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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG, feel so sorry for Geet dear..
pls do continue..
can't wiat for next
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Posted: 13 years ago


Maan is a sinner...and he deserves punishment...

and Sameera how could she demand such a thing from him...
knowing he is married...

he also don't understand that when he wanted her love she left him and now when Geet take him out of his shell and gave love and family to him...he betrayed her for Sameera...he lost pure and selfless love for selfish woman like Sameera...

sad but interesting update...thanx for pm...

I am thanking u for pms because I know it is very tiring to first write updates and then send pms to so many people...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ya every ones bashing is right nisha sam is a selfish fish who cares only for her why cant she stay there and console geet...


what ever super update A😃ND UR HEROS ARE WHY ALWAYS TANGLED NATURE?


SORRY FOR LATE CMT ...LOVED UR UPDATE YAAR...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vanadhi

ya every ones bashing is right nisha sam is a selfish fish who cares only for her why cant she stay there and console geet...



what ever super update AND UR HEROS ARE WHY ALWAYS TANGLED NATURE?


SORRY FOR LATE CMT ...LOVED UR UPDATE YAAR...


my heros ah😲 i think you forget i wrote only one FF now he is getting all bashes so sad of him ...why I bring him in to such situations.....
its ok...late ah vandalum comment panala thanks...😳
Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
naan illadha neerathula ivvalavu nadandudutha

hate maan to the core...more than sam
neenga kodutha ella explanations aiyum padichen
but i cant accept them completely
he doesnt even deserve her

geet is right

i first thot that idhu chillunu oru kadhal madiri pogumnu but it went completey different

i think neenga ennai manasula vechu fulla eluthirukeenga nu


nice parts
cont . soon




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: niticool

naan illadha neerathula ivvalavu nadandudutha


hate maan to the core...more than sam
neenga kodutha ella explanations aiyum padichen
but i cant accept them completely
he doesnt even deserve her

geet is right

i first thot that idhu chillunu oru kadhal madiri pogumnu but it went completey different

i think neenga ennai manasula vechu fulla eluthirukeenga nu


nice parts
cont . soon


una marakamudiyuma dear... 😉

naanum chillunu oru kadhal mari kondu polamnu dhan nenachen aana different ah poiduchu,,, enake epdi nu teriyala...

maan is so pavom... every one is thinking in geet's point of view sad about maan...but what he did is not bearable..😡
Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 32

Part 33

she walked away from her room...

he clearly knows now that he can't console her any more so he immediately called meera ...

hello maan watz up??

meera.. geet geet ...she is leaving the KM...he cut the call

meera didn't understand any thing but she felt some thing is wrong from his voice and came rush to KM...

at a sight meera enter the sight she got at KM gat is geet stepping out of the KM with a big bag and tears in her eyes'

geet she exclaimed and took her to her house as geet is very adamant to go away from delhi meera can only console her to take her to her home.'

maan who witness the scene felt some what relieved that at least geet is safe under meera's care...

geet who didn't reveal any thing to meera and remain silent meera can just sense that some thing is wrong with maan and geet so she try to ease the situation instead of remaining the past...

Where meera who already adopted meety and kushi the twins who lost there parents in an earthquake they made geet to forget about her past... both kids are very sweet and in there presence geet forgets about all her past...

With in few days she again decided a big decision of her life...

Which meera is not aware of...

One day maan came to meera's home with a paper in his hands and tears in his eyes... meera is shocked to see him like that there...

He asked..meera where is geet?

Maan she is inside... tell me na.. what is the problem why you are looking so worried...

He just extend his hands and give meera the papers its a divorce papers which geet send to maan...

Maan what all these what is the problem between you both why this went in to divorce i can't even imagine that geet send this to you...

Maan didn't respond to her for some time after her posing more questions she get only one word from his mouth... sam..

Sam??? Meera questioned...

what happen to her now... maan please didn't tell me that... she paused for a while and understood the situation and again continued... I didn't believe that you again fall for her maan? Seeing his worrying face she just cut off and said

maan please don't give more stress on this issues please leave it for some time as I know geet its hard for her to bear all this and also its not easy for any women can bear that too in her condition taking more stress like this is not good for her health... saying that she turned away from him as if she didn't want to face his worried face any more

Meera I want to meet her once only once... he made a pleading face.

Ok ... you wait here I will send her here..saying that she left

After some time geet came...

What all this geet? she didn't mind to respond him.. he continued

If you are happy with this divorce... then am ready to give you this too i take this as my punishment geet living away from you but you don't punish you any more...

that will hurt me more... saying that he left from there...

She knows very well..This is not the punishment to him it's the punishment which she is giving to her self...

After that they didn't meet and talk to each other now every one came to know about there separation maan warns dadi too not to ask her any thing about there divorce and not try to convince her when ever she goes to meet geet in meera's house...

Geet parents try to convince her to change her mind on that issue but every thing went in drain she didn't respond to any one and she is having least interest to discuss about maan...divorce case is filed in court and no one want to give more pressure on her in this issue any more where she is very adamant in her decision...


maan who didn't utter a word against her will and accept for divorce which ends in mutual concern and he also reject his the offer by judge to see his baby once in a month as he knows it will hurt her more...

After 2 months she give birth to a baby girl as they both wish she named her maya...maan who don't want to trouble geet with his presence kept a distance from her when he came to know about maya's birth he can't control him self from visiting geet in hospital with dadi...

Every one is standing around her... when dadi enters her room and immediately went near to baby and took her in her arms and started to kiss her...

After a while maan enters her room and all left them alone with the baby...

He came near the baby and look once he want to take her in his hands and kiss that tiny soul.. which he is longing for the past few months but he don't want to do now which geet don't like...where geet is just staring in opposite direction... after seeing her reaction he knows very well that she didn't like his presence there...so he tried to moved away but she stopped him and said...

don't try to disturb us and leave us alone for god's shake...

geet maya is my blood..

no maya is my blood my daughter you have no rights on her never and don't call her your blood any more...

what do you want me to do now...

Don't come in front of me in the name of maya...don't ever try to take maya away from me... she is all my life i don't want to loose her and any one more... her tears wet her cheeks now

he hold back his tears and said..maya is my happiness too geet... i have rights on her..i love her... i love you... he conclude and he gulped his tears and emotions for a while and continued...

if you wish this then ok... i wont disturb you any more after seeing maya once at a last glance he continued.. here after i wont come to see maya if you didn't want me to...you can stop me from doing all these ... but I love you geet i will love both till my death you can't stop me from loving you both... saying that he moved away form there..

i hate you maan..she murmured

Precap: maya is sleeping in maan's room...


part 34


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i hope you like this...

feed back are always welcome...
sorry all silly mistakes due to my limited knowledge...



Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan is one of the biggest bas**** i have read so far no punishment is small for him and i dont want geet to forgive him ever in this life such a low person
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part dear
ossum
so geet asked for the divorce
she is right in her place
and maan is right at his place
sometimes we cant defend anyone dear
waiting for the next part
hope from now
we can see only present

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