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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



I don't have any words to comment Nisha...my heart is sinking.
and he don't even regret what he did...

I think Geet did right by leaving him...he deserves this...he don't deserve anybody's love...

thanx for pm...


don't need to thanks for pm...
i am glad that you liked my ff..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mollycoddle


the story is somthing that happens very commonly...though the reasons may be different...
although i dont buy the reason for he having being intimate with her, just coz she was his first love, ...when u love someone deeply. ur first second or third love shud not find place in ur life...coz had they being existing, u wont be in love with the person who is presently with u...

i dont know how u r going to shape up the character of maan from here now, but somehow i will find it insulting and downright unacceptable if geet forgives him...he deserves to be alone, coz it was all his own doing...had geet done the same thing, he wud have hacked her to death😡


me too now in oscillation how to move the story further can i able shape his character😕...for the first time i feel guilt of starting this one...

first love i don't want to say any thing about that because my mind also feels maan did wrong... but i think the normal man will take this decision in that situation as maan did..😕am not sure about that..its just the feel i have in my mind...
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no...
maan deserves this.
he done very big mistake.
how could u do this thing?
nooo..
no maan u cant..
i just cant accept this situation.
maan dhekona in sleep also geet recognise her maans distance from her
but u cant understand ur feelings when ur in the presence of ur first love.
thanks for the pm nisha.
eagerly waiting for the next update.
update the next part asap.
thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 30
no wonder Geet hasnt forgiven Maan...
what does she mean by make her his?
disgusting...
how could Maan hide this from Geet?
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Posted: 13 years ago
ho nisha baby

ur maan is not lord krishna to accept bama,rukumeni...😆

coolll all boys are weak inner (we can say humans too)...the portrayal of maan's character is strong in the beginning but reciprocalled now... some what typical indian drama will be gaining 100% trps if aired ur twisted story my dear ...

ok i think geet will accept maan


stop
stop
no bashing

what iam coming to say the love of geet is so pure not like maan(dualistic ) ...so she cant separate her self from him...

thats may be the good as well as logical ending...




and about sam what we can say she will ruining all of her surrounding people life though vo jindha hoon yur marna hoon...

she is a crap. what we girls will think "not to ruin others life for our own pleasure " will be our true lovable wish for lovely ones...so maan being a good human observer cant notice the selfishness in her .just for selfishness he lost his true lover(geet) thats not fare ...but 3 to 4 yrs of separation is a compassionate lesson for him...for his whole life...

god gifted him with geet he wasted it ...becoz he is just a human...👏
nisha ur story is good our real msk is not weak in any aspect he can easily outraged any girl through out his life right...sam is a closed crap for him
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vanadhi

ho nisha baby


ur maan is not lord krishna to accept bama,rukumeni...😆

coolll all boys are weak inner (we can say humans too)...the portrayal of maan's character is strong in the beginning but reciprocalled now... some what typical indian drama will be gaining 100% trps if aired ur twisted story my dear ...

ok i think geet will accept maan


stop
stop
no bashing

what iam coming to say the love of geet is so pure not like maan(dualistic ) ...so she cant separate her self from him...

thats may be the good as well as logical ending...




and about sam what we can say she will ruining all of her surrounding people life though vo jindha hoon yur marna hoon...

she is a crap. what we girls will think "not to ruin others life for our own pleasure " will be our true lovable wish for lovely ones...so maan being a good human observer cant notice the selfishness in her .just for selfishness he lost his true lover(geet) thats not fare ...but 3 to 4 yrs of separation is a compassionate lesson for him...for his whole life...

god gifted him with geet he wasted it ...becoz he is just a human...👏
nisha ur story is good our real msk is not weak in any aspect he can easily outraged any girl through out his life right...sam is a closed crap for him


already am in a confused state your long story again confused me more...😕nama vivek style kekanum na hey nee ipa enna sola vara...😆😆😆

i don't want to create any typical indian drama but i want to share the story which i come across here maan is not a god to differentiate between good and bad... he is just a human being who will fall for traps...

our msk is not the visvamithr to throw away all beautiful girls...
i want you all to think in different point of view as maan a man who is in trouble situation where his ex-girl friend in trouble in front of him(alagi movie as example)

sam point of view we all are normally leading our life think about the girl who don't have get any thing easily from her child hood... and because of her bad decision of choosing money she is struggling now she is also a human being
we all human beings we all do mistakes...

i know they did the blunder mistakes which can't be acceptable by me itself but i want to clarify that they are humans not gods its possible for a human to be selfish at some time...


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Posted: 13 years ago
part 31
i absolutely detest Maan...
how the hell could he do that?
i just wish Geet never ever forgives him...
does he even love Geet truly?
i dont think so...
if he truly loves her he would have never ever did this to her...
Sam asked him to take care of her, he did...
Sam asked him to let her enjoy like the previous days, he did...
Sam asked him to be with her, he did...
Sam asked him to kiss her, he did...
Sam asked him to make her his, he did...
next Sam ask him to marry her, he should do that and leave Geet and the baby for good...
such kinda man disgusts me...
in the name of of her wish he will do anything, then why not go to every other women or for any other reason and not give this as to the name of sympathy or pity or humanity...
u better dont make Geet forgive him for this SIN...
this is completely unacceptable...
i never expected him to do that...
i just simple hate him to hell...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Stupid maan.hw he can do that.hate him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i dont why maan did this
he is married and committed to geet & sam how can she ask a married man to spend a nite with...
continue soon
want to know whether maan shared this with geet or she came to know by herself
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just read all parts. With this part I felt so disgusting. Maan doesn't deserve forgiveness . If Geet had done same saying the guy is on deathbed making love with him then what would have Maan said that he is proud of his wife. No dear true love doesn't need to share bed even if one is gonna die.

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