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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting story line... do add me to yr pm list
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Nyc part...lykd d way she tried to act...but nw feeling sad 4 her...😭

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awesome part...
ohh poor geet...
precap is interesting...maan feeling guilty...
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wow dis is awesum...

waiting 4 d next part...

post it soon...

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PURE LOVE


Part 4

Maan looking into her retreating back.he wants to stop her.but he knew that geet didn't stop that time due to anger. Maan closed his eyes feeling really guilty.He felt terrible.He mentally cursed himself.Oh god!what had he done.He burst out his frustration on her,his Mishty.He made her cry.he is a devil.a cruel devil who hurt his princess.then he looked at his dadima who gave him a accusing look.His guilt increase further.he silently walk out from the table without have anything.how can he ate when his mishty eat nothing that too for him.he goes to the balcony from which Handa Haveli could be seen.he looked at the haveli with a longing.he want to see only one glimpse of geet.Then instantly he made a decision and goes towards the handa house to bring back happiness in mishty's face.

Maan slowly enter the handa haveli.Rano welcomed him lovingly.Maan touch her feet and took her blessing.

"Maa,aap kaise ho?papaji kaise hain?"

"hum dono hi acche hai beta.We miss u so much.Aap ne to hume vul hi gaye the jaise."

"aisa nahi hai maa thoda busy ho gaya tha.aap ki laadly kaha hai maa?"

rano now looked worried.

"Pata nahi beta kya hua but she came home in a bad mood.Kuch khaya bhi nahi subah se."

Maan now feeling worst.she didn't eat anything from morning top of it he scolded her without her fault.


he guiltily said,

"Oh god, yeh mayne kya kar dia!!
!"

rano now became more confused.

"kya baat hai beta?Did she do something again?"

"No maa usne kuch nahi kya.saab meri galti hai?I poured out my anger on her without any reason.aab to mujhei maanana parega.maa give me some food."

Rano smiled at his plight.she did what he asked.


maan went to her room and silently enter.she is lying on her facing other side and her body sheivered due to crying.maan's heart pierced at the side.he slowly sat on the bed.geet sensed his presence but said nothing.maan saw her tears strain face and feel someone badly stabbed his heart.he get a little closer and cutely said.

"gussa ho"...

geet said nothing.

"bohot gussa ho"...

"mujse baat nahi karogi mishty?"

geet nodded her head.her anger is already melting at his sweet talk.

"nahi manogi"...

she again nodded.

"main sorry kahu tab bhi nahi?"

...
"aur agar main sorry kahu aur dher sari chocklet bhi du tab bhi nahi,bolo mishty?"

geet imidietly sat on the bed and made acute baby face,
"pehle chocolate do fir main sochungi,hmm."


maan knew that her weakness is chockolat.hearing the name of chocolates she will definitely melted.

He gave her the chocolates which he brought for her.
she smiled delightedly seeing the chocolate.maan just hugged her tightly seeing her smile.

"sorry sorry mishty.mujhe maaf kardo."

"angel aap itna sorry maat bolo.maine to
kabka aap ko maaf bhi kar dia.i know u r stressed about something."

maan just smiled at her understanding and gave hr apeck on her forehead.


maan picked the plate to fed her.she took it without any delay.

"tumne khana kyu nahi khaya mishty"?he asked sternly.

"aise hi angel.I don't feel like having anything."she said weakly.

"geet don't lie to me.sach sach batao."

"aap pls gussa maat ho na.wo maine kal aap ko leke bura sapna dekha tha to maine god ji se kaha jabtak aap safely ghar nahi ajate tab tak kuch nani khaunga."

maan just stunned hearing her confession.his heart filled with contentment.he held her close to his chest and lovingly fed her.


Love
saki

Precap
😍sweet memories😍

Edited by mishty..sakii - 13 years ago
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Aaw such a cute n fab upd. Love the way maan manofies his mishty.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the parts..pls add me in ur pm list..
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awesome parts...
loved it...
plz add me to d pm list...
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so sweet... so adorable... loved d update
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awww sooo sweet!
cont soon
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