1st ff on maaneet SIRF MERE LIYE THREAD 1 (link 2) - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb part dear...
Geet is in Danger...
But i m sure she will b saved..bcoz.. her MAAN is atill alive...
nd he can't let anybody harm his lyf...
plzzz plzzz plzzz update next part soon...
waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 23
hope Maan reaches Geet soon and saves her from that scumbag...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

great update
do update sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sirf mere liye



part 24

brij: wo usse leke chala gaya,,, jaldi jao maan saab geet ko uss aadmi se bachalo, tum agar usse bacha sake main samjhunga mere paapo me se kuch maaf hogaya, sayad tumhe ye sab batane k liye hi abhi tak mujh me jan bachi thi,, abb jao maan saab...

maan wanted to take him hospital but before that brij's breath became heavy and that was his last breath...maan came out from the godown and found a tensed aadi standing over there...

aadi: maan tu thik hain na? geet kaha hain? maan ye khoon kiska? (as he was holding brij in his arm and he was in his lap)

maan: aadi ye geet ka bhai brij ka hain,,, ranjeet ne usse maar diya aur geet uske farmhouse pe hain, tu gadi me baith baki main baad me kehta hu...

they silently made their way to the car... maan told him everything and now he is driving the car in full speed...

they reach the farmhouse n waht they can see a beautifull house decorated in simple manner but maan knew it very well in what occasion they have made this kind of arrangement..

inside the house...

geet was in a room, sitting in a dark corner of the room... scared,, crying ,,, with a lil hope that may be maan would come and take her away with him... but her mind was playing with her, will he believe her, will he accept her, will he love her like before,,, she was here with that monster for quite a time, will he able to believe the truth which will no one can understand... what if he miss-understand her, what if he didn't believe her, what if he think she is not worthy of his love... akhir seeta ko bhi to agni pariksha huya tha na...

there was knock on the door, but she didn't budge from her place... ranjeet came with the spare key,,, behind him there was few men who was carrying dresses and jwellery,,,,

ranjeet: geet tum waha kya kar rahi ho,, he goes near her and whisper, kuch hi palo me tum meri hojayogi geet, fir ye darna darana sab khatam...

but geet went far corner and didn't let him touch her, she was treating him like some filth was touching her,,,and that made ranjeet furious, he held her from her hair and pulled her up,,

ranjeet: maine tumhe rani banana chaha aur tum mujhise dur bhaag rahi ho,,, dekho geet main tumhare liye kya kya laaya hu, ye saare jwellery, kapre sab tumhare liye, tumhe jo chahiye pahenlo...

geet: mujhe kuch nahi chahiye,, tum jaise ghatiya admi k liye main taiyar hu, huh kabhi nahi...

ranjeet: taiyar to tumhe hona padega geet warna main,,,,,, tumhe taiyar karr dunga, and beleive me geet abhi tak to maine tumhe ek baar bhi nahi chuaha aur tumhara ye halat hain lekin tumhe taiyar karne k liye main tumhe chu bhi sakta hu, bina shaadi kiyee, aur wo tumhare liye itna accha nahi hoga...

geet became pertified, she agreed to do all the "shringar" that usually a would be bride do for his husband... how an she let him touch her, he is a monster and she loves maan before her life...

ranjeet went from there and geet cried her heart out holding her knee in her chest...

there was only few people, but that few was very powerfull as therethe panchayat who was the chamchas of thakur,,,, and thakur father of ranjeet himself...geet was taken to the mandap,, she sat beside ranjeet motionlessly,, he whisper in her ear: bas geet aur kuch waqt fir tum hamesha k liye meri, aur koi kuch nahi kar payega,,

outside the bunglow maan and aadi having a great war with ranjeet's men,,,, slowly one by one maan done with all the guard who was standing outside,, some get head injury so some get their final good bye by breaking their bones of the right place...and right then maan make his way to the hall...

some one came behind and wanted to hit aadi with a sword but maan took it in his palm but that slide down by cutting his palm...maan sit on his knees and and powerful punch of him was enough for the man to hold his breath out of his mouth...

aadi: maan tu andar ja baki k force agaye hain, we will take care of them... maan went inside with a revolver in his hand... when he entered the mandap ranjeet's men took the gun to shoot him but before that maan shot him a bullet,,, that noise echoed in the hall and everyone looked him him petrified to his state and the rage in his eyes to see the picture infront of him...

ranjeet saw him, and so was everyone,, maan's eyes were spitting fire... the moment geet saw him her face became lighten but still there was some pain inside...

ranjeet: tum yaha but before he conclude anything maan hold his throat like any insect in his palm that was bleeding furiously...geet's eyes were there where the blood was oozing out, she was in pain but for him...thakur came from behind

thakur: ye kya kar rahe ho,,,, sasura humrihi ghar me aake humrihi ladke ka gala daba rahe ho, tumka hum chodenge nahi, he took his gun but maan make ranjeet infront of him...

maan: chalao thakur, aaj tumhare ladke ka anteem sanskar tumhare hatho se hi kara deta hu,,,

maan was holding ranjeet from his back and his one arm was hanging around his neck that he could break any moment... kya huya thakur hath kanp rahe hain, itne zindegi badbaad karne se pehle to kabhi nahi kanpi...

panchayat: ACP saab usse chod do, ye tumhara delli nahi ye hamara dhandiwaal hain jaha hamara kaida kanoon chalta hain,,,,

maan: kanoon, aur tumhara ? tum to iss thakur k chmache ho,,,

panchayat head: ACPPP

maan: chillayo mat sayad tum jante main kya kar sakta hu panchayat,,, aur kanoon to mujhe mat hi shikhayo to accha hain, meri baheno ko jab ye ranjeet apni basna ka shikar bana raha tha tab nahi tha tumhara kanoon aur abb iss ladki ko,

panchayat head: tumhare pass koi sabut nahi hain

maan: ye samne khari meri sabut, meri geet

panchayat: tumhara rishta najayaz hain,,, ek binbihayi ladki jo 3 hafte se bina koi ristey se tumhare sath thi usse tum gabah banayoge? tum vul rahe ho acp aaj bhi tumhara kanoon hum panchayato k upar jaane se kanpta hain kyun wo agar hamari baat nahi manega to kal tumhara saher aag me jal jayega,,,,

maan throw ranjeet away but he was hloding his revolver infront of him...

maan took his hand and fill geet's mang with his blood...

maan: LO HOGAYI WO MRS. MAAN SINGH KHURANA... abb naahi ye rishta najayaz raha aur naahi tum sab iss ristey ko jhukla sakoge,,,

geet was standing there with shocking eyes, all the event were so eventual for her, so sudden that she couldn't make what is happening... but inside she was happy, she was relieved, she was proud to be say that she is MRS. GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

maan was looking at geet at the panchayat and ranjeet took the chance to hold geet and make her to his pray but geet souted: MAANNN

their eyes met and in fraction of second they exchange their look like assurence each other... and next moment everyone found ranjeet lying on floor in pool of blood...

geet bite ranjeet hand and make herself free and in that time maan hit the trigger to them, geet was out of his grip and the bullet hit his heart, preicing it...





ok i know its a short one but i'll update really soon,, and thanks for the likes and comment... love u all ❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
finally maan came..
luvd the part where maan filled her maang..
Superb..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
finally ranjit is dead
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
wow maan saved geet n filled her maang...
gud to c ranjeet dead..
luved it..
continue soon

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