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Posted: 13 years ago
ok alot of Maan bashing going on ... 😆 .. I can understand why ...

off course what he did was wrong .. absolutely wrong ... but here atleast in this FF Maan is normal human being .. who is bound to make many mistakes and he did made a BIIIG one ... every one have weaknesses ... and this Maan is no exception ... he gave in to Sam's wish ... seeing her condition and giving in to his weakness of his obligation to the person he once truly loved ...

he deserved to be punished and he is getting punished for committing that grave mistake .. but he DOES surely deserve redemption ...

the issue is something very sensitive so I can very well understand the ppl demanding that Geet shudnt forgive him ... BUT what about Geet herself ... she is hurt .. and the only one who can soothe her pain is Maan ...

Maan is in pain and will be till he gets Geet back ... but isnt Geet also in immense pain with out him ... his mistake cant erase the love she has for him .. now can it?... i guess not ...

relationships are not based on getting even with each other ... it is always about two ppl coming together and accept each other with their respective flaws ...

punishments for mistakes are understandable ... but ruining a bond of love for a mistake is not the right thing to do ...

I did not intend to offend / hurt any one with my bak bak ... am sorry if I did that ...

update the next part soon

love
Sana
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555

ok alot of Maan bashing going on ... 😆 .. I can understand why ...


off course what he did was wrong .. absolutely wrong ... but here atleast in this FF Maan is normal human being .. who is bound to make many mistakes and he did made a BIIIG one ... every one have weaknesses ... and this Maan is no exception ... he gave in to Sam's wish ... seeing her condition and giving in to his weakness of his obligation to the person he once truly loved ...

he deserved to be punished and he is getting punished for committing that grave mistake .. but he DOES surely deserve redemption ...

the issue is something very sensitive so I can very well understand the ppl demanding that Geet shudnt forgive him ... BUT what about Geet herself ... she is hurt .. and the only one who can soothe her pain is Maan ...

Maan is in pain and will be till he gets Geet back ... but isnt Geet also in immense pain with out him ... his mistake cant erase the love she has for him .. now can it?... i guess not ...

relationships are not based on getting even with each other ... it is always about two ppl coming together and accept each other with their respective flaws ...

punishments for mistakes are understandable ... but ruining a bond of love for a mistake is not the right thing to do ...

I did not intend to offend / hurt any one with my bak bak ... am sorry if I did that ...

update the next part soon

love
Sana


thank you sana.. my point is also same because its a sensitive issue i don't want to get into any conclusions now let me try to move the story further...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi buddies thanks for all your comments i can understand your anger on maan and sam...i don't want any conclusions now...
let the story moves on...

Part 32

he can see his geet's innocent face again and again her giggling sounds, smile and laughs which is echoing in his ears now... his eyes went moist...I want you to always speak about me and always think about me and love me forever I don't want to share you with any one else maan... her words is echoing in his ears and mind...

How she is going to bear this if she came to know about this..thinking about her he spend some time there near the pond with out the knowledge of time he spend a long time there then he started walking slowly on the road side he heard some prayers and mantra's while walking he turned to see where the sounds coming from...A old man is in front of him with long beard he face is v peaceful his words are very soothing to his pain he called him beta...

with out a knowledge he went before him and kneel... the old man keep his arms on maan's head and stared speaking.

don't feel bad child...what ever happen is happen we cant change it... god choose you for this every thing happens as per his will..this is all already written...

Unknowingly he folded his arms and cried...

every thing will be fine don't cry child....he patted his back

Here after you won't able to live peacefully but I will pray to the almighty he will give you strength to face all your struggles... he said

after meeting that old man he gather his strength and called geet to get apologize but she didn't pick up...

he don't know what happen to him but he felt some what peace and came back to his guest house while coming he called her again and again yet she didn't...

When he enters his house he founds geet's car outside... he immediately went to the living room there geet is sitting on the couch with tears which is telling that she knows everything... sam came running to the living room with her night dress...no one speaks...a deadly silent prevail there...

immediately sam went out to the garden leaving them alone...

Geet who is dumb stuck now and staring out side at some thing her eyes filled with tears...

Maan who is standing near the entrance of the room and get stuck there he neither came in nor go out...seeing geet with out a blink and tears...

Three of them remain in there position for hours with out any move and with out any words...

After a while geet get up from her chair holding her stomach carefully when she is about to fell maan went near give support but she hold the chair near by and showed him her palms to stop there...

She moved slowly to the door with the support of wall and to the car she get inside the car asked driver to take her to KM...

Till driver start the car maan didn't move from the door and the tears started to roll down on his cheeks and he too moved away from there in his car immediately after she left...

That day itself sameera has to move to London... before leaving she left a note to maan and geet through her maid...

Thanks for every thing maan...is the message she left for maan nothing more than that...

He left the note after reading it where it flies in air and lost in fire..

As well as she left a note for geet which she didn't even open and kept in her wardrobe... she didn't want to read it what ever the matters it consist off...

From now on there is no sameera's chapter in there life ...

She came in to there life just like a storm and left with in few days but the damages cause by storm won't vanish so soon...

Geet didn't able to react at first she can't even believe her eyes and ears even not her self she pray to god that this should turn in to a bad and scary dream...but it didn't its reality it the bitter truth to her that her maan is cheating her for the past few days...

They didn't talk they didn't see each other and remain silent the KM it self is like a grave yard now where there is always a there love talks, silly fights, and there happiness filled with...now it is remaining in a silent a deadly silent...they didn't speak even they didn't look at each other dadi's absence in KM pours more oil to her anger...

she didn't forget to wet her pillows with her tears she cried continuously she forgets to eat and take her medicines but not to cry... even he didn't take his food to avoid his presence before her..he used to go to office..but he lost in his own world and didn't able to concentrate on his works...

That night after crying heavily her face become bulky and eyes are red she wipe her tears off as she decided some thing she get up from the bed and went to his steady room...where he is sitting in the chair and his heads are facing the ceiling and eyes are close and a drops of tears is in the corner of his eyes which is trying to escape from his eyes...

She knock the door he didn't react she again hit the door heavily on the wall which made him to turn and see now the tears which he hold in his eyes finally escaped seeing her near the door...he wiped it of and said

Geet...

from her face he understood that she cried heavily and it also shows that she is very tired... she didn't eat properly for the 2 days is the info he got from servants he is worried...

why you did this maan? She questioned him..

he don't want to justify his mistakes he knows what he did is wrong he knows he want punishments for what he had done but he prayed to god that should not be loosing his geet... he remain silent he had no answers..

After seeing his silent she continued...

Am going...

Where? he is preplexed

Some where I don't know... but i wont stay here any more...she cried..

Geet please don't...

She continued to walk towards her room and maan followed her...

She took her bag from the wardrobe and start to pack her things..

Maan came near her and asked

geet where you go now? At this time please geet listen to me...

she didn't even care to listen to him...

geet please '

she glares at him once and again continue her packing...now he came near her and hold her hands

please geet punish me for what I did but don't go away from me please... I know what I did is wrong I didn't even deserve your forgive... but yet geet please don't.. geet i love you and only you...

she stops him in between by pulling her hands forcefully from his and said..

stop saying that maan and dare you touch me again...you loves me?when you will think about me maan did you loves me? really? i didn't believe you are... her anger now broke into tears which she hold it back and continued..

whom I to punish you maan...what is the right I have now on you when you didn't value our relationship and our love...she put the remaining dress in her bag and closed it.. she walked away from her room... he clearly knows now that he can't console her...


Precap:

What all this geet? she didn't reply he continued

If you think this only will give you peace then i will give you this divorce for your shake...


part 33
opps!!! at last i finish this one too... hope you all like this...

sorry for hindi mistakes..😃

sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes due to my limited knowledge...plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum desr
superb
so geet knew everything
ossum desr
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was expected
and that sameera went back to her world
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the atmosphere which u created after geet knew everything...perfect...and there is no right for maan to give explanation and geet has no need to listen in details...what a woman the sam is...only thank u note...hah...so much disgusting...she is dying that doesnt mean she has any right to blackmail someone and destroy their life for the sake of her death...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

loved the atmosphere which u created after geet knew everything...perfect...and there is no right for maan to give explanation and geet has no need to listen in details...what a woman the sam is...only thank u note...hah...so much disgusting...she is dying that doesnt mean she has any right to blackmail someone and destroy their life for the sake of her death...


Thank you...😃
i want to create the situation even worse for him but unfortunately he is the hero of my story so i can't help...

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Posted: 13 years ago
oh geet is leaving maan 😭😭😭

so i guess that was the past hmmm
hope the reconcile in the present
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 32
poor Geet...
feel so sorry for her...
at this time and stage she has to come to know about this and suffer...
what Maan did can never be undone...
good let him burn in his own hell...
had he not married or didnt love Geet then wouldnt be this harsh on him but the damn man claims he loves her and their baby, this sin is unforgivable...
hope Geet gets her peace of mind and happiness from her baby...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan deserve dis


good


she must leave her

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