SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66 - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago
complicated.. you are taking your time with this one...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shinonome

complicated.. you are taking your time with this one...




Well, I normally don't respond back to just one person...but your are riding my curiosity.

What did you mean by 'taking time with this one'? So does that mean you have a frame of reference?

I think this is the first time you are showing up on the thread, so I'm unable to read you entirely on your statement. I'm a little obtuse today.😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
That was an amazing update! Geet's yearning to be close to him and her struggle with self to not succumb... it's so conspicuous. She has still not accepted herself as his wife, it seems. The songs were making her jittery... can't wait to know how she responds to Maan's question and where this leads to. Do continue soon.


P.S. - I forgot to mention about "Paheli" in my last comment. The concept is interesting... hope to read it soon.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally we get an update, I am speechless hungry for some more ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sizzling and daring last update! I love Maan's casualness in this update and his taking the initiative to point out faults in Geet's outlook. Gotta adore it!

Oh, the lyrics in this update are just a little bit incorrect :-p
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Posted: 13 years ago
Because, you guys wanted me to write more for Dear diary, I have chosen a few extra updates for this SS, before close.

Something I always wanted to write about for M&G...So this is more my indulgence 😆 (the last time I did that, a few didn't like it. So now is the time to voice your opinions)

Preview Part 11 A woman with two mirrors.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=924sLHig0DA[/YOUTUBE]

"I like everything about her" She spoke a while later, giving it some thought "Her struggle, her insanity, the sullenness, the playfulness, her brooding, the way she finds him in both silence and words, in movement, in inaction and even in her inertia..." Her voice descended one note lower than the one preceding, such that her words came out in a near whisper eventually.

He felt she'd spaced her words with enough pause that it was sure to have come from a deep place and not just an argument in favor of her mysterious female lead. He couldn't continue to believe she was still talking about Meghna then, when she had that forlorn look on her face appearing to be lost and present in that moment she was with him.

"In her choices too...the way she chooses to destroy herself for him"

He walked over to the column that lined the porch, catching the water drops that fell from the roof within the palm of his hand. "I think I prefer Preeti to Meghna"


Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well i didn't understand anythng... Who is meghna nd preeti?????4rm where they come???? But it sound interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Audiwalia

Well i didn't understand anythng... Who is meghna nd preeti?????4rm where they come???? But it sound interesting



Sorry it was vague like that...Its just truly a discussion of Megha (Manisha's name in the movie Dil Se). Not so much Preethi (Preeti's name in Dil Se) though.

And how they relate to M&G...well, you will just to wait for that.

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OOH - so now we get a dissection of the two pov's - both sacrificing and brooding in their own ways 😊 lets see what else comes up - atleast they are talking more now😃

Edit : Thanks for enlightening about the characters of the film...I wouldnt have recognised the mention otherwise😊
Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

OOH - so now we get a dissection of the two pov's - both sacrificing and brooding in their own ways 😊 lets see what else comes up - atleast they are talking more now😃


Edit : Thanks for enlightening about the characters of the film...I wouldnt have recognised the mention otherwise😊



Perhaps, dissection is too strong a word. I just edited it.

Yeah! I didn't want to rush to the end without some clarity around their preferences.

Thank you :)

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