AR FF ~Undercover Honeymoon~ Updt part10 - pg40 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi dear just came across ur fic..

its really amazing...

the story line is really catchy..

continue soon..

n do pm me when u update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
so beautiful u r an amazing writer love ur ff anyway I want armaan to fall for ridzi first then ridzi falling for him that would be sooo nice
Posted: 13 years ago
Replies part 4.
@moonlight2630. Thank you!
@harneet. Thanks!
@minaz. *music starts*...*angels appears*...*angels start singing FI-NA-LLYYY...* 😆
Thanks for the comment! And yes it was short but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
@azmii. Thank you! And your welcome!
@nikki. AR + fighting is like: shampoo + conditioner, milk + cookies, petrol/gas + car. AR have to fight or they are uncomplete. 😆 Yup! AR are getting along alright...at last!
@rabia. Thanks for liking their bickering. Hope the dialogues are entertaining enough. Finally they are getting along...about time isn't it?
@KaSh-Maaneet-Fan. Thank you for loving the AR fights! And the romance will come...but later.
@Stupidcupid1234. Yeah I know it was short! Sorry!
@gunjan. Thank you!
@..Ashi_KaJen..Thanks for finding my short update nice. Let's see when they start falling for each other.
@smileever. Thanks and you're welcome!
@dimplesmile. Thank you! You take care too.
@qt4ever. Thanks! And I will continue soon.
@anjalip. Thank you for finding the update wonderful and you are welcome.
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@preety. Fantastic FF? My oh my! Thanks for saying that.
@danny. I know it was short. So sorry! Thanks for liking it anyway.
@meeru_s_armaan. Thanks!
@fri42911. Thanks for finding it awsome!
@gupta.aditi20. It was real? Meaning realistic? Anyway thank you.
@hotKajen. Glad you are enjoying this. Thanks!
@ammy. Thanks for liking it!
@sweetshera. Thank God I'm forgiven. 😆 Woaha! You loved the part and their fights crack you up? *Mona does a happy dance*
That comment made my day!
@rosyammy. A new reader? Anyway thanks for finding it nice. Will pm you but have you pressed the like button on the first page?
@anumeha_rajat. Another new reader? Wow! Thanks for liking finding the storyline catchy. Hope you enjoy the rest of the FF too.
@Priya46. I'm an amazing writer?! 😲 *Mona goes and dies*
Really?! Thanks for saying that. It means a lot to me.
Let's see who falls in love first...Armaan or Riddhima.
@Everyone...it seems like my FF is getting more and more popular. Does that mean I should start behaving like a complete diva? 'I'm the best writer in the world', 'No one can beat me' 'Please kiss the ground I walk on'. 😆 Sorry bad jokes apart. Been watching to many interviews with a certain actor (Misha Collins) and he is having a bad influence on me. 😆
Thanks all of you for liking and commenting this part. 🤗 Hope I haven't forgotten anyone. 😕
Edited by rahmona_pakswe - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rahmona_pakswe

@minaz. *music starts*...*angels appears*...*angels start singing FI-NA-LLYYY...* 😆
Thanks for the comment! And yes it was short but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

LOL! Sorry for Keeping you waiting😳 Uni keeps me Busy and I i have a memory of that of a fish, I honestly though i had commented LOL. Nowww Hurry up and Post the Next Update! :D
Posted: 13 years ago
For PM please press the like button on the post reserved for PM on page 1. Kindly do that even if you are in my buddy list. From now on those who havent added themselves in the list will NOT recieve any PM in the future. Just adding me as a buddy will be of no help because the thing is I have a memory of a goldfish and can't remember who wants a notification and who doesn't. So please help this Ghajini. 😆
Hope you enjoy this part. Press the like button and if you can do write a comment. Positive and negative criticism is always more than welcome.

Part 5

Riddhima woke up early in the morning and for a minute or two she was confused of her whereabouts...then it hit her like someone had banged her head with a big fat iron pan. Crap, it wasn't a nightmare she really was with Armaan. Groaning she quickly got up to rush to the bathroom which by now probably was odour free. She shuddered at the thought of bad smells. But before she could enter the bathroom her eyes fell upon Armaan. He was lying on the sofa with his bare chest exposed and with the blanket dangerously low on his stomach. OMG! Was he naked under the blanket?!! Riddhima quickly looked away. Without looking at him any further she hurriedly picked up her things and ran to the bathroom. She took her merry time with taking a shower and getting ready as she had no desire to get out and get a view of something she didn't want to see. She changed into a white summer dress with thin straps over her shoulder and light blue flower patches along the edges close to her knees. Her makeup was light; lip gloss, some bronzer and waterproof mascara. She combed her hair and decided to let it dry naturally. Looking in the mirror she felt pleased with herself. Riddhima opened the door and walked out to the room and once again her eyes fell on Armaan. This time he was lying on his stomach with the blanket barely covering his behind. OMG he really was naked!!! Riddhima panicked. Where to look? Where to look? The more she tried to look away the more she looked at him. What to do? What to do? Finally she got an idea. She picked up a glass of water and went over to Armaan. With a smug on her face she poured the water over Armaan's head and back.

Armaan jumped up as the water touched him. With a loud thud he fell off the sofa and for a few minute he was confused over where he was. Then sitting on the floor his eyes fell upon a pair of gorgeous legs in sandals. His eyes moved upwards and finally landed on Riddhima's face.

R: 'Good Morning!' she said with a big grin.

A: 'Good Morning?! Subah subah tumhara chehra dekh kar good morning kaise ho sakta hai' (How can it be a good morning when the first thing I see in the morning is your face?) he said making a repulsive face.

R: 'Toh mera kahan good morning tha. Subah subah mujhe tumhe adha nanga dekhna padha' (It wasn't a good morning for me either. The first thing I had to see in the morning was you being half naked) she said with disgusted face.

A: 'Oh hello...koi aur ladki hoti na to ab tak mein yaha naha baitha hota. Hum dono ab tak bed pe...(Oh hello...if there had been any other girl I wouldn't still be sitting here. We both had probably moved over to the bed and...) he said naughtily.

R: 'Armaan!!!' she said covering her ears.

Laughingly he got up from the floor; God he loved getting on Riddhima's nerves. He took a tighter grip of the blanket around his hips and at the same time picked up his boxers which he had taken off during the night. Armaan collected some other things and went to take a shower. Right before entering the bathroom he dropped his blanket and went in. He quickly peeked through the door to see if Riddhima had seen him but she hadn't. She was still standing beside the sofa covering her ears. Darn it! He didn't succeed teasing her any further. Armaan took a shower, shaved and put on light blue shorts and a white t-shirt. Stepping out of the bathroom he came to a stand still. Riddhima was standing next to the window with a peaceful expression on her face and her hair slightly flying in the breeze. Armaan was staring at her completely taken back as he had never seen Riddhima like this. He always saw her yelling or screaming whenever he was around...and she was always in a black power suit. This peaceful Riddhima in a sundress was completely different...but he would never ever admit it to her.

Riddhima felt someone staring at her so she turned around. She saw how Armaan was staring at her and immediately her expressions changed.

R: 'Kya dekh rahe ho?' (What are you looking at?) she asked suspiciously.

A: 'Tumhe dekh raha hon. Main yeh dekh raha tha ke aaj toh tum ek ladki lag rahi aur main soch raha ho ke yeh miracle kaise hua' (I was looking at you. For once you are looking like a woman and I'm wondering how that miracle happened) he said with a small smile playing on his lips.

R: 'Kya miracle? Main toh hon hi ladki. Isme koi shak? (What miracle? I am a woman. Do you doubt it?) she asked dangerously.

A: 'Shak?! Yeh bhi koi puch ne wali baat hai? Of course shak hai. Tum kabhi ladkiyon ki tarah behave hi nahi karti toh shak to padhna hi hai, hai na?' (Doubt?! Do you even need to ask? Of course I have doubts. You never ever behave like a woman so obviously I was doubting you) he said smirking.

R: 'Armaan...I'm in no mood for arguments. Maine abhi tak breakfast nahi kya aur mere mein koi energy nahi hai. Zara nashta karlon phir dekhte hai' (Armaan...I'm in no mood for arguments. I haven't had any breakfast and I simply don't have any energy. Let me have some breakfast then we'll see) she said weary.

A: 'Theek hai, theek hai! To phir chale? Breakfast karne? (Alright, alright! Shall we go then? To have some breakfast?) he asked moving his hand towards the door.

R: 'Koi zuroorat nahi kahin jaane ki. Maine breakfast order kar va liya hai...hum aaj yahin khaenge. Hum ne bahut si planning bhi tho karni hai' (No need for that. I have already ordered breakfast...today we are eating here. We have lots of planning to do you know) she said irritated.

A: 'Lekin tumhe toh nah pata mujhe ky pasand hai? (But you don't know what I like) he said looking at Riddhima.

R: 'Jaanti hon. Isliye maine sab kuch order kar liya' (I know. That's why I have ordered everything) she said in a way hinting that the discussion was over.

About 5 min later there was small knock on the door which Riddhima opened. A man came in with a small breakfast trolley. He left it next to the table and left. Armaan and Riddhima sat down and began to eat. Riddhima had some fresh fruits and croissants while Armaan went for the oats. After a few minutes of silence:

R: 'Chalo...sab se pehle humne apni ek story banana hai ke hum kaise mile aur kaha mile. Uske baad humne yeh dekhna hai ke hum apna kaam kaise shuru kare. Toh koi tumhara idea hai ke hum kaise mile aur kahan? (Ok...first of all we need to come up with a story on how we met and when. Then we need to see how we are going to approach this case. So any idea how we met and where?) she asked calmly.

A: 'Hum ek 'bar' mein mile the jahan tum mere amazing pick-up line so bahut impress hui thi' (We met in a bar of course where you were highly impressed by my amazing pick-up line) he said confidently.

R: 'Armaan...tumse toh puchna hi bekaar hai. Mujhe toh tumse puchna hi nahi chah ye tha' (Armaan...there's no use asking you. I shouldn't have asked you anything) she said rolling her eyes.

A: 'Kya? Yeh acha idea nahi tha?' (What? It wasn't a good idea?) he asked in a teasing tone.

R: 'Acha nahi tha! Kya mujhe dekhne se lagta ke main "bar" mein jaati hongi? Nahi na?! Isliye yeh kahani nahi chalegi. Hume kuch aur soch na padhe ga' (No it wasn't! Do I really look like someone who goes to bars? No? Then this story won't work) she said decidingly.

They continued to eat and squabble. At last they decided upon a story. They had both met at a local grocery shop while looking for readymade meals for one person. After that they had continuously bumped into each other like destiny wanted to bring them together. They decided to exchange phone numbers after some time and when Armaan finally asked Riddhima out they went on a date. They immediately clicked and there was no going back. The dated each other for about 5 months before Armaan asked Riddhima to marry him. Their wedding was held in a beautiful venue and all of their friends and family had gathered to celebrate their special day. Riddhima had worn a beautiful saree in gold with red details and Armaan had worn a black sherwani with gold and red details. The food was from all over the world to suit the taste of everyone.

R: 'Ab yeh toh faisla ho gaya hai. Ab yeh sochna hai ke hum kya kaam karte hai' (So now that's decided. What we now need to decide is our professions) she said while thinking deeply.

A: 'Teacher!!! Tumhe toh pakka teacher banna chah ye' (You should absolutely be a teacher) he said grinning from ear to ear.

R: 'Oh shut up Armaan! Phir toh tumhe gigolo banna chah ye' (Oh shut up Armaan! Then you should be a gigolo) she said taunting Armaan.

And once again their verbal fight began and words were thrown at each other like confetti. After bickering for half an hour they finally decided upon Riddhima being a journalist and Armaan a fitness instructor. Happy with the outcome both began to think about how to gather and collect information to solve this case as soon as possible before anyone of them killing each other.

To be continued...
Edited by rahmona_pakswe - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved AR's fights
adorable
cant wait 4 their acting
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update
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relii cute luvd der cute little fyts adorable
cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon
fanx 4 da pm x 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Cnt. soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing update

AR little fights were so cute

nice part

liked it

continue soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear
luvd it
eewww! Armaan is so shameless yaar!!!
He was actually naked under the blanket!!!
So for the 1st tym Armaan felt Riddhima 2 b sumwat difrnt. cool!
wow nyc story of their 1st meeting till wedding.
i really hope these 2 can act according to the story they hv made.
w8ing fr more
update soon.

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