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richiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

okay that was plain embarrasing...i would suicide if it happened to me...really

btw wonderful update!!!

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

loved her diary pages...

maan has fallen for the country girl..or rather the puzzle that she is ...

geet also has feelings...but she is not able to understand it...

continue soon...

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Escapist

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Shucks what will happen if he comes across my dairy...ok at least I'm spared of this one thing that I haven't seen him bathe in reality 😉 but god save me...but then if it results in me being married to him I would blissfully unabashedly kiss him and that too full mouth...shameless isn't it :D

Loving the flow of the relationship status between the duo :)

Cheers,
Fatima

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mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Oh god poor geet diary ccould b so embarrsng at times.
both hav feelngs but no communication occurng
awsome prt

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Hima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

I feel that both of them are sailing in the same boat.
They have deep feelings but are hesitant to express.
Geet's guilt is overburdening her too much.
There is no hope of her coming out till Channi's marriage happens.
May be when she feels her sister got what she deserved will she think about her own life.
Maan on the other hand was falling deeper and deeper in love with her
by means of her dairy i suppose.
Good that he is giving her space.
Even if he makes any advances there is no hope as Geet will be even more guilty.
Hope Channi gets married soon
Waiting for the next part

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bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

This is getting interesting update by update...
So somewhere Geet likes Maan and Maan has started to like the Geet in the dairy which is the actual Geet.. But I don't like the silence too much.. I want them to see each other each day even if it just having lunch.. Is Geet going to start the studies again? I assume her studies is left in between or she is willing to study more..

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Hmmm... quite intersting couple these two are.. 1 likes the other but still has her own guilt & inhibitions to overcome them... while the other is falling for the person in the diary...unconsiously with the person herself... both have to come out of their own shells...

loved their confrontation... a type of courtroom arguement where neither our dear attorney backed out of his so solid proofs.. nor did our oh so "village girl ' backed out with her comebacks..& wrath... loved it

liked to know about how he has kept a copy of her entries.. with him.. also Geet's thoughts thru it...hayee😍..

I am a fan of ur writing skills...how u put life in each of ur characters... loved it... waiting for further updates...😊

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Shalini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

it was exciting to read her diary, i was eager to know what she had written down. this is an amazing FF. do continue soon.

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kavs123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,update,,,,

dying 2 read d next part n hope for some sort of conversation between the two

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

His is such an interesting sketch.. strangely obsessive, with reading that diary again and again. trying to decipher the meaning behind every word.

The ironic part being, they sneak around the other, wanting to know the secrets while trying their best to avoid confrontation, or even company.

The questions are out in the open yet cloaked so well, it gives a new dimension to the tension between the two. and you write so well. Loved the update. Do continue soon.

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