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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="5">Need of any twist plz tell me</font>
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<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="5">Urappreciationalways force me to update this ...I never thought keeping apart Maan Geet's lov story ..u all gonna lik a father daughter relation..n this is surprising...Thanx dearies</font>
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Pls don't twist it
Continue it as it is!
With maneet romance
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

i also surprise...but its great thought...😛we definitely want maaneeet love story.. we love to see that

bu in this case ...i think I want both maaneet love stary with father douter bonding' with help of mother(geet)

Edited by ANGILS.KALI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: ANGILS.KALI

i also surprise...but its great thought...😛we definitely want maaneeet love story.. we love to see that

bu in this case ...i think I want both maaneet love stary with father douter bonding' with help of mother(geet)

i agree with u... maza ayega😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Ya its coming jst editing is left
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Buddies Here is next part hop u will lik plz do comment n hit lik.If u think its good

He moved out ...walking toward his room he was thinking "Geet now asked Mannat to say him Mere Papa Maan .jst for few days coz Mannat was taken as his friend's baby.But what would be Geet's reaction when she came to know reality.Might she never bear Mannat in this house."N tear drops fell on his cheeks. But why he was so upset ?n had tears .he realized only when he felt wetness on his cheek .He took Arya in his lap holding him tightly that lil baby started to cry.In reality It was Maan who wanted to cry.His condition was such that

He couldn't accept her n could not abandon her.

Geet came behind him.After few minutes.She could understand Maan's inner conflict.But She couldn't do anything.Coz She was in wait for His to speak .Ya Geet had accepted Mannat lik every Khuraana.But If she disclosed this in front of Maan.He would always feel guilty due to a broken link of his journey from Sam to Geet .due to ML ...How conditions united them Till he gonna liv with his lost memory.She could not tell him about her past how he accepted her baby…N this was reason...

Geet wanted him to open up otherwise Maan gonna think as He accepted her baby ..She was accepting Mannat same way not from heart.Which was not true.Things might b different if Maan had his memory.So she as always pretended everything was fine.Without any conversation Geet took Arya n slipped in bad n Maan too.

Maan was not able to sleep properly whole nite so it was too late in the morning when he got up.

Maan: Geet Geet .(He started to shout)

That was expected so Geet was ready to face him.

Geet: What happened Maan?(She was too normal)

Maan: Geet it is 9..why u didn't wake me up?(He said in same tone)

Geet: So what Maan..work work n work this is ur routine…U need rest…So I let u sleep.(She smiled)

Maan: But Geet (actually he wanted to avoid Mannat even today ..Get new this..n this was main reason She let him sleep )

Geet: No ifs n buts.Now get up take ur shower…Breakfast is ready.(She gave him towel n pushed him toward washroom )

Maan said nothing coz He couldn't bash with her.


Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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9 am

All at breakfast

Mann silently took his chair n started to eat.Everybody pretending to b normal were wating for Maan Mannat clash.Mannat was continuously gazing Maan putting both hands under her chin

Mannat: Maan Uncle aap Mere Papa Maan ho naa?(Revolving her round eyes n taking naaa to long She said )

Everybody surprisingly looked at Mannat..They knew last nite incident as Geet told..But they never expected this question from her…coz as a child If Geet asked her to say Papa..she should take it as such without thinking deeply ...But why she wanted permission from Maan ?.This was question everybody had )

Maan stopped but his eyes were down ..He said nothing.When Mannat repeated same lines.

Mannat: Uncle boliye na Aap Mere Papa Maan hai(lik She forcing him to speak the truth unknown to her )

Maan: Hu..What ur Aunt said..u can call me Papa.(He made Geet reason why He gave permission to her )

Mannat: Sachi Main…(She laughed)

Geet: Sachi main…aur Maan apke Papa hai to main apki Maa.say me Maa (she gave answer instead of Maan)

Mannat: Aap Mannat ki Maa ho…Papa k sath to mummy hoti hai…(she was too confused)

But everybody laughed at this... except Maan.

Daadi Maa: Mummy ko Maa bhi kehtay hai Mannat jaise Aryaman ko Arya bhi kehtay hai per hai to woh ek hi …so Maa aur Mummy ek hi hoti hai.(Daddi cleared)

Mannat: aap Arya k bhi Maa Papa hai..aur hamare bhiii

Nandini : Ha baba aur Main apki mausi…aur Dev apke chahcu …(Nandini said taking a sip of coffee)

Mannat had been done n Aakash Sir was there for her so Geet asked her to go

Daddi Maa: Bhi Mannat ki wajah se hum sabh bhi bachay ban gaye hai (n she looked at Maan waiting for his reaction)

Dev: Ji Daddi Maa ..main soch raha hu usko kal movie k liye le jayo…bahut acchi kids movie hai (Dev gav his idea )

Geet: Kyo Dev Nandini ko bhi le jayo...usko bhi change mil jayega aur Mannat ko bhi Nandini ki company achi lagti hai .

Maan was too much frustrated suffocated..he had been trapped now…how to move out there was no way.

Maan: Enough har waqt Mannat Mannat aur koi kaam nahi apko..yahan….(Maan busted n moved in hurry)

Every body were looking at each other never expected this from Maan.

Daddi Maa : Maan ko kya ho gaya hai..aise to kabhi behave nahi kartay(Daddi was too sad)

Dev: Daddi Maa mujhe lagta hai Bro unddar hi unddar ghut rahay hai…hum Mannat ka jikkar unke samne isliye kartay hai so that woh Mannat k aur karee baa jaye..per shayad kush jayada he ho gaya.(Dev realized Why Maan said so )

Geet: Ha Dev U r rite…He was too upset last nite…But I have seen that affection in his eyes which a father always has for his child.But Maan is not able to show.

Nandini : Ya u r rite Di…We should understand Jija ji's condition also (She seconds Geet)

Geet: Ya Maan ko aur tension denna bhi theek nahi …he is migraine patient…kahin unko aur problem na ho jaye.(She new over stress was no good for Him)

Daddi Maa: Ji beta..humko koi dusra idea sochna hoga…aur I hav that..(She winked n had a smile on her lips)

Dev: Daddi Maan u r genius ..we know that..n if u hav such an idea that gonna rock (Dev Taunted)

Everybody laughed

Geet: But Daddi Maa what's that….?(She was waiting)

Daddi Maa: Maan aur Mannat ko hum itna kreeb le aayegay k Maan ka unse dur rehna to kya sochna mushkil ho jaye..aur uske baad kay karna hai…I hav planned Maan apne aap sab bol day gay..without any hesitation.But u hav to help me (She disclosed idea thought something n smiled )

Everybody gav Daddi their hand and all laughed.



So how is this...U gonna lik this...If u want any thing ...any new idea...tell me..comment n hit lik ..if any buddy want pm plz send request


Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
awesomeee
tht maaneet can call maan as papa n geet as maa
superbbb
n nw waiting for daadi's new nautaki plan
Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: rsroopali

awesomeee

tht maaneet can call maan as papa n geet as maa
superbbb
n nw waiting for daadi's new nautaki plan


As always Daddi's great super plans for Maan the Great to trap him n he will 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
perfect update love it so so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the update...
waiting for dadi's plan

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