mulakat jo zindagi ban gayi MAANEET ss COMPLETED - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

loved d golgappe treat ...

can we get one more update ... ye dil maange more ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...loved golgappe treat...waise golgappe dekhkar muh me paani aa gaya...lol..

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
mulakat
part 12

After few min they reached ice cream parlour.

Ice cream nahi khana

Geet is so happy that he takes her to ice cream parlour. How he is taking care of her liking. She is just looking at him in awesome. He clears his throat and gestured her to come out of car. They go inside parlour.

Maan chose corner table to sit. He takes chair out for her. Geet sit on chair and maan sit opposite to her. Maan call waitor to take order. Geet order butter scotch while maan order chocolate ice cream.

Maan aap ne to kahi aur bulaya tha na

Haan par tumhe coffee se jyada ice creame pasand hai to maine venue change kar diya. Socha ki coffee agli baar pi lenge.

Aap ne ye sab mere khushi ke liye kiya

Maan nodes his head and about to say something when waitor come and placed their order. Geet is touched by his caring and meri choti choti baate yad rakh kar, puri karna

She is feeling blessed. She takes a sppon of ice cream and ask maan

Aap ka din kaisa raha?

Puri tarah se busy tha. Meetings, clients, presentations. Par meri shyam acchi hai. Geet blushed on that remembering all their encounters in the evening.

Tum batao tumhara din kaisa tha

Mera din achha tha. Ghar par sab cousins hai, to bahut masti chalti rahti hai. Films dekhana, games khelna, ek dusare ki tang khichna. Aur thoda time bache to preparations mein help karna. Sab log ek mauka nahi chodte mujhe chidane ka. Aaj subah to sab ne had hi kar di

Kyun aisa kya kar diya

Geet blushed, maan gets curious to know after seeing geet blushing.

subah sabne mujhe kaha ki aap aaye ho papaji se milne aur mujhe niche bulaya hai. Main itni khush ho gi thi. Jab main daudi daudi niche pahunchi to pata chala ki aap to aaye hi nahi the.

Maan laugh at this. When geet see him laughing like this, she gets lost in him. Her eyes are glued to him only.

Haste hue kitne acche dikhate hai

Geet's hand stops near her mouth. She is stairing at him. Maan look at her and gestured her about hand. But she is unable to get it. Finally maan speak

Geet tumhari ice cream gir jayegi

Then she realized where her hand is. She feels embrrassed, keer spoon down

Aap bhi mujh par has rahe ho

Maan smiled at her.

Nahi geet. Tumhare cousins to bahut tang karte hai. Sab ko samjhana padega ki meri honewaali wife ko jyada tang na kare.

Geet blushed at his statement and look down. She feels butter flies in her stomach when he called her as his wife. Evening come with suprises for her. Then they talked for few min. they realized it's getting late, so they should leave. They left parlour and get into car.

Maan started car

To aaj mangetar ban kar ghar choduna ya aaj bhi taxiwaala samjh ke chalne ka irada hai

Bichara taxiwaala kitna accha tha, mujhe chodne ke baad bhi ghar ke andar tak jaane tak ruka raha. Waise aap chahe to mujhe ghar ke andar tak chod sakte hai. Aap ke pas permission bhi hai

Both laughed at this remembering their first meeting.

Nahi main bhahar se hi nakal jaunga. Mujhe aapni khatir dari apne saalon se nahi karwani.

Both again laughed.

They reached at geet's home. Both come out of car. Maan come to geet's side.

To aap andar nahi aayenge

Nahi annie mera wait kar rahi hogi. I promise her I will look her shopping today. Main driver se keh kar gadi thick kar ke bhjwa doonga.

Ji

They both stand there silently. They don't want to leave. But they have to go.

Bye maan

Hmm bye geet

She walked few steps. Maan is looking at her. He wants her to turn once so he said palat

in bearly audioble voice. Like she heard him, she instantly turned.

She come running and hugged maan. Maan is so pleasantly shocked at her action. But hug has it's own effect. Her sent, her proximity calmed him and give warm feeling. Then he hear her saying in his ear

thank you maan for such a beautiful evening.

He feels equal warmth in her voice. Before he can say or do any thing, geet give him kiss on his cheek.


This send chill through his body. Before he reacts, she broke hug and run away feeling shy. He stood dumbstuck there. He liked her boldness with shyness. He is looking at her.

She reached to gate. Once again she looked at him and waves her hand. When maan moved hand, she blushed more. Then she goes into home.

Maan waited till she goes in.Then he smiled (or blushed), keep his hand where geet kissed his cheek. He smiled even more. He get into car and texted her

Apne thank you ka jawaab to leti jati

He knows she is totally shy now to answer back. He will wait to give '..(what answer or 😳)



hope you will like it

waiting for reply

previous------part 11

next -----part 13

Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww geet cousins are so naughty...omg i just can imagine her blushing bcoz of this...their ice cream date was so cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
Both are very cute
wah Geet ka kiya terrka hai Thank you karne ka
Now will he be able to give her answer that is the question...😉
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it... it was so aweet and cute
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: azee11

awesome

Both are very cute
wah Geet ka kiya terrka hai Thank you karne ka
Now will he be able to give her answer that is the question...😉
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa




lets look for some way to answer 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!geet s becuming bolder dan maan!
ab thanku ka jawab tho dena hi padega..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks. its awsome part,update soon waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow loved it dear awesome ...
too good ...awesome-desi-glitters-2

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