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Posted: 13 years ago
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PURE LOVE


Part-1

Geet enter her house running and screaming in joy.She is wearaing a blue jeans and yellow top.Her curly hair tied up in a pony and some loose strand falling on her face.Her face become all red by her continuaous running,drops of sweat on her petal like lips.but still in her hazy state she is looking like a beautiful angel straight coming from heaven
.
Standing in the hall and panting heavily geet called out,mamma,mamma...

Rano ran out from Rano came out from the kichen scared and concerned for her lovely daughtr.Geet is the life of the whole members of the handa family.She is the only girl child of handa's.They all love her to the core of their heart.They give her everything which she demands,sometimes before her asking.Rano always consider that they spoiled her by their unconditional love but she also can't stop pampering her lovely child.
Rano came from her thought and said,

Geet baccha kya hua?chot to nahi lagi aap ko?aap thik to ho na?


Mamma ,aap bhi na itna kyu pareshan hote ho.I am perfectly fine.i am very very happy mamma.Angel london se wapas agaye
.

Maan agaye!It's been sixth month i didn't see my son.sure,thik se apna khayal nehi rakha hoga apna...

Geet gigled at her mother;s concern
"Mamma angel is perfectly alright.itna fikar maat karo Wo koi baccha thodi na hai",and murmured,{wo to aur bhi jada sexy lag rahe hai.maan kar raha tha pura ka pura kha jau unhe..}😍


Rano scold her lovingly and goes back in kitchen.Geet hurriedly goes in her room and locked the door.She fell on the bed in e thud and took her diary.Its her best friend.She wrote everything related to maan in her diary.Geet opened a page and wrote,

"Aap bohot bure hai maan.Aapne mujhe bohot tarpaya.this sixth month is became the worst time of my life without u.aap k bina kuch bhi acha nahi lagta.Mana ki aapko mere dil ki baat pata nahi but firbhi aap to thoda jaldi aa sakte the na,hmm. i love u my ange
l."


Pls do comment and give ur opinion.I am eagerly waiting for feedback.😃

Love
Saki
Edited by mishty..sakii - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
LOVEEE it!
pleaseee add me to your pm list!
my hindi actually sucks no jokee!
so pleasee can you try to write most of it in english :D
cont soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one.👏. loved it 😛add me to ur pm plz.😊
update soon 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part...so geet is in love with maan...k then wat abt maan is he feeling the same as geet...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sweet
she secretly love him
and maan has no idea about it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely ...

but itna chota update ... nor fair 😒

abhee lammmbbaaa update chahiye

waiting

love
Sana
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start nd luvly update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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And plz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PURE LOVE



Part 2


Khurana mansion


Maan came out from washroom.after half an hour of shaowar he feel fresh and relived from his tiredness of a long journey.Water drops slowly fell from his thick jetblack hair.his chiselled features, square jaw,black deep eyes represent his aura of raw power, the magnetism that demanded attention and made it impossible to anyone to look away from him.


after wearing a black shirt which makes him look irresistable, he stood beside the window thinking about his past,his .work and family but his thought came to halt at Geet,his mishty.he didn't notice that he named geet as 'his'
.

Geet's thought brings smile in his face.For maan geet is the most valuable part of his life.He is very protective about geet.He knew every single thing about her.he take care of her everything whether its her study or her other activities.he thinks that its his duty to take care of geet.when this protectiveness or this feeling grown up in his heart he himself don't know.To him she is always the little bubly girl who brings happiness in his faded life.

Maan came back from his thought hearing the knock in the door.Without turning he said,come in.

Savitri devi enter the room with a big smile spread in her face.She is very happy today bcoz her favourite grandchild is back home. After the death of her only son and Daughter in law she Brought up her grandchild with great care.She loved them so much and they also love and respect her a lot.For maan, dadima's happiness is everything he wish
.

"Maan,I am so happy you are back.kaise hai aap?did you miss your one and only GF,hmm?"dadima said.

"Dadima you are the only person in my life whom i miss in every minute.Don't you know how hard it for me ta stay away from you.",maan said lovingly.

"yes yes i know...aapne hum e jada miss kya ya apni geet ko..."
dadima teased maan
.

"Why would i missed that devil,dadi!!!I was actualy feeling reliefed without her daily mischief," maan smirked.But in his heart he knew he missed her especially her mischief.

"Don't lie to me beta.I know you missed her.Geet hai hi itni payari ke koi bhi usse jada der dur nahi rah sakta."


Dadima always wished that geet became her badi bahu.Yes she aware about the age difference between maan and geet and it is the reason behind her aloofness from the marriage topic brought out towards maan and geet's family.there is another big reason that is maan's hatredness towards any emotion like love bcoz of the bad affect of his past.She knew maan never think about geet in this way but she is aware about maan's hidden feelings towards geet which even Maan himself didn't realise till now.


"Dadimaaa,Dadimaa,Where are you?Dadimaa.".a loud voice break her trance.

"here comes your little devil,your Mishty.aab sambhalo isse"!!dadima said lovingly.


Maan shook his head helplessly at her childishness.Both came togather in hall.Geet ran towards Maan and hugged him tightly,Maan also reciprocate the hug dearly.Geets whole body shivered when Maan tighten his hold on her unknowingly.her heart beat quickened at his touch.

"Angel,I miss u so much
",she Whispered
.


.
Love
Saki



Thank u for ur support,dear.

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