MG[SS]-The Yellow Dot of Eternal Joy[IMP Note Pg 1 & Pg 72] - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maan-ki-sanjana

Very simple but well written story😃

Loving it!


Thank you. I hope I keep up with it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

Nice han oh nanhi she is geet na do update soon


Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC

Excellent update...loved it...😊


Originally posted by: geetsweet

Wonderful part...

Loved it...


Thank you everyone :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Nanhi - wow... thats one of the best names I have heard for a long time..

Aww...thank you😃🤗 You don't know how close this name is for me.

Loved the update, Maan cannot take her out of his mind and recognises her touch everywhere - well she must be Yash's daughter - will he be meeting her after a long time? that is after his stint at London?

Loved the bonding between the two longtime friends...and loved the essence of the lilac fragrance when Maan touched his nameplate...you surely come up with the most creative of ideas😃
Oh it is very simple. Lilac is a color of soft feminine connotations. I just brought that in😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini01

wow this is beautiful, can you Pm me when you update please.


Originally posted by: mandymore

Nice prt specially d nameplate tuchng n feelng a woman b4 him.
cont soon


Originally posted by: katerpillar

beautiful n awesome...loved it so much...cont soon...👍🏼


Thanks a lot guys :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

awesome update...loved this update he shared with his two Dads..


p.s i live in Canada hun...so if u live in Canada then i can let u know when i find a yellow umbrella :)

Reya <3


Canada? Sigh...chal chadd! Lolz

Glad you liked the update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...



Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi dear..thanks 4 da pm n emotional n sweet update!!


Thanks a lot guys :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

Aww thank you Chhote!! but your words actually inspired them... and they are more like a transript of what you wrote... 😃😃
Btw... i am more and more convinced that we have set up a Mutual Admiration Society!!
😛


Lolz...mutual admiration toh banta hai.

Mera farz hai...apka haq hai.*salaams*🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

Nice Update... so they are like 'chaddi-buddies' from childhood, eh? 😆😆 And that totally killed it, didnt it... 😛😛...🤣🤣
Vaise, i have decided i am going to stalk you on this thread... so here's my transcript of the second part... 😃😃

A fragrance or a touch, on my name lingers...

I feel a warm caress of some known fingers.

A spot of yellow flowers & my memory gets a jog,

A ray of golden sunshine pierces the great fog...

...the fog of distance, the passage of time,

And a bell rings... a beautiful chime.

The yellow dot turns, in my mind at last...

And a misty face smiles at me... a kin from the past.


Ustaad can I use these poems? I don't want them to be left hidden within the threads.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Yash and Dev...I actually imagined the ones from the show😆

Nanhi seems like a sweet young lady...
Continue on


ROFL...from the show? Did imagine them as young? Or with grey hairs?

And btw...which Dev?🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: soniya_lovesu

awesome work dear 😊 thanks fr d p.m...
loved the 2 fathers n son talk 😊 who is nanhi btw?😕


Nanhi is a character in the OS😆 You will meet her soon😳

Glad you liked it :)

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