MG[SS]-The Yellow Dot of Eternal Joy[IMP Note Pg 1 & Pg 72]

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: spvd
part 2
lovely...
the rapport Maan shares with the 2 men was so very nice...
but that line about the touch on the name plate was so so so awesome...
Nanhi?
i didnt get that...
why did u stop there?
cont soon dear...

Thank you glad you liked it...and all your doubts will be cleared soon. :)

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: t_areeb
the yellow dot is in his office now

beautifully written

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
nice...

love the friendship between handa n khurana...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Loved the update! The bond between the two friends was awesome! Who's Nanhi? Can't wait to read more! :)

Thanks a lot! Glad you liked reading it :)

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: serenelove

Hey Jazz,
Loved the update.
Poor Maan is advocate but in front of his father, he is just like the 10 year old kid that he wishes to be to counter elders' teasing.
Lolz...akhir woh uske baap hain.😆
Maan's doyens are scared of their wives while others are afraid of them 😆.
Ghar-ghar ke kahani🤣
Ufff Jazz, stop teasing now. Family's only artist is the yellow dot of joy that we have not seen the encounter with Advocate Maan.
What teasing?😆
Waiting eagerly for next part.

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Tammana_Maaneet
Wow...just wow...
Awesome use of...ahh,I can't form even a proper sentence
N here I m judging ur talent...
I don't have the right to say anything to say to such a gr8 writer...u r just awesome...
Every part had its own feeling n touch...
Every word has it's own meaning...
Comedy also well explained...
U r indeed a creative person...
Very very very nice update...
Thnkx for the update n PM...
Continue soon...wud be waiting...
Love u loads...take care n keep writing...

Aww...thank you so much for the appreciation! I really am not sure where I am heading with this. Hope it comes out good. :)

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Devil-By-Birth
RES.

EDIT:
😲 How come you know so much about Lawyers? You know some Lawyer kya?🤣
'Nanhi' reminds of a ad focused on father-daughter love.. Meri Nanhi Pari, Aaj Ghar Ko Chali, plus our maid's landlord has two sisters Munni and Nanhi and they both keep fighting with landlord's wife... 🤣
Ok that above info was total random...😆
Coming back to update...
Fab. update saali ji... 👏
Keep updating...😳