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Posted: 13 years ago


I don't have any words to comment Nisha...my heart is sinking.
and he don't even regret what he did...

I think Geet did right by leaving him...he deserves this...he don't deserve anybody's love...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

yaaa ho ...

me first at your post...
meee enjoying it...
now about the update sweety...
omg what they did ...
geet ko kitna bura lagega...
scared for precap...



thank you for your first comment...
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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem

wht maan did is wrong



trust...truth is on which relations stand


nd during geet preg he did a big mistake


by spending one night wid sameera


he desrve dis...


feeling very sad for geet


whts her mistake

loving maan




i admit maan did a blunder mistake but he can't resist his first love...

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Posted: 13 years ago
terrible!!
how could he do that to Geet
and Sam? she has no shame to ask for it even after knowing how much maan loves his family
but i think maan should have taken the situation smartly, i dont expect this from a mature and strong person
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

really depressed to read this part...i dont know who is right or wrong...everyone has different opinions...but i dont think its love which maans demands towards geet...may be its attration...may be its the result to live together under one roof...may be she is his wife...may be she is his would be daughters mom...but if he loves her with his full heart then he could not go to that extent...love can never approve this...sams demand is right in her perspective...ok she is his first love and he felt pain to see her in that condition...but that does not mean that u can betray ur wife which is ur life according to u...sam demanded a kiss...ok maan could kiss her in her lips but why all over the face...when there is no desire for someone and u have to do something then u only do that thing not supplementary...he could kiss her only one time...he could make love...but after that he could go away from the bed...anyway this is only my opinion...i know there r many stories like this in real life...poor the better half...here geet...if u cant able to move from ur past then plz never allow anyone else...in future i know geet forgave maan coz she loves him a lot...and love can do anything...but maan should not do it...



thanks such a big comment now i understood how hard for you to read this update...

am not going to support maan any way i know what he did is wrong as a women i too feel very bad for geet i too don't want this to happen in real life for any women...

its now hard for me to explain his situation after his first love arrived once again in his life...
if he doesn't meet sam in that dead bed he might have think about it all you explained he can't resist when it comes to her last wish he want to make her happy at her last days by giving some love to her..he loves sam one time but the fact now is different he loves geet a lot than sam...
but love has no boundaries and no rules sam and both are his love...

any ways i don't want to justify his mistakes...he is now getting the punishment for what he has done...

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Posted: 13 years ago
i simply cant come to accept that maan fulfilled sam's last wish...this is no explanation for infidelity...had geet behaved in the same reckless manner, wud he have accepted her...
when he thought sanjay and geet are a couple, he cudnt digest the fact, i wud rather want geet to throw away maan from her life and make a fresh beginning with maya...

maan and sam are according to me selfish ppl who had completely and conveniently forgotten the fact that maan was married...and i am not going to believe the crap justification or explanation that maan loves geet , but fulfilled sam's last wish...
no woman wud ask for such riduculous wish to be fulfilled...even if she wer in deathbed...
even in her death she has successfully ruined the life of geet and just managed to wreck havoc in her married life...

i love ur story and writing, the angst is just towards the characters and no matter what they do or say, they dont deserve any second chance to redeem themselves😡...
hope i am not too critical or offending😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

i simply cant come to accept that maan fulfilled sam's last wish...this is no explanation for infidelity...had geet behaved in the same reckless manner, wud he have accepted her...
when he thought sanjay and geet are a couple, he cudnt digest the fact, i wud rather want geet to throw away maan from her life and make a fresh beginning with maya...

maan and sam are according to me selfish ppl who had completely and conveniently forgotten the fact that maan was married...and i am not going to believe the crap justification or explanation that maan loves geet , but fulfilled sam's last wish...
no woman wud ask for such riduculous wish to be fulfilled...even if she wer in deathbed...
even in her death she has successfully ruined the life of geet and just managed to wreck havoc in her married life...

i love ur story and writing, the angst is just towards the characters and no matter what they do or say, they dont deserve any second chance to redeem themselves😡...
hope i am not too critical or offending😆


thank god you loved my story...😃😃😃
i can understand all your feeling i too will react in the same way if it is written by some one else but unfortunately i can't react like that way now...because i created the story i made maan too week...😡 in fact i need some strong reason behind for there separation..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

terrible!!

how could he do that to Geet
and Sam? she has no shame to ask for it even after knowing how much maan loves his family
but i think maan should have taken the situation smartly, i dont expect this from a mature and strong person


sorry for making maan week.. i portrayed him as a normal man how one will react to that situation..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nishha


thank god you loved my story...😃😃😃
i can understand all your feeling i too will react in the same way if it is written by some one else but unfortunately i can't react like that way now...because i created the story i made maan too week...😡 in fact i need some strong reason behind for there separation..
😕



the story is somthing that happens very commonly...though the reasons may be different...
although i dont buy the reason for he having being intimate with her, just coz she was his first love, ...when u love someone deeply. ur first second or third love shud not find place in ur life...coz had they being existing, u wont be in love with the person who is presently with u...

i dont know how u r going to shape up the character of maan from here now, but somehow i will find it insulting and downright unacceptable if geet forgives him...he deserves to be alone, coz it was all his own doing...had geet done the same thing, he wud have hacked her to death😡

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