SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66 - Page 9

So hide and seek is finally coming to an end.. Not fully, but starting to..
loved how Geet got caught spying on him..
Now channi's arrival is surely going to create disturbance in their silence.. Not sure how will it affect their relationship.. Either Geet will feel reality guilty and go more in shell or Maan will make a move to solve their silence.

One question, so Maan was alsmot going to Marry Channi when he stopped from putting Mangalsutra on Channi and decided to Marry Geet? I mean he must have had to give some explanation to all the families to change brides during the ceremony in front of so many people?

Originally posted by: t_areeb

sweet torture for both of them.. ...

he showed her that he knows she is spying him..

and later she challenged him with her closeness...

and now channi? why is she in dehli? i hope she removes the guilt from geet's mind

Thanks for reading :)

You are asking the right questions, without bias. Good, I like it.

Originally posted by: sindu555

nice updates ...

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

hasini, awesome ff...liked reading all the parts till now..they were very interesting..each one was thoroughly gripping & entertaining...with every scene, the only thought in my head was, ab agge kya hoga...i liked how geet, maan married each other...whatever the situation was i'am happy they are married...you know i seem to like & enjoy, the silence, the khamoshi which exists in maan-geet's relationship... maan read geet's dairy...good for him..maan can read geet's thoughts on her face yeh bhi very good hai, aur issi wajah se tho maan married geet instead of channi...well irrespective of the fact that maan & chaani were supposed to tie the knot, but a untold, unsaid attractions was always there between maan & geet..the trust, love, attraction, always prevailed between the two..the khamoshi between maan geet is not disturbing, but it is pleasant...because one can feel the depth of love & feelings they have for each other, one can sense it in the silence existing between them too...liked the small accident as it brought the two of them together for a while at least..a very interesting fanfic...very well written...now why is channi here..i hope she does not create problems for maan geet...even if channi tries to create problems, then maan geet's khamoshi ka rishtha, ehsaas ka rishtha, would be greater then her own attempts...keep up the food work...👏please update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly...😊

P.S: PM me whenever you update..😊

I did not expected this run-of-the-mill story to be accepted at all in the first place as I started this out, just to keep my writing exercise going. I wrote a very short OS (the first update) and left it there, but now this has turned out into 'Dear Diary...'.
I'm not working a lot on plot with this SS and hence it will be simple story of a couple who got married under strange circumstances. Hope it will not turn out stale :)
Ah! what can I say about silence...my favorite topic. Hopefully Geet will work through it all...

Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: libra25

hey you are back..
awesome beginning..
will read the rest and get back with my comments..
missed you

Thank you :)

Where did I go? 😉 Its you who disappeared off the face of IF for a while (I think).
I will only be posting OS and SSs. Not FFs, that are heavy on plot and characterization.

If there are any special requests you folks want me to write on, let me know. I will try my hand at those as well.

Thanks for reading Libra. Missed you.

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Welcome back. Love it H. Brilliant story... Thanks for the PM.

Priti, I never left. As I responded to Libra, I will be showing up here and there with OS and SS.

Thanks for reading this one.

Originally posted by: mysticangel

simply superb

Thank you :)

Poor geet humsha fasjati h,grt prt

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Wonderful...

I happened to come by this story today and read it full on ... this is an unusual story and I love it. Love the childishness in Geet and the maturity in Maan...

I was quite sad when you said you would take over the garb of "just reader" but this new story surprised me and pleased me extremely..

Can I confess that I am a big fan of your writing.. I started with NY Times when I joined IF but I have mostly been a silent reader for ur stories... I loved Mr Iyer and Mrs Khurana too and was quite sad when you closed it. I love even the comments u leave in other writers' threads..

Looking forward to reading more from you😊

Mystique Gurl! I'm glad you like it. I'm not sure Geet is not all playful as she is coming across. I suggest you read up the Part 7 and let me know, what you think of her.

I'm still a reader mostly 😆...but elsewhere and not at IF (New Yorker...I spend a lot of time there)

Thanks so much for favoring my stories. I think you are talking about my comments in Ms P's thread...Thanks again.
I hope you can stop by more and let me know your thoughts on the writing and the stories.

Originally posted by: punam2712

read this in one go and really enjoyed it

the courage and the guts of a village girl to go for what she wants was mind boggling

she may say that she did it for her sister, but i think curiosity played a large part in it

now that the guilt has set in, she will take time to realise that this was what she wanted

maan has accepted it, but waiting for to know her own mind

the diary entries were sweet and short, but wanted more elaborate info on what she saw

now that channi is there in the picture, hope it gives a push to her feelings - maybe jealousy

Curiosity here didn't kill the cat, but sure did got her married 😆

Well I'm surprised by a lot of people, taking the diary entries at face value after Part 3. There are more conversations around that, that is yet to come in Part 7 Shadows of the night. I hope that changes the opinions around her and her diary entries.

I don't want Channi to play a part in Geet's feelings for Maan. Well that's just me. I still don't have a lot of details planned and I only hope you like it all.
Thanks for reading and liking it.