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Posted: 13 years ago
AAwesome update luvd her cuteee talks Nd take care dear...plz update soon nd get well soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
PURE LOVE




Part-8

shopping


in the evening geet became ready exactly 6 pm.she took extra care for getting ready.when she is thinking where were maan her phone buzzed.she look at the number its maan.she received,

mishty, i am in outside of your house.come fas
t.

geet quickly went outside and saw maan is standing near his car.he wearing blue jeans and a gray casual shirt.looking totally tempting.geet just kept gaping at him.

maan just saw at geet when she came out and couldn't remove his eyes from her.she is wearing a white anarkali suit.the white color of the dress enhance her beauty more.she is looking angelic.her open hair blowing with air.his hand ache to touch the soft strand.her white milky skin glowing in to the moonlight without any make up.almond eyes alluring him to drown into them.lips are nothing less then pink rose petals build up the urge in him to test them until he became breathless.he forgot taking breath.


geet feeling extremly shy and blushed furiously seeing the passion in maan's eyes.she went little closer.now she can smell his perfume which making her mad.there gazed locked and they trying to capture their loved ones as much possible.
their magical moment broke maans phone ringtone.he snapped his eyes and cursed himself for loosing control
.

he told geet to get in the car and received the phone.geet sat in the car and again lost in maan's thought.
maan get in the car after sometime and drove away.


in the car maan and geet both stealing glances now and then.both are quite.but as usual our mishty didn't kept quite.she making a innocent face softly said,

angel aap kya soch rahi ho?kaise mujhe daat sako yehi na...?

maan just rolled his eye at her,

nahi to mishty...main soch raha tha tum abhi bhi baat suru kyu nahi ki..
aur jaab suru karo to taab kayse chup karaya jai ...


geet made a pout at his comment,


wo to aap kabhi bhi kar sakte ho just mujhe kiss karke...i am dying for this.geet murmured.

then scold herself
geet tu bohot badmash ho gayi hai,yeh saab kya soch rahi hai..tu to abhi itni choti si hai yeh saab badho ki baat hai,hai na?

but then again protest herself,
but tera kya kasur !!angel hai hi itna tempting to yeh saab khayal ayegi hi na dimaag me..
its all his fault..hai na
?

now she is satisfied after putting her blame on maan.

maan thought to himself seeing his mishty quite,

yeh itni chup?jarur koi nayi khichri paka rahi hogi.God help me pls
.


They reached in the mall.geet went into a jwelary shop and try to choose something.After half n hour of choosing she took a pair of bangle.meantime maan became really pissed of.but he tried to control his anger.he don't want to upset mishty when she is so much happy.

after buying the gift geet dragged maan in another shop.she wants to buy new dresses.and also scretely wants that dress should be on maans choice.she making a baby face said to maan,

angel mere lie ek suit pasand karo na.i am very confused.mujhe saab acchi lag rahi hai.

maan just stared at her sternly.she made a baby pleading face.now how could maan refuse his mishty when she looked that cute.

don't make faces.choose kar rahi hu..


geet smiled delightedly.

maan choose a red suit after so much thinking.he handed it to geet.

main try karke dekhti hu..geet left excitedly.

she stepped into the changing room.after wearing the suit she was not able to jip up the chain.it stuck.she struggled sometime and then peeped outside.maan facing his other side and typing something in phone.

she softly called him,angel, idhar ayena pls.

maan raised his brow,


kya hua mishty?

mujhse ye chain nahi band ho rahi..it stuck..aap pls kar do na pls.

maan just looked at her puzzled.he knew its not a good idea to go near her.but if he don't do it then geet take mush time.he thought to call salesgirl.but then the thought someone touching his mishty make him furious.though she is a girl but he couldn't bear it
.

after making his mind he stepped into the room.geet slowly facing her back to him.maan just stared at her trough the mirror. looked like the dress was specially made for her.
geet kept looking at him from the mirror and unknowingly got caught in his gaze.both were just totally lost in each other.
maan stepped a bit closer to her from back..unknown to himself.
gently caressing her hairs..moving them softly in right hollow on her neck..to expose the bare part of her back...

geet let out a small moan...

geet closed her eyes as his finger touched her back.
maan's finger started moving from her neck to gently down..caressing her smooth skin.his fingers slowly ran down till the chain of her dress

he lost all his senses so did she.
he didn't even came to know that his finger started unzipping the chain of her suit slowly increasing her heartbeats.
maan just enjoying the softness of her back.he don't realise what he doing.
geet gasped and let out a deep moan which brings maan into his senses.

he immediatly straightend himself and slowly closed the chain.then stepped out quickly from the room.

geet came out from her dreamland.she shuddered at the thought which taken place in a minute ago.
she felt blissed and smiled shyly.


LOVE
SAKI

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Edited by mishty..sakii - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hye mai mar java kya lovely shevly update tha
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

dont mind it .. but dont u think 11 yrs is a bit too much ... if u can edit it a bit ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet is so naughty...
but what if he decides to distance himself from her
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haye Allah what a update yaar
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely n awesome update
cont soon
keep writing
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

dont mind it .. but dont u think 11 yrs is a bit too much ... if u can edit it a bit ...



dear in my ff this age difference is one of the reason that maan not accepting his feeling.so its difficult to change.bt i will think about it.

Pls all of u who like this ff give opinion about this age topic dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
great dear
hope he soon knows about his feelings for her dear

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