AR FF ~Undercover Honeymoon~ Updt part10 - pg40 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Didnt I leave a Comment for Part 3? I thought I Edited my post LOL. Ooopsie.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

hey koi ni ghajini.. ko body pe likhne ki aadat thi waha se yaad aa jaata tha usey...

tum bhi waisa hi karna...

Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Sorry for not updating more quickly. I just hate sending PMs because it takes so much time. Yes I'm lazy. 😆 Thanks for the lovely comments and as always I have replied to all of you. Anyway here is the next part. Sorry it's a bit short but please do tell what you think of this part.

Part 4

Both entered their hotel room bickering forgetting all about being civilised to each other.

R: 'Armaan! Tum bilkul impossible ho! Khane peene mein kitne picky ho. Yeh nahi khana voh nahi khana. Tumhare nakhre toh chote bacho se bhi ziada hai!' (Armaan! You're impossible! You are so fussy with your food. Don't want to eat this, don't want to eat that. You are worse than a small kid) she ranted.

A: 'Nakhre?! Voh nakhre nahi hai! Main health conscious hon isliye main har cheez nahi khata. Itni sexy body ainvy toh ni nah milti kuch mehnat bhi toh karni padhti. Ab mein tumhari tarah thodi ho joh apni looks ki koi fikr hi nahi hai' (Fussy? I'm not being fussy; only health conscious that's why I don't eat everything. You don't get a sexy body just like that; a little hard work is also required. Beside I'm not like you who don't seem to care about your looks) he said trying to defend himself.

R: 'Tumhe kya lagta main apni fikr nahi karti? Isliye ke main dusri ladkyion ki tarah clown jaisa make-up nahi karti? Unki tarah fashion nahi karti aur un ki tarah tang aur chote chote kapde nahi pehenti? (You think I don't care about my looks? Only because I don't paint my face like a clown? Or follow the fashion like them or wear tight and short dresses?) she said folding her arms.

A: 'Pffft! Tumhe chote kapde mein dekhna kaun chahta? Please Riddhima keep your clothes on' (Pfft! Who wants' to see you in short dress anyway? Please Riddhima keep your clothes on) he said with a slight disgusted face.

R: 'Ab mein toh tumhe dikha ke hi chodongi' (Someday I'll show you) she muttered.

A: 'Kuch kaha?' (Did you say something?)

R: 'Nahi kuch nahi...' (No, nothing...) she said looking away. Then she remembered something 'OMG!!!!'

A: 'Kya?!' (What?!)

R: 'Humne Shubhankar sir ko phone karna tha!' (We were supposed to phone Shubhanker sir!) she said worriedly.

A: 'Crap, crap, CRAP!!! Main abhi phone lagata hon' (Crap, crap, CRAP!!! I'll call him immediately) he said and grabbed his phone.

As both had been busy bickering they has completely forgotten an important task. Armaan dialled the number quickly to Shubhankar. After 3 bells he picked it up.

Shubhankar: 'Hello?'

A: 'Hello Sir, main Armaan bol raha ho.' (Hello Sir, it's me Armaan) he said in a very serious tone.

S: 'Oh...hello Armaan, abhi tak tum zinda ho? Main toh samjha tha ke ab tak tum dono ek dusre ka murder kar chuke ho ge' (Oh..hello Armaan, are you still alive? I thought by now you had killed each other) he said sniggering.

A: 'Sir aap bhi?' (Sir you too?) he said helplessly.

S: 'Sorry sorry, lekin main apne aap ko rokh nahi paya' (Sorry sorry, but I couldn't help myself) he said trying hard not to laugh out loud then he quickly composed himself. 'Acha toh batao ke kya progress hui hai?' (So tell me the latest progress)

Armaan put on the speaker so Riddhima could join in the conversation too. As there wasn't much to report they cut the call short. Looking at the time they realised it was quite late and it was time to go to sleep. They still hadn't unpacked the suitcases so they got themselves busy. Both were working extra slow to avoid the inevitable but in the end they had to face the reality.

A: 'So sleeping arrangements...uska kya karein?' (So sleeping arrangements...what should we do about that?) he asked tentatively

R: 'Pata nahi...main bhi uske bare mein soch rahi thi' (Don't know...I was also thinking about it) she said a bit hesitant.

A: 'Agar tum chaho toh tum bed pe soh sakti ho aur mein sofe pe' (If you want then you can sleep on the bed and I can sleep on the sofa) he said trying to find a good solution.

R: 'Kyon?! Kyonke mein aurat hon aur tum mard? Pffft...kabhi nahi!' (Why? Because I'm a woman and you're a man? Pfft...absolutely not!) she said folding her arms.

A: 'Arre yaar main chivalrous ban ne ki koshish kar raha tha' (Hey I was trying to be chivalrous here) he said defensively.

R: 'Chivalrous or chauvinist?' she said sarcasm dripping from her voice.

A: 'Agar tumhe itna hi shauk hai toh tum sofe pe soh jao!' (If you are so keen on it then why don't you sleep on the sofa?) he almost yelled.

R: 'Kya tum mere pe hukam chala rahe ho? Ab toh mein bilkul tumhari baat suno gi! (Are you ordering me now? No way I will listen to you) she said through gritted teeths.

A: 'Toh phir kya kare?!' (Then what should we do?!) he said frustrated.

R: '50-50!' she let out.

A: 'Hunh?!' he said looking confused.

R: 'Mera matlab ke hum bari bari soh jaate hai ek din tum sofe pe soh jao aur ek din main. Bilkul fair aur equal' (What I mean is we can take turns...you can sleep on the sofa one day and me the next. It's absolutely fair and equal) she said feeling very content with herself.

A: 'Acha idea...lekin pehle kaun soyega sofe pe?' (A very good idea...but how do we decide who will sleep first on the sofa?) he said furrowing his eyebrows.

R: 'Hmmm...'

A: 'Idea! Let's flip a coin!' he said smilingly. 'Lekin agar tumhare paas koi aur idea hai toh tum bata sakti ho' (But if you have any other idea then you are free to express it)

R: *shakes her head*

A: 'Ok...heads or tails?' he asked her.

R: 'Heads!'

A: 'Of course! I should have known' he said rolling his eyes.

Armaan flipped the coin in to the air and as it landed on the floor both rushed to look at the coin. It was tails! Armaan had to sleep on the sofa and Riddhima on the bed. As the decision was fair no one said anything against it. Riddhima hurriedly went to the bathroom before Armaan. She had heard things about men and bathroom and she was not going to use it after Armaan had been there. Yuck! Riddhima went in to brush her teeth and change her clothes. She had been in great dilemma over which nightwear to bring with her. Winnie the Poh PJs may not have been the best option as she had a reputation to keep. She was known for being tough and strong not soft and cute. In the end she had brought her silk dark blue nightie with a robe and another set just like this one but in black. Riddhima took a deep breath and walked confidentially out of the bathroom. Without looking at Armaan she silently walked over to the bed and pulled away the covers. She took off her robe and laid it on the side of the bed. Then she pulled away the covers and sat comfortably down. Pulling the blankets over her she grabbed the book next to her and started to read it.

Armaan sitting on the sofa had seen the whole scenario with Riddhima. He was surprised over Riddhima's choice of night wear. He had expected a granny style night wear instead she was wearing a beautiful blue silk nightie. Realising the bathroom was available he went over to brush his teeth and change his clothes. By the time he got out Riddhima had turned off the light and fallen asleep. Or had she? What did he care...he was tired and wanted to go to sleep. He had already taken one of the pillows and a blanket from the bed while Riddhima still was in the bathroom so he lied down on and pulled the blankets over him. Soon he was fast asleep.

Riddhima was still awake. She had only pretended to be sleeping. Had she fooled him? Don't know but she really didn't want to talk to Armaan as the entire situation felt uncomfortable. Riddhima carefully raised her head to look at Armaan but he seemed to be out like the dead. She laid her head back on the pillow releasing the breath that she he had been holding. Tomorrow they had to continue with their case and she was dreading it...not the case itself but working with Armaan. With those thoughts running around in her head she yawned and a few minutes later she was in a deep sleep.

To be continued...

(soon I hope)

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Edited by rahmona_pakswe - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Lovely Update! BUT BUT BUT It was Short :( I was thoroughly enjoying it that i didnt realize when the Update had came to an End.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res...

~~EDITED~~

hey im so glad u updated
it was really good
they fight alot😆
but i think they're actually getting along with each other
update soon
nikki
=D
Edited by -nikki- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Greaat paart. lovinn AR. hehehe lovee theiirr begininn bickerinng. annd they are slowllyy slowlyy gettinn along with each othaa. update super soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved AR
loved their fights
cant wait 4 some AR romance
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Short update
But love the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Hey TM
good part..though short...but really nice one
im looking forward to how these enemies turn into lovers
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update...thx for the pm

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