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Posted: 13 years ago

atlast u gave update

missing ur updates sooo much...!!!!!!!!!!

superb update

talli maan🤪

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear
And u wrote it when in ur lect was superb..
Continue soon
Thanks for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update
I loved it
Maan Talli ho gaya ab kya hoga
Are you hinting towards a Kurbaan Hua sequence?
Waiting to read what Geet will do now
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Posted: 13 years ago
Enjoy! And guys from now on I will be updating this ff only on weekends cause of my other work. Thanks! :)

Part 29
Geet moves herself towards maan and Pari. While Pari's friends are shocked to see Pari completing her dare. Their mouths open like a big fat O. Geet had it enough. She comes near both of them and tears them apart like you tear a paper in 1 second.
"Yeh aap kya ker rahay hain?"
Without listening to Maan nor Pari's answer she holds on to Maan's hand tightly and takes him out of the dance floor. Pari just stood there staring off the place where Geet stood a second ago. "What the.."
Geet and maan came back to the same spot where they both sat couple of minutes ago. Geet's anger had reached the roof. She didn't even know why she was getting jealous. But still she didn't care.
"Maan sir! aap kya ker rahay thay abhi?"
Maan gave her a look like 'isn't it too obvious' look.
"Geet what's wrong with you? I was enjoying my night."
Maan was still drunk than before but he was still in a condition where he can reply to Geet. While Geet got more angry. And then she spots Pari coming this way.
"Yeh idher kyun aa rahi hai" whispered Geet to herself. She had it enough. It is time for her to go talk to her.
"Maan sir I will be back. Aap please idher hi rahiye ga."
Geet gets up and leaves but stops midway just to check on Maan. And then she left. She pulls Pari's arm on her way.
"Yeh tum kya ker rahi ho? Stop pulling me?"
Pari tried to free her arm from geet's hand. They both were now in the corner where nobody was. Geet finally let go of Pari's arm.
"What the heck? Is action ka kya matlab?" Asked Pari
"Tumhay sharam nahi aati. Tum aik stranger se dance ker rahi ho? Tum logon ko zara si bhi sharam nahi aati?"
"Stranger? koun woh Maan Singh Khurana?"
Geet nodded but Pari started laughing. Geet couldn't figure out what was so funny.
"Tum hans rahi ho?"
"Oh please! This is the biggest joke ever. Woh Maan Singh Khurana MD of the most popular company Khurana Constructions."
"Daikho i know he is very popular. But you don't know him from heart. Waisay bhi woh mere saath hain."
"You mean as your date?"
Geet nodded without noticing what she had actually said. Pari shocked but not in a bad way as in a good way. Geet then just realizes what Pari had said and she starts nodding her head in NO.
"Nahin nahin. Mera matlab woh nahi tha."
"Oh come on. Don't lie.Wisay bhi maine tumhari aankhon main woh chammak daikhi hai jab tum Maan ki taraf daikhti ho. And also your jealousy when I was dancing with him."
Geet silent. Trying to think what Pari had said.
"Ok i won't interfere in your 'love' story! You carry on and good luck."
Pari leaves smiling. Geet doesn't stop her because she was too busy thinking about what Pari just said.

Over to Maan:
"Yeh Geet kahan reh gayi hai?"
Maan was waiting for her for so long. He was now suffocating because of the chaos. So he decided to go out in the open air and relax there for a little while.

Over to Geet:
Geet is also thinking deeply about Maan and their moments. Their first meeting, their second meeting, and on and on. How he saved her whenever she was in trouble. Geet automatically smiled. But she soon realized that she is thing about her BOSS.
"Geet pagal ho gayi hai. He is your Boss for crying out loud. Bas Geet! No more thinking about him."
Geet stops herself thinking further bout him. She goes back to the place where Maan was sitting. She was shocked to find Maan no where. Geet got scared. She looked here and there.
"Ab yeh kahan chalay gaye hain? Maan Sir!"
Due to loud music, Geet's shouts sounded like whispers. Geet was getting very worried. She knew he was drunk and drunk people don't know what they are doing and where they are going. Geet gets more scared each and every second. Tears started to roll down out of Geet's eyes.
"Maan sir aap kahan hain? Please aap wapis aa jayein. I will never leave you again in this condition. Please Maan sir!"
Geet started to cry really badly. Her eyes were turning red and she now had hiccups. She finally decides to go outside and check there. When she goes outside she still didn't see Maan anywhere.
"Maan sir andar bhi nahin hain aur bahar bhi nahin. Gaye to gaye kahan. Aey ALLAH ji please meri madat kerain. Please."
Right then geet sees a shadow of a man from behind her. He puts his hand on her shoulder and she turns around. She was so happy to see Maan standing before her. Geet hits Maan (not hard) on her shoulder.
"Aap kahan chalay gaye thay? Pata hai main kitni pareshaan ho gayi thi! Main pagal ho gayi thi aap ko dhoondtay dhoondtay."
"Geet main idher hi tha. Just out here. mujhay suffocation ho rahi thi so socha main bahar air kha loon.Per tum itni pareshaan kyun ho rahi ho?"
"Pareshaan?"
"Tumhay kya laga ke main bhaag jaon ga ya phir ghaib ho jaon ga?"
Geet didn't know why she was so worried for Maan. Maan notices Geet's tears.
"Geet tum ro rahi ho?"
Geet turns around and wipes her tears.
"What the heck is wrong with me? Why am I feeling like this? Why was I so worried about Maan sir." Thought Geet to herself.

Precap: Geet starting to feel something for Maan


Hope you liked it. Please do leave your lovely comments and also hit the like button. :) ~Sara~
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome awesome update
really loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb!finally geet starts realisng hr feelings 4 maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow superb
just love it yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
oho ho...precap is good...geet feeling something fr maan...m happy...
geet jealous of pari...he he he...
wonderful update...
i loved it ...
thank u very much fr such a lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was just superb dear..

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