SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66 - Page 10

Originally posted by: krati5

i feel tht may be chhani's arrival will create some tension but will lead them to come close even only in d talking bases

We'll see...I doubt the tension part though.😉. But I do want some momentum in their relationship, so hopefully it will work out for the best.

Thanks for stopping by.

Originally posted by: princess163

I think you forgot!

We had this long discussion on you wishing to go away for some time where you informed me of an impending SS-date 22nd Oct

After 10 days-TEN days, I get this Pm which reads, If interested!

I can't tell you how angry that made me😡

You thought I culd not be interested?😲

I am cross at you-for keeping me away from this beautiful story for so long😭

Actually princess, this is not that OS at all. This was written just to get some writing exercise out and seriously, I was not expecting any one to read this SS, given that this is a time worn tale, that so many FFs have already explored.

So don't be cross with me 😳, given that I only indulging myself by writing the SS and not really trying anything new with this. Hope you understand.
Thanks for reading and dropping a comment.

Originally posted by: pushpi

Kitne door kitne paas

One sentence sums it all...Thank for dropping by.

awesome updts & story
just luvd it
awww sweet torture to both
now theres an intruder to their silent luvstory - channi
hope ahe doesnt create any mu
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

Originally posted by: -afsha-

What an awesum hide n seek is gng on 😆😆😆

Loved their lil moment

Channi cuming

Lets c wat happens

Hide and Seek? Well that is that happens in most FFs...don't you think? 😆

Thanks for dropping by.

Originally posted by: ucompleteme

lovely story. What comes out with Channi's arrival for Geet, possessiveness, awkwardness or guilt? What about Maan, what exactly is in his mind, what does he want her to acknowledge about the 23rd diary note? Loving them both a lot. It is becoming a habit to love your characters. Hasini, thanks for the PM. It was not on Fan fiction forum so I did not find it until the PM.

If you say so Gurl!...😃 (about the lovely story part)

Oh! about Maan's need for her acknowledgement...Well this goes back to my other comment about taking Geet's diary entries at face value, something which Maan is unable to accept and hence he re-reads them often and why she is an enigma to him at the moment.

I have not stressed that part enough though, as I want that to come out in the due course of their conversation and not in his monologue. Lets see how that plays out.
You didn't know that this OS was out? I think I saw your like when the second part was out.
Either ways, glad you are on the thread.

Originally posted by: seemamary

Welcome back dear and loved the parts of your SS, hope to see you continuing your other ff soon.

Other FFs have to wait Seema. I will only be doing SS and OSs until then. Hope that works for you.

Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: bhakbhartifan

So hide and seek is finally coming to an end.. Not fully, but starting to..
loved how Geet got caught spying on him..
Now channi's arrival is surely going to create disturbance in their silence.. Not sure how will it affect their relationship.. Either Geet will feel reality guilty and go more in shell or Maan will make a move to solve their silence.

One question, so Maan was alsmot going to Marry Channi when he stopped from putting Mangalsutra on Channi and decided to Marry Geet? I mean he must have had to give some explanation to all the families to change brides during the ceremony in front of so many people?

Well let's just hope that Channi's arrival is for their own good. Liked your speculation.

I think the reasoning Maan gives for changing his decision is in Part 3. Did you miss it?
Yes he sure had to explain himself and that is in Geet's monologue in Part 2, although in summary and I have not gone into details there. This is also the reason, there is no communication between the two families. Hope this helps! else, let me know.

Thanks for reading girl.

Originally posted by: mandymore

Poor geet humsha fasjati h,grt prt

Oh! yes...she is caught alright and that too red handed.

Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: Shalve

awesome...loved it

Thank you :)