Thread2 Maan Proposes Geet Disposes [Link/T3/152]

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Seher

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Posted: 13 years ago

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mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Superb prt,d transition is describd nicely
poor maan armywaale se sbji wala...vardan too deserve his share of happiness..awsome prt

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LuvScooby

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I like this...every life and story requires an interlude to bring about change, something new. This interlude is a perfect example of integrity and flavor of this story remaining static while your story telling is dynamic

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Bye_Bye_if

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Posted: 13 years ago

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Amazing interlude !!

Really loved your switch between static and dynamic - you related them very well to the changes in their lives...

So Geet is a bit more matured now!

I loved the last few lines about the sabziwala and finally Maan's entry ..

He's here at their house directly from his posting and looking for Geet ? Isnt it so opposite to his nature portrayed till now?

Pls update soon 😃

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: jazzerette

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: LuvScooby
I like this...every life and story requires an interlude to bring about change, something new. This interlude is a perfect example of integrity and flavor of this story remaining static while your story telling is dynamic

Loved your comment...😃so apt for Jazz and her story !