MG[SS]-The Yellow Dot of Eternal Joy[IMP Note Pg 1 & Pg 72] - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

that was wonderfully written Jazz ⭐️


Thanks a lot Nadia :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

I decided to finally check ur OS (apologies in advance for being late) and when I read the first and second part...I thought wow Jazz is writting from Maan Singh Khurana's perspective, this ought to be very interesting.

Only here I see the great MSK being not so great and actually getting teased by someone (chalo at least that's his dad). So, who is this nanhi and why did he get all rallied up by that name? Can't wait to read more, but why is it just OS, is it possible to make it a long OS 😳


Lol...you can be great for the whole world. But family is the only place and are the only people who would see you beyond what your public persona is.

Only family has that right. Haina?😆

LOLz...I think your wish for a long OS is being granted. It's getting bloody stretched.😕

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: truth1-1

That was great jazz!👍🏼


P.S: when r u updating?😊


Thank you :)

Updating in a while...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Pre-cap


A fragrance or a touch,on my name lingers.

I feel a warm caress ofsome known fingers.

A spot of yellow flowers& my memory gets a jog,

A ray of golden sunshinepierces the great fog.

The fog of distance,the passage of time,

And a bell rings, abeautiful chime.

The yellow dot turns, inmy mind at last.

And a misty face smilesat me. a kin from the past.


Part 3



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Edited by jazzerette - 3 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pre-cap

A fragrance or a touch, on my name lingers.
I feel a warm caress of some known fingers.
A spot of yellow flowers & my memory gets a jog,
A ray of golden sunshine pierces the great fog.
The fog of distance, the passage of time,
And a bell rings, a beautiful chime.
The yellow dot turns, in my mind at last.
And a misty face smiles at me. a kin from the past.

This poem surprised me.
The underlined part.. to be specific.
You know we always have this habit of assuming things don't we? And pata hain when we're preparing for CAT our lecturers told us one thing..
Don't assume anything while you read Logical Ability. If he says When the sun rises in west..the moon sets in north..we are supposed to take it as truths and proceed. And we are asked not to assume unless it is mentioned. If we are given Sonia Gandhi, we assume she's the president of INC. It's understood although unstated and this is where we lose marks. We don't assume even though they are universal truths unless it is stated. And i am bringing up this theory as.. we tend to assume Geet as Geet Handa. It may be right. But i was not assuming her to be a Handa. There are many reasons. Some of them being.. they were like one family. So it is weird for him not recognizing her voice. He woke up with her voice remember? And I thought he should atleast recognize her from behind but then he was in half-asleep condition. So that I can understand.. but voice? What about that? But i came up with another theory this time.. voice changes with age..and if they were away for years..then it is possible that he didn't quite recognize her. As Maan was away from India to London.. it explains partly..but as stated above..these were only my assumptions which says Geet is a Handa.
But that one line in the poem strengthened my theory. So Maan knew Geet. Again this is an assumption. Obviously if Geet is a Handa there is no way in hell Maan doesn't know her. AFter all they are family friends. ISn't it?
But the PAST word makes me wonder what they shared in past. Any significance of past here?


My heart skipped a beat as brain processed the words. "Who was she?"

"Today is my first day Sa'ab, so I did not recognize her. I did inquire though. She just smiled and replied that she belongs to this firm and left before I could ask anything further."
You are so damn clever. You made the peon new to office so that he can't say the name of her? Hmph.
As per the underlined words, I was wondering WHY? Why does his heart skipped a beat? There's something amiss here.
That appreciating a flower was a frivolous pursuit for the likes of me. I was only nineteen in my defense. It was only until...
Fir se shuru.. someone should ban these aadhe adhure lines. It increases my curiosity level. 😆
"Yellow orchids are bright, vigorous flowers that enrich our life with their breathtaking magnificence. Generally known as flowers of love, yellow orchids have a rare and delicate beauty that might take your mind in a land of fairytales. Also, yellow orchids are a symbol of royal elegance."

Am i reading too much into the lines or is it just me? Why do I have this feeling that they have a past?

"Have you gone mad? What was that Aditya Handa? Did you enroll in a finishing school while I was away? Where did you scrap this up from?"


Aditya Handa. My mind stopped right there.
One down in Handa parivaar Two to go.

"Well, if you have to tell someone that you are disappointed at them in a subtle undercover way..."

Disappointed in me?!

Disappointed? Hmm I need not repeat my one line again and again like an old tape-recorder. You got me right. Am thinking of it!

The rich of the purple reflected back in my eyes as pride. Pride for the man my best mate has turned out to be. And yet the beige reminded me the warm, down to earth person he was and always will be.

Once again am aping at them. Aww. I am making a note of all these meanings.

"Our whole lot except one. We will celebrate your homecoming..."

Why not? Why not the one person from the lot? They are like a family so WHY NOT? Until it is something big.. maybe another appointment. or if being somewhere else..or simply..some issue? The last thing Can't be.
"Alright, see you in evening. And best of luck for Sunday."

Dog!

No matter how hard I willed, the yellow-gold of Sunday was yet beyond my reach.
I already asked you and you didn't tell me. There's something special on sunday and that has to do with Nanhi. And Nanhi-Maan has something big planned up their sleeve. Oh am impatiently waiting!😍

Edited by --Shika-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yay! I'm second!
that was great. My mind is debating over the fact that could nanhi be geet, but if it would've been geet then he would have recognized her voice in the first chapter! im confused now, I'm already dying to read the next part!🤢

P.S: i noe u just updated but im still gonna say this, update sooon!😃
Edited by truth1-1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

maan disappointed nanhi in some way?

pre-caps are really nicely done
Edited by t_areeb - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 3
lovely...
the description and the way its written i really like...
who is Nanhi and the flower girl?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Chhote: Am a little confused at what happened... i thought i had it figured... but Aash's comment threw me off balance... and so i am not sure whether to write my transcript at this time or wait till the next part till i have it figured...😳😳😳😳
EDITED: SOrry not Aash but some Newbie's Comments 'Truth'.. haha...ironic!! 😉😉
Edited by deejayaqueel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
absolutely loved this part.. you write so well.. and the poem in the precap brought a smile to my face.. :)

Please Continue soon !


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