SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
hasini, awesome ff...liked reading all the parts till now..they were very interesting..each one was thoroughly gripping & entertaining...with every scene, the only thought in my head was, ab agge kya hoga...i liked how geet, maan married each other...whatever the situation was i'am happy they are married...you know i seem to like & enjoy, the silence, the khamoshi which exists in maan-geet's relationship... maan read geet's dairy...good for him..maan can read geet's thoughts on her face yeh bhi very good hai, aur issi wajah se tho maan married geet instead of channi...well irrespective of the fact that maan & chaani were supposed to tie the knot, but a untold, unsaid attractions was always there between maan & geet..the trust, love, attraction, always prevailed between the two..the khamoshi between maan geet is not disturbing, but it is pleasant...because one can feel the depth of love & feelings they have for each other, one can sense it in the silence existing between them too...liked the small accident as it brought the two of them together for a while at least..a very interesting fanfic...very well written...now why is channi here..i hope she does not create problems for maan geet...even if channi tries to create problems, then maan geet's khamoshi ka rishtha, ehsaas ka rishtha, would be greater then her own attempts...keep up the food work...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏please update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly...😊

P.S: PM me whenever you update..😊
Edited by Surya.Ravi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
hey you are back..
awesome beginning..
will read the rest and get back with my comments..
missed you
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Welcome back. Love it H. Brilliant story... Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Wonderful...

I happened to come by this story today and read it full on ... this is an unusual story and I love it. Love the childishness in Geet and the maturity in Maan...

I was quite sad when you said you would take over the garb of "just reader" but this new story surprised me and pleased me extremely..

Can I confess that I am a big fan of your writing.. I started with NY Times when I joined IF but I have mostly been a silent reader for ur stories... I loved Mr Iyer and Mrs Khurana too and was quite sad when you closed it. I love even the comments u leave in other writers' threads..

Looking forward to reading more from you😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
read this in one go and really enjoyed it
the courage and the guts of a village girl to go for what she wants was mind boggling
she may say that she did it for her sister, but i think curiosity played a large part in it
now that the guilt has set in, she will take time to realise that this was what she wanted
maan has accepted it, but waiting for to know her own mind
the diary entries were sweet and short, but wanted more elaborate info on what she saw
now that channi is there in the picture, hope it gives a push to her feelings - maybe jealousy
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
i feel tht may be chhani's arrival will create some tension but will lead them to come close even only in d talking bases
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
I think you forgot!
We had this long discussion on you wishing to go away for some time where you informed me of an impending SS-date 22nd Oct
After 10 days-TEN days, I get this Pm which reads, If interested!
I can't tell you how angry that made me😡
You thought I culd not be interested?😲
I am cross at you-for keeping me away from this beautiful story for so long😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
What an awesum hide n seek is gng on 😆😆😆
Loved their lil moment
Channi cuming
Lets c wat happens
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
lovely story. What comes out with Channi's arrival for Geet, possessiveness, awkwardness or guilt? What about Maan, what exactly is in his mind, what does he want her to acknowledge about the 23rd diary note? Loving them both a lot. It is becoming a habit to love your characters. Hasini, thanks for the PM. It was not on Fan fiction forum so I did not find it until the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Welcome back dear and loved the parts of your SS, hope to see you continuing your other ff soon.

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