes to trembling lips,,he just want to captured the juicy lips into hips in a eternal kiss...
Chaya hain tumne jis bawri ko
woh bhi sajanwa chaahe tumhi ko,,
naina uthaae to pyaar samjho
palke jhukaa de to ikraar samjho
rakhti hain kab se chupa chupa ke
kyaa?
apne hotho pe piya tera naam
hao gum hain kisi ke pyar me dil subha shaam
par tumhe likh nahi paaon main uska naam
ho gum hain kisi ke pyar me dil subha shaam
par tumhe likh nahi paaon main uska naam
haaye raam haaye raam
the song has finished and geet come out from the trance and saw the proxcimity,, she want to come out from the room and she want to go somewhere that no one can find her at this moment,, she hit herself mentally for being so close to a man...especially to Maan...
Geet: umm hmm wo main,,
she was having difficulty with words... and top of that maan's eyes that was ovserving her every move was just making geet more nervous...
Maan: hmm,
Geet: maan
both came back to reality...Maan doesn't want to embaressed her...
Maan :geet wo main tumhare liye kapre laya tha,, ye lo...
and gave her the kurta and jeans... and geet took it hurriedly and went to bathroom to change... but when she saw the dress she fumed in ager...
she comes out from the bath room in that state only to amused maan...
Geet: ye kya hain,,, itna loose, faded main kaise pehnungi... mujhe abhi suits chahiye...
Maan: geet abhi ye pahen lo maine kaha na baad me la dunga...
but geet to geet hain,,,, she just come close to him without thinking anythimg,, mujhe abhi chahiye,, aur aap mere kamre kaise aaye,, hawww aapne mera room k door tod diya... aapko pata nahi ek ladki k room me aane se pehle knock karna chahiye... nahi aapka irada to kuch aur hi tha... hain na... ek ladki kamre kaise v reh sakti thi, aapko sharam naam ki koi chese nahi hain na? aap sare mard aise hi hote ho...
she continue her cursing sesssion without knowing the effect on maan and what will be the consequence...and hearing geet's assult maan became furious... because he can tollerate anything but not this kisnd of rubbish talk...
Maan: GEETTT... tumhe kuch samaj v araha hain tum kya bake ja rahi ho...tum mujh pe shaq kar rahi ho.. mere niyat pe... agar mujhe karna tha main bohot pehle kar chuka hota aur tum kuch nahi kar paati...aur jaha tak knock karne ki baat hain maine kiya tha,, tumhara naam v pukara lekin tum bahar nahi aayi aur aati kaise suna hota to na... jabke tumne volume itna kar rakkha tha... aur ha geet main to ek ladka hu lekin tum to ladki ho tum to ruk sakti thi,, aur jab tumne mujhe dekha tab chilla sakti thi,, lekin tumne aise nahi kiya... ek ladki ki izzat kya hoti hain, sayad tumse behtar main samajh sakta hu lekin wo tum nahi samjhogi, bolne se pehle thoda soch liya karo geet...
somewhere geet can feel that maan's words were not just words,, he was in great pain when he said all this,, and now she is feeling ashamed of her words,, she was so embaressed that she blabbered all these...
maan goes to his gym to practise thai chi,,,, actually apna varas nikalne,, uff gussel maan kitna hot lagta hain...
geet comes to the gym and begin to say something but maan didn't let her complete...
maan goes from there as he was geeting mad at her...
PRECAP: none,,,, will updating in next some hrs if i get some like as well as cmnts ...and plsss do tell me where i can improve, and all the mistakes ad what do u want to see in next updates...
plsss do tell me how it is wih ur likes and coments...
sorry for all the spelling and grm mistakes...
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SIRF MERE LIYE PART 5
Maan goes to aadi's place... he was so much frustated but doesn't know why he is feeling like this...he knows it that geet is a girl who doesn't think before saying something,, so why he is feeling like this...
Aadi: maan tu yaha, is waqt, hum to shaam ko milne wale the...accha andar aaja...
Maan: haa aadi, kuch aur v discuss karna tha usi baare me,, so jaldi agaya...
aadi: accha thik hain,, tune kuch khaya kya? abhi 3 baj rahe hain...
Maan: hmm nahi, socha tere sath karlu...
Aadi: chal aaja...
aadi is maan's best frnd, he knew him too well... he knew something must went wrong but choose to kept mum... after their late lunch which was usual for them they went to thier converstion of fulfilling the plan...
Maan:aadi main 7 baje haweli jayunga,, ofcourse piche se,, upar k kamre k bahar jyada guards nahi hain,,
Aadi:lekin haweli me enter hona muskil hoga... andar ki wajah bahar gaurds jayda hain... ye thakur itna v bewakoof nahi hain...
Maan: ha aadi mujhe pata hain lekin jaise v ho jana to padega... accha piche ek badha per hain na... usse right wale room me window se entry mil sakti hain,, kya bolta hain?
aadi looked at him amused but he knows him too well,, he knew it,, maan can go any extent to save bindiya and for his duty ofcourse...
Aadi: hmm,, ok then i'll handle other gaurds... niche wale sarab thoda jayda pasandkarte hain,, sooo...
he said with a smirk, to which maan too smirk...
Maan: aadi sambhal k,, ye thakur thoda jayda shiyana ban raha hain... so take care of it...
6.30 pm...
maan n aadi comes to their destination,,, thakur haweli...guards r all over...
Aadi: he he he he typical aadi style,, ye saala itna darpok hain,, itne saare pille paal k rakkhe hain... its gona be tough but mera sher tu hain na... ye thakur jitna gsurd lagale hume nahi rok sakta... chal main in namoono ko sambhalta hu... aadi is in a villagers costume...and maan goes backward...
Aadi: aare aap sab yaha ho,, thakur saab ne aap sabke liye khas intezar karwaya hain... chaliye...
1 of the gaurd: tum kon ho? tumhe to yaha pehli baar dekha... he looks at aadi with suspicious eyes...
Aadi: wo main to mamuli gaowala hu saab... kal hi bahar se matlab mere gaon se yaha aaya hu,, thakur saab itne vale insan hain, unhone mujhe yaha kaam dediya... accha aap sab sayad bohot thak gaye hain,, main sara intezam yaha v kar sakta hu, apki izazat ho to...
actually aadi was earning their faith on him...aadi let them involve with him and earn their attention that could give maan enough space and time to reach bindiya... and maan was clever enough of using the time...
Aadi: ye lijiye,, thakur saab ne sabse acchi sharab mangawaya hain aap sabke liye wo v bilayti wali... bohot acchi hai...
1 of the gaurd takes it and gulp the full bottle,,,
Aadi: ye to gaya,, pata nahi kab uthega..1 glass khafi hain ek din sone k liye abb isne bottle pee liya,,abb bhukto...
maan found a tree where he can climb and go straight to bindiya's room...maan jump from the window and land in dark room...
bindiya: kon hain? plss mujhe maarna mat... main kisise kuch nahi kahungi,, pls mujhe is andhere se nikalo... mujhe andhere se dar lagne laga hain,,, plss mujhe bahar nikalo... mujhe dar lagta hain... plss mujhe mat maaro... she was crying and that is heart wretchning for maan... he come forward but bindiya didn't let him touch her.. she continuously walked backward to the farthest corner of the room,, dark room...
Maan: bindiya main hu,, maan... dekho mujhe... ye lo mera hath pakro,, feel me bindiya,, main maan hu... tumhara maan...
bindiya at 1st didn't want to trust but maan's voice that is one thing she can never forget in her worst situation of life...she ran to him hug him with her life...
bindiya: maan, tum agaye, main janti thi... maine insab se kaha v jab mera maan ayega tab sabki jaan lelega... ye sab mujh pe bohot torture karte hain... fir v maine apna complain wapis nahi liya... main janti thi jab tak tum ho mujhe kuch nahi hoga,, maan... she bitterly cried and cling to maan,,, maan too can't stop his silent tears...
Maan: ha bindiya jab tak main hu tab tak tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga main... abb chalo yaha se... main tumhe lene aaya hu... reality hit her... and looks at him unbelievingly...
bindiya: maan tum yaha aaye ho kisine tumhe dekha to nahi? q aaye itna risk leke,, kuch ho jata to... to mera kya hota maan... tum jante ho na...
maan: to tumhe yaha sadne deta... in rakshosho k bich... nahi bindiya, tum meri jimmedari ho... abb baate band karo chalo yaha se... aur maan singh khurana ko risk thoda jayda pasand hain... bindiya smiled at his statement... its the one line he used to say in their childhood...
they make their way to balcony of the room... but one of the gaurd saw them and before he can shout or move maan was beside of him... his one palm stop the gaurd to speak and ond hand smoothly hold his neck that could bend now and now he is dead now... but 2nd gaurd came and hold from back.. maan punch him on his stomac with his elbow and then a punch on his face... before he can do anything he was gone to death with maan's gun which was with silencer... maan hold bindiyas hand and jump from the balcony with the harnest he manage to carry.. thanks to his trecking and trainings... they reach to the ground and make a call to aadi...
aadi makes his way to maan and bindiya,,, bindiya hug him and he too got emotional to see the state in bindiya...
PRECAP: ahem ahem geet ka reaction kya hoga bindiya ko dekh k?
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