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this is one heart rending ff
i had goosebumps all over while reading
update soon
waiting
hope bindiya finds a man who will truly love her
i hope sapna was alive
would have loved to see maan bindiya n sapna scenes

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though it had bite me but its so cute,, i'll take it...
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Originally posted by: shruti_ms

this is one heart rending ff

i had goosebumps all over while reading
update soon
waiting
hope bindiya finds a man who will truly love her
i hope sapna was alive
would have loved to see maan bindiya n sapna scenes



thank u so much dear,, wish i can make her alive but 😭😭
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part 25...

their eyes met and in fraction of second they exchange their look like assurence each other... and next moment everyone found ranjeet lying on the floor in pool of blood...

geet bite ranjeet hand and make herself free and in the mean time maan hit the trigger to them, geet was out of his grip and the bullet hit his heart, preicing it...

everyone was dumbstuck with the event that took place in the few min,, no one could do any thing,,, he is ACP MAAN SINGH KHURANA, if he did this that mean no one can say or point a finger towards him, he always done his work with perfection whether its right or wrong no one can found a tit of fault in it,, so was this case...

geet ran to maan and hugged him but soon maan's winning moment came crushed down when she fell on his arms unconscious...

aadi and all force came downstairs where the wedding was suppoos to be done,,, aadi took charages of everything...

aadi: geet ko kya huya?

maan: pata nahi aadi wo aise hi,,,

aadi: maan khoonnn,,,, geet k muh khoon nikal raha hain,, both look at each other...

maan: aisa nahi hosakta,, geettt tum aisa nahi kar sakti,, uthhoo,,

aadi: maan usse doctor k pass leja, i think bohot time beet gaya hoga, jaldi kar...

maan took her in his arms and make his way to the hospital...

after some few hrs,,,

doc: acp humne sare poison wash out to kar diye but difficulty abb bhi hain,,,, she is really critical, poison liye huye 3hrs beet chuke the jab aap yaha usse laaye...

maan while his eyes looking at geet from the mirror: wo thik to hojayegi na...

doc sighed: main aap ko jhooti tassalli nahi de sakta,,, i m sorry to say Mr. Khurana agle 48 hrs me usse hosh nahi aata to hum geet ko hamesha k liye kho denge...

maan sank in the couch beside him, doc patted his back: hume umeed nahi chodni chahiye...

maan was in all tears... bindiya came there with aadi...

bindiya: ye sab kaise huya maan? geet kaisi hain?

maan kept mum,, aadi knew he will not utter a word so he goes to the doctor to know the details,, some time later he came and told bindiya evrything...maan completely broke down and hugged bindiya,,,

maan: wo thik hojayegi na? main usse nahi khona chahta,, wo meri zindegi hain...kyun kiya usne aisa, geet ne mere baare me ek baar bhi nahi socha...

bindiya: wo tumse bohot pyar karti hain maan, aur tumhare bina wo kisi aur ki nahi hona chahti thi...

maan: usse mujhpe varosa nahi tha kya, usne socha bhi kaise main usse kuch hone dunga... i'll not forgive her...

aadi was far from them, crying silently, once again he is in the same position where he could lost his only sister, last time destiny didn't gave him a chanch to save his gudiya but this time how could destiny be so cruel...

after 28 hrs, maan was in the same position, beside geet's bed, she lying like lifelessly, pale... maan was tired his pain cause of that shot and the head and hand injury was making him weak,, doctor wanted to take him away from her but they couldn't,,, as maan was so abdament that no one can take away him from his geet...

maan: geet kab tak aise saja dogi mujhe? plss geet mujhe chodke mat jao, dekho na sab chale gaye, sapna mamma dad, sab abb tumbhi mujhe akela chodna chahti ho... main nahi jee sakta tumhare bina, kya haal kar di hain tumne meri, dekho abb ek pal bhi tumhare bina jeena gabara nahi,,, tumne kaha tha na geet, zindegi ki har subah ek sath hogi aur har shaam ek sath khatam hogi, to fir kyun tum mujhe chodke jaana chahti ho, kyun? bolo na geet... kuch to bolo...

geet: main apna vada nahi vuli maan,,,,

geet was alive, how could she left her maan alone in the cruel world,,, she can die for maan so how can she not wake up for her maan from the deep slumber that called death,, death itself can't snacth her life from her as her life is someone else's,,, her maan... maan saw his angel wake up from the sleep,, he hugged her tight,,,

maan: kyun chali gayi thi geet mujhe chod ke, tum janti hona main tumhare bagair nahi reh sakta... fir kyun ye sab

geet: i m sorry maan. i m sorry... they were crying,,, and so was the nurses standing outside,,, aadi gave a side hug to bindiya who was in tears to see the love of them, that has the power to overcome death over life...

doctor came inside and chech her and he was amazed to see she all fine and ready to go home,he make her discharged paper,,but before that he call maan in his cabin...

doc: maan geet abb bhi thod weak hain so she needs lpts of rest and care and ofcourse love that i m sure u r gonna give her fully, he smiled at him...u can take her now...

they reached their cottage,, when they were entering bindiya stoopped maaneet to enter the house,, she goes from there and take a arti thali to do the arti of them..maan was holding geet in his arms,,,

maan: jaldi karo bindiya, ye itni bhi halki nahi jitni dikhti hain,,, aadi gave his typical laugh to which he got a deadly glare from geet,,, maan whisper in geet's ear,,, sach hi to kaha maine, tum utna halka nahi jitna dikhti ho, usse bhi kahi jayada halki ho,, phoolo ki tarha aur tumhe to aise main zindegi var utha sakta hu...

geet blushed furiously on his cmnt...bindiya places a kalash with rice and beside that a kumkum thal...

maan: ye sab karna jaruri hain? tum janti hona geet abhi bhi kammjor hain,

geet: maan main itni bhi kamjor nahi huyi, aap niche utariye mujhe....

bindiya: ye rasam hoti maan jo hume nibhana padta hain,, aunty hoti to wo ye karti but abhi main hu to tumhari bahen k naate main ye sab karungi... maan's face become sad on mentioning his mother's name... everyone knew how much he is missing them but life is hard we have to bear it... geet hold maan's hand and make way to to the house after doing all the rituals,, maan took her in his room as she was feeling tired...

maan make her lyied in his bed,,, but his face was showing anger anyone can make it,,, after geet settel there maan was leaving the room when geet hold him by his hand...

geet: kya huya maan,, aap achanak aise kyun hogaye, aur aapko bhi to rest chahiye... pata hain hospital k saare nurses keh rahe the k main bohot lucky hu k mujhe aisa pati mile jo mere liye itne pareshan the,, aur aap mere pass se hate bhi nahi itne ghante mere sath hain apni chot ki parwa na karte huye,,,,, she was smiling

maan: but tumhe kya farak padhta hain geet? tumhe to sirf apni padhi hain,,, main kya sochta hu, kya chahta hu tumhe kya fark padhta hain..

geet: ye sab aap kya keh rahe ho maan?

maan: mujhe takleef huyi ya na huyi tumhe to isse koi farak nahi padhta na akhir mere dard se tumhara kya vasta..

geet: vasta? aapke har takleef se mujhe vasta hain, apke har dard pe mujhe dard hota hain maan,,

maan: kyun dard hota hain geet?

geet: kyun ki main aapse pyar karti hu maan...

maan: nahi karti pyar tum mujhse geet,,, karti to ye sab nahi karti... geet is in confusion what he is trying to say... nahi karti pyar mujhse..

geet: kya kaha, main aapse pyar nahi karti? issi liye aur koi aur chuye mujhe ye gabara nahi, issi liye maine aapna jaan dena manjur samjha kisi aur ko apne aapko soupna gabara nahi samjha,,

maan: aur apni jaan leke mere liye pyar sabit kar rahi thi,, kabhi nahi socha mea kya hoga, main kaise jeeyunga?

geet can understand now what he wanted to say...

maan: kabhi nahi socha tume kuch hogaya to mera kya hoga,zinda laash banke reh jayunga main... geet put her hand on his mouth...but maan take it ,,,,, tum meri zindegi ho geet mout bhi tumhe mujhse dur nahi kar skati,, aur tumhe mujhpe yakeen nahi tha? ya varosa nahi huya mere pyar pe, main kaise tumhe kisi aur k hone deta... bhagwan ko bhi tumhe chune se pehle meri izazat leni hogi to insan ki kya aukad,,, geet is in tears to hear all this, se was in so much dilemma that she couldn't make it that maan will not allow a single hair touched by ranjeet...she was guilty but that time she couldn't think beyond it,,, she couldnn't let anyone touch her other than maan...

geet: maan main wo, mujhe laga k aap, mera matlab main utne time se waha thi, ranjeet mujhe agar chta to main nahi jee sakti thi, aur main aapki badnaami kabhi nahi banna chahti thi, main janti hu main galat thi, aapke pyar pe mujhe varosa tha lekin

maan: lekin kya geet? tumhe yehi laga na main time time pe nahi pouch payunga, aur poucha bhi to tumpe tumhare character pe believe nahi karunga,, geet was not having the courage to meet the questioning eyes of him... maan hold her from the waist,,,, TUM SIRF MERE LIYE BANI HO GEET, SIRF MERE LIYE,, KISI AUR NE HIMMAT BHI KI TUMHE AANKH UTHAKE DEKH NE KI YA TUMHE CHUNE KI, AAG LAGA DUNGA MAIN USSE, JALA DUNGA ISS DUNIYA KO, aur ye haq tumhe bhi nahi hain geet k tum mujhse apne aapko dur kar payo... rtumhari zindegi tumhari har dhadkan har sans SIRF MERE LIYE HAIN,,,,,,,,, ispe SIRF MERA HAQ HAIN... samjhi tum...

precap: sr hona chahiye ya post pone kar du? abhi geet weak hain na? but doc ne to kaha she needs lots of love wink... ok tell me what do u want...

ok thats it for now, next part may be tonight or tom mrng hehehe...

thank u so much guys,, for ur support... its all because of u guys that still m writing this as i thought it would be a os then i made it as ss,, and now some of my frnd is telling me to make it as ff of atleast 50 parts, don't know what to do,,

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update geet btook poison but saved now and maan aNGRY BUT GEET CALM HIM DO NEXT SOON
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!maan's pain s well shown in dose words...
nw she has to make him believe dat she trust him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...
maan's luv n concern for geet is beautiful...
hmmm waiting for the SR...
continue soon

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