Mere Papa Maan Thread # 3/MG/SS

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Mere Papa Maan

Thread 3

Most truly honoured, and as truly dear,
If worth in me or ought I do appear,
Who can of right better demand the same
Than may your worthy self from whom it came?
The principal might yield a greater sum,
Yet handled ill, amounts but to this crumb;
My stock's so small I know not how to pay,
My bond remains in force unto this day;
Yet for part payment take this simple mite,
Where nothing's to be had, kings loose their right.
Such is my debt I may not say forgive,
But as I can, I'll pay it while I live;
Such is my bond, none can discharge but I,
Yet paying is not paid until I die


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cograths. . . Dear. . .4 new thread. . . I am dam happy about it. . . Enjoy 👏
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hey i am 1st

so today is new part thanks dear. . .
Wel come back. .
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Congrats for new thread dear
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Congrats for new thread dear...
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congrates dear🥳🥳waiting for update😃
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Hey Buddies here is next update ..U ll lov this thnax

Part 16

For next few days Maan was too upset that he started to avoid Mannat.For this He always left for office before She got up n in nite time He had his dinner in study.Making new project as excuse.Maan was avoiding her. But for Mannat .He was one who gave her everything. But she was not able to express that coz for that She needed Maan in front of her. Maan gave her everything. But not himself as her father or in her terms "Mere Papa Maan"😳

9:00 nite

KM Study Room

Vinod entered with cup of black coffee .Which was in Geet's routine

Vinod : Maan Sir Coffee

Maan : kya hua tum aaye ho … Geet buzy hai !!

Vinod: Sir ..Geet Didi coffee banna kar la he rahi thi Aryaman baba rone lagay to woh unko sulla rahi hai…

Maan: Theek hai tum jayyo .

(Vinod was jst about to leave when Maan called him back )

Maan: Vinod suno (Vinod turned back .But Maan was silent for some time n Vinod was waiting what his Sahab gonna say ?)

Vinod: Ji Sir .apko kush aur chahea?

Maan: Nahi woh (there was some hesitation in voice) Mannat

Vinod: Maan Sir Mannat baby to kab ki so gayi..Nandini Did ne unko sulla dia woh to shayad 8 baje he so gayi ( before Maan could ask more ..Vinod gave him answers to his unasked questions)

Vinod left after that.Maan had done his work.Mannat was sleeping so Maan decided to move out of study.from this self made jail. Everyone was moved in their rooms.He slowly opened his door.Geet was sleeping n Arayman beside her.He smiled looking at his beautiful wife n innocent son …around them his whole world revolved But he was not in mood to sleep So he decided to watch TV in livin room. Leaving their room's TV off not to disturb them .

Geet knew what Maan was upto.Why he was avoiding Mannat.What was reason of his odd behavior ..But She was giving time to Maan.When he checked her n found her in sleep .She knew his presence .But she decided to leave him alone.to think what step He should take ?

Maan switched TV on .But just shifting one channel to other .His mind was else where.But a voice from Kitchen side distracted him from his thoughts

Maan: yeh kaise aawaz hai sabh to so chukkay hai...?

Maan ran toward Kitchen It was too dark .He switched on Dinning room lites.Inspected every where But found nothing.

Maan: yahan to kush nahi.every door was locked so from where this noise was coming.(he thought)

Maan got no answer from his mind so he moved back At same moment he hared a voice again lik somebody was sobbing behind kitchen counter.Maan slowly moved toward that .

Maan: Mannat …tum yahan ?(Maan was shocked to find her there in that dark )

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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Hey there is next part .Go through this comment n lik this

Part 17

But she was much scared and hiding her face in her knees.But finding Maan in front of him.She got up n in the moment hugged him from legs.

Maan: Maanat kaya hua.why r u too much scared?

Bending on his knees Maan asked Mannat.now Mannat hugged him from neck and Maan took her in his arms.But she was still sobbing breathing deeply .

Mannat: Mannat ko darr lag rahha hai….bhoot Mannat ko kha jayega.(rubbing her face on his shoulder Mannat said)

Maan: Mannat kahan hai bhoot ? Sirf main hu yahan

Mannat: Woh window k pass dekho Uncle ..woh humko kha jayega….

She pointed her finger toward window without moving her face toward that .She was much afraid .Maan looked there n he smiled. A plant shadow was there.He took Mannat up in his lap n moved toward window.When Mannat noticed this .She started to hit her feet on Maan's knees

Maan : Shhh Chup bilkul chup….main tumko bhoot k pass nahi lay ja rahha…aur koi bhoot nahi hai ….dekho (n with same hand he opened window pane…n switched on the lite outside kitchen from kitchen switch board.

Mannat: Maan Uncle aap Mannat ko bhoot k pass kyon lay ja rahe ho ?

But Maan placed his one hand on her mouth before she can shout in fear


Maan : Mannat dekhi idhar ……

He softly said ..n Mannat had full trust on Maan ..He was only n only one who could save her in any condition lik today ..She turned her face n looked out of window .A sudden smile came on her face.

Mannat: Hahahahaa….arre yeh to plant hai….bhoot bhag gaya Maan uncle ..apse darr gaya woh

Her fear flew away in such a way that nothing happened He was too happy to see dancing Gulmohar in garden...n lite on Main gate was creating plant's shadow on window glass n that dark shadow was also dancing lik some body was moving slowly opening both arms apart toward kitchen .

Maan: Mannat dekha kuch nahi hai wahan per…(watching her happy Maan had unknown emotions in his eyes ..he was looking at her face without a blink )

Mannat: Maan Unclleee….(took uncle so long ) Mannat ko patta hai …aap Mannat ko every time …darrney nahi daygay ..aur aap aab bhoot ko jor say beat karna aur police ki jail main lock karva denna

Maan smiled : Mannat bhoot nahi hotay ..dekha tumne that was jst a shadow….per tum yahan kya kar rahi thi . ….at this time

Mannat: Maan uncle humko panni pina tha…per Nakul uncle ne pani ki bottle nahi rakhi Mannat k pass..isliye hum yahan aa gaye….

Maan: Per tum ne bell press nahi ki …tumhare bed k sath hai jo…Geet Aunty ko patta chal jatta ..woh bell hamare room main ring hoti hai na fir kyon aayi tum yahan?

Mannat: Uncle Arya chotta baby hai na..woh uth jatta ..bell ki voice say..patta hai…Jab morning main phone bajj raha tha to Daddi Maa ne Mahesh uncle se kahan phone le jayo …Arya uth jayega...hum bell bajate to woh uth jatta aur rota….fir Aunty kya karti…woh to very long time takk rota hai

Maan was speechless in front of this lil girl's deep thoughts …She even cared about his son…Even She didn't understand any relations She had with this house n people around her..But she could understand things which could put effect on others.But what about him.He was a father even then he was running away from his responsibilities .Jst to protect his other relations.He was avoiding a faultless lil creature ..who trusedt him blindly

Maan: Mannat tumko Maan uncle per sachi main trust hai k woh apko darrnay nahi daygay..(Maan knew he would get positive answer even then he asked her)

Mannat: Ji Maan Uncle…Per Maan Uncle

Before she could say more Maan stopped her

Maan: its too late lets go to ur room n u should sleep now.(n he took her up while moving toward her room)

Geet was watching this As lite outside kitchen was visible in there room also.So to get reason for that she moved out of room.N finding Maan n Mannat in conversation She hided herself to give them more time to open up .

Maan asked Maanat to lay on bed n put comforter on her

Maan: aab tum so jayo .?

Mannat got up again.

Mannat:Aap Mannnt ko batayo na Mannat k Papa kon hai?

Maan was surprised to listen this.He never expected this from her.

Maan: kyo..tum apne Papa ka kyo puch rahhi ho ?

Mannat: Humko Shahid ne kahha tha ..Papa always protect baby from devils ….per aap to Maan Uncle ho aap Papa nahi …Mere Papa Maan Uncle aap nahi hai….fir kon hai mere papa….aap papa jaise humko protect kyo kartey ho …?(She had put each n every question she had in her mind n heart..n what she observed in Maan as her Papa)

Maan didn't understand what She wanted.what he should do know .Outside Geet was listening everyting.Maan was still silent

Maan: Mannat mujhe nahi patta tumhare Papa k baarre main..aab tum so jayo (situation was such He could not ask anything to Mannat..not any thing which again hurt her.so he said softly )

Maannt thought for a while : Maan uncle agar apko nahi patta Mannat k papa ka ..Mannat ko aap everything daytay ho aur protect bhi kartay ho..fir aap Mere Papa Maan ban jayo na ..?(She put real question now in front of him n now Maan's turn.)

Maan was gazing her.Before his answer Geet entered in

Geet: Maan agar Mannat apko Papa kehna chahti hai to kehney dijiye na .

Geet hided that she heard everything .

Maan: Geet tum kab aayi ?

Geet: Abbi abbhi jab Mannat ne kaha Woh apko Papa kehna chahti hai …kehney dijiye fir kya hai..jab takk uske Papa nahi mil jattay..I mean aa nahi jaatay let her say

She knew. If She ask Maan that why he said that ?He didn't know about father.He might hav no answer.n whole story would take wrong path.So to cover up this She pretended that She hared only these few words

Geet: Mannat aab apse inko Mere Uncle Maannahi Mere Papa Maan kahiye..jaise who Arya k papa hai…?(She said without waiting Maan's verdict )

Mannat was too happy n she started to clap n stood up on bed holding Geet's hands. She kissed her on cheek: Sacchi Aunty ..Yeh Mere Papa Maan hai aab Maanat k

Maan was looking one by one on both and reviewing term Mere Papa Maan.what there three words meant to Her..n what to him



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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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