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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
awesome
but u stopped near cliffhanger😡
but y maan came to help bindiya
cont soon
eagerly waiting for next
keep writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Oh grt
u left us in hanger
oh no
pls upd soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: meena..

awesome

but u stopped near cliffhanger😡
but y maan came to help bindiya
cont soon
eagerly waiting for next
keep writing
thanks for pm


hehehe kyun har cliff hanger jaruri hota hain...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinu.jindal

Oh grt
u left us in hanger
oh no
pls upd soon


will update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
SIRF MERE LIYE PART 8

"nahi geet maan kaam k liye nahi mere liye yaha aaya hain" this line continuously ringing in geet's mind...
geet doesn't want to think negetive but her mind was playing its own game where her heart doesn't want to believe all this,,, those affection care guilt she saw in maan's eyes can't be false or her illiussions... what she saw sometime before was love or just care for her? geet is confused now... but in only 3 days its impossible to have such kind of LOVE,,, she thought its only an attraction... bcz in her whole life she never came close to anyone...and maan? did he really confess his love or its just his apologies... but can't be... but who is this bindiya... and what relation she have with him... if maan's word was his silent confession of his love... she is hell in confusion... and on the top this bindiya is making no sense... she didn't tell her who is she just said maan is here for her... but why?and why no one was clearing th stuffs?


flasback of some time before when all were there at dining table...


bindiya: geet maan kaam k liye nahi mere liye yaha aaya hain...

geet: tumhare liye? but kyun??

maan: hmm bindiya raat bohot hogayi hain tum jaake aram karo.. u need some rest...
apne pe thoda dhyan do... jao...

bindiya: hmm... gdnight everyone...

maan & aadi: gdni8...

geet: umm gdni8 bindiya...

aadi: main v chalta hu kal ayunga... maan aage kya karna hain ye hmm kal decide karenge...

maan: hmm...

all goes to their respected room...

flashback end


geet doesn't know what to do what to think in just 3 days how can be a total stranger became so important to her... all the thought negetive positive ust clouded her mind... and she dosses off...

next morning


geet wake up only to see bindiya over there holding a traywith tea and biscuits...

geet: ohh tum kyun aayi main breakfast banane ja hi rahi thi...

bindiya: abb iski jarurat nahi maan aur aadi to kab ka nikal gaye...

geet: kyaaa??? bina nasta kiye?

she made a cute complaining face and cursed herself being so careless...

geet: buddhu itne der koi sota hain kya, dekha na wo chale v gaye bina breakfast kiye wo v sirf teri wajah se...

bindiya smiled and said: geet don't worry maan ne breakfast kar liya tha, maine uske liye pasta banaya tha usse bohot pasanad hain na... aur itne din baad uske liye kuch karne ka mouka mila warna,,,,,,,,,,, there was a sorrow in her voice and geet noticed that... though she is angry with her 1st maan is here only for her and now this pasta and breakfast making her crazy...


geet: umm bindiya tum agar delhi me rehti thi to yaha kya kar rahi ho... aur maan kyun aaye hain yaha...

bindiya: ye bohot lambi kahani hain geet kisi aur din bataungi...

geet: nahi mujhe aaj hi sunni hain.. aur hamare pass karne ko kya hain... why don't tell me from the begining...

but before bindiya could uttar a word aadi was there,, sorry girls for disturbing u... but bindiya tumhe maan bbula raha hain plss come right now...

bindiya knew its realy serious so she stands up... and goes with aadi...
aadi take her to thier secret place... where maan is waiting for her...

bindiya: hii maan... kya huya achanak yaha bula liya? sab thik hain na?

maan: bindiya tum geet ko abhi kuch nahi bologi.. waqt aane par main khud bataunga...


bindiya: but maan she need to known na... i m sure she is not just a FRND...

maan; pls bindiya ek baar meri baat sun lo abhi k liye tum aur ye baby mere liye important rakhte ho...

bindiya; lekin kab tak maan? kyun apni zindegi mere liye barbaad kar rahe ho... aur kitna kuch karoge mere aur id bacche k liye...

maan: sab kuch... jab tak main zinda hu sab kuch karunga... tum chaho ya na chaho is baby se mera ghehra rishta hain... ye tumhara aur,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
before he could complete his sentence a noise came from the door like some floower pot broke and to his misery there was standing GEET...




geet was shatter to listen the convo but can't do anything... she went maan's cottage with her shattered heart,, like million pieces around her haunting her the words but she couldn't react to them...


my heart is shattered
like a broken mirror n the sun
u can see the thousand sun
can't see them united
there will be shine more
but there is darkness behind
my heart is shattered
its have hollowness in the midnight
that couldn't reach light...
poem by me :)





thats it for now,,, i know again a short update...will update soon...

precap: what will be geet reaction... story will be unfold soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
wow.amazing..
cant wait to see geet's reaction.
continue soon.
thx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
awesome
cant wait to see geet reaction
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

sirf mere liye

part 9
geet went to her room... she was staring the sky blankly... all the word was making no link to her,, so she just blocked her mind to think anything...

aadi want to stop her so he called her but didn't get any attention...

aadi: maan geet to ruki nahi, maine kitni awaj lagayi but wo taxi leke chali gayi... sayad usne tumhari baat sunli...

maan: baat nahi aadi sirf adhi baat suni...

he was tensed and anyone can guess that,, his face becoming dark... its aadi and bindiya who can guess what is playing in his mind but can't give garantee that will be his last consent...

bindiya: abb kya hoga maan... geet ne adhi baat suni,, wo kya soch rahi hogi mere baare me,, more over tumhare baare me kya soch rahi hogi...

maan: tum logo ko is baat ki fikar karne ki jarurat nahi... ye main sambhal lunga... aadi tum comissnor sir ko phone karke bolo hum ready hain... bindiya ko jayda der aise rakhna thik nahi hoga,, wo log kabhi v hum tak pouch sakte hain... thakur ko abb tak pata chal gaya hoga bindiya mere sath hain so wo apni gandi chal chalna suru kar diya hoga... aur ha pata lagao ranjeet kaha hain... wo yaha se bhaag na nahi chahiye,, abb uske din kareeb arahe hain...

he looked at bindiya who has tears in her eyes... somewhere she knew its going to be hard, realy hard... but she can't forgot the hell she had lived once...her life is messed,, her baby is in danger... but the precious thing,,, her maan is in danger... this battle could be more dangerous for him... she can't afford to loose him... he is the only relation she have in this cruel world...

aadi knew it will be a difficult for maan as well as bindiya and himself... but in this mess there is another life involve,, who is innocent, pure at heart,,, and he loves her... his new found sister Geet, whom he doesn't want to get hurt in any chance not even in accident... but there is destiny, who always plays his own,, fate always has other plan...

aadi was thinking its his fault that geet was following them,, he is a cop and it was his duty to make all the plans and arrangements in secret,, that no one can unfold but geet, why its happening with her, what is her fault, she beleived maan and him, just blindly... but now she is hurt...

aadi: maan kya main ghar jaake geet se baat karu? wo thoda upset lag rahi thi so main soch raha tha,,,,,,,,

maan knew aadi really loved her as a sister and this time it will be good if he let him handle her...

maan: thik hain aadi tum jao, geet se baat karo main baaki ka matlab ranjeet ka intezam karta hu... aur ha bindiya ko v sath le jao ghar but dhyan se...

they reach home but without maan... maan was still in their secret cottage... which was in the middle of the forest...

aadi straightly goes to geet's room... geet was still standing in the balcony... and looking at the sky with a blank face... aadi coughed to get her attention but geet didn't budge...

aadi: geet, kya huya? tum kya dekh rahi ho?

geet: dekh rahi hu meri zindegi mujhe aur kaha lejayegi... najane kabse chali ja rahi hu manzil ka kuch pata hi nahi chal raha... kabhi lagta hain sab kuch mil gaya mujhe, aur kabhi lagta hain reth ki jaise sab phichal (sliping) raha hain hatho se... pata nahi nahi bhai taqdeer mujhe aur kaha kaha lejayegi aur kya kya dikhayegi...maine chaha tha koi sirf mere liye bana ho, jo sirf mere liye soche mujhe apni zindegi banaye, lekin isme vul gayi thi k ye to sambhab hi nahi,, kyun k mere taqdeer me to mere liye kabhi kuch tha hi nahi... aur sayad kabi hoga v nahi...

aadi: geet kabhi kabhi hum jo sochte hain jo dekhte hain wo sach nahi hota... taqdeer v hume wohi dikhati hain jo hume lagta hain ye humara hain... agar tum apne zindegi me negetive sochogi to negetive hi hoga... kabhi kabhi ankho k samne sacchai hote huye v hum nahi dekhte aur kabhi samne jo dikhta hain usse hi sach samajh lete hain aur apne taqdeer ko koshte hain,,,, lekin jab hume sacchai pata chalta hain bohot der hojati hain... apne hatho se hum sab barbaad kar dete hain... to kuch v karne ya sochne se pehle sikke k dusre pehlu ko v dekh lena...

geet was in deep thought after hearing aadi's words...and on the other hand bindiya who was listening to all this from far was in dilema... in one hand maan who is only life she have and other hand geet who has slowly becoming the life of maan... she want to talk to geet told her everything but she couldn't do anything... maan will not allow to do so and it will be not good to intefare between them...

precap: the big fight between maaneet and the truth...

ok guys so its up... hmm in next or next 2 update story will be unfold fully... so hows it????? i know no maaneet moment but there will be some maaneet moment very soon... will update one more part tonight...

sorry for all the mistake, grm and spl...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
awesome
precap is scaring
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
loved it..
awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏
y u r going slow in ff
post soon an update till 29

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