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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!awesme part.i thnk we gonna a get hum tum seq
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoem sara
lolz chadha toh gaya or yash was too coll
and geet omg she is too naughty
and nupur that mouse part was too cool
and yash insult was too good and meera attitude answers
and geet and maan talk
and maan concern cause of her out of breath
and geet fighting with maan for not coming to office after office hours
lolz let see wat update bring in their life
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Bechara Mr. Chadda sabne milke usi Ullu bana diya
Yash is cool
Loved Yash and Meera interaction
Geet , Maan and party is going to be super interesting
Curious to know how will they complete the blueprints
Continue soon
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Bechara chaada sahab...kya plannning ki thi unki roup ne...wow luvd it plzz cont soon
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that was such a fun update...their gang is cool yaar
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awesome ff
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NOTE: thx for ur lovely comments!!! sorry guys for such a delay.. anyways enjoy and sorry for any excuses! :) ENJOY!!
PART 27:
it's now 5:00 pm..
geet and maan are in their cabins..
geet tries to finish her work so she doesnt have to come back at night alone..
maan calls geet..
rrriiinnnggg..
geet: hello?
maan: geet.. it's 5:00 pm..
geet: sir agar apnay mujhay time batane ke liye call kiya hai to please i can see it.,
maan: then why r u still here if u know the time?
geet: ji?
maan: (annoyed) geet ghar jao.. get ready for the party then i will pick u up at 6 sharp..
GEET'S pov:
oh teri..
geet u r so stupid..
how can u forget about the party..
shaid kaam ke pressure ki wajah se main party ke baray main bhool gayi..
but yaar..
i didnt finish my work..
matlab raat ko aana hi paray ga..
nahi nahi.
then how will i finish my work..
pichlay kuch ghanton se main to sirf 2 lines hi likh payi hn.. is ki info to maan sir ke paas hai.. i know little bit.. unke baghair main nahin kuch ker sakti..
aur agar main unko kehti help kerne ke liye to unhon ne bari bari moti moti aankhain dikhani thi..
aur kehna tha: geet! yeh hum raat ko kerain gain.. ab kuch aur ker lo..
but lets try at least..
geeT: oh sir.. yes i will in a sec.. but before i leave sir i wanted to say.. can u give me info about the project.. jo humne bluprints rat ko tayyer kerni hai main apnay ghar main ker loon gi.. subha subha aap ko ready milain gi..
maan: geet! ghar jao.. maine kaha hai na hum raat ko discuss kerain gain..
lo inki to jaisay sui atak gayi hai..
bas inka dil hai ke main raat ko idher aaon aur woh bhi in ke saath..
Allah ji!
yeh kaisi mushkil hai..
geet baad main soch laina is ke baare main.. abhi ghar ja.. is se pehle yeh phir bhadak parain..
DUSHT DHANAV!

NO ONE'S POV:
geet: ok sir i m leaving then.. see u at 6..
geet hangs up..
maan stares at her through the window...
geet doesnt notices it because she is too busy packing her stuff..
her table is a mess..
maan smiles as he stares at her..
and she leaves..
maan comes back to reality..
maan: pagal hai yeh ladki aur mujhay bhi ker dai gi.. how am i gonna tolerate her at the party? aur tu maan why do u smile when u stare at her.. ghoorna band ker aur kaam ker..
maan leaves after a lil while to his house..

over to geet:
geet is in her room..
no one is home except of her dad..
geet is looking throught her dresses..
trying to find a suitable dress to wear..
geet: lo ab main kounsa suit pehnoon.. mujhay to pata bhi nahi hai ke kounsi jaga ja rahay hain.. geet tu bhi na pagal hai.. jaga to pooch leti.. aur agar maine kuch ghalat pehan liya to maan sir mujhya kacha chaba jain gain..
geet shivers..
geet: geet waisay.. tujhay kabhi problem nahi hoti thi dresses pehne main.. phir ab kyunn?
geet takes six dresses out of her closet.. she throws them on her bed.. she is surely frustrated..
she picks one dress after another..
she examines each of the dress for 2 seconds n throws it back on the bed..
geet hits her forehead hard..
geET: SAYYAPPA! ab kya karoon????!!!

over to maan:
he's driving peacefully to geet's house..
he's wearing black suit..
he's finally reaches geet's house..
he honks the car..
nobody comes out..
he honks again..
still no one comes out..
he is frustrated now..
he calls geet..
rrriiinnnggg...
geet doesnt pick her phone because her phone is on silent..
maan: (really frustrated now) yeh geet bhi na! mainay usay kaha tha ke main pure 6 baje uske ghar aaon ga usko lene ke liye.. abhi tak nahi nikli..
maan gets out of the car..
he walks up to geet's house porch..
he knocks on the door..

maan's pov:
i cant believe it that i am picking up my SECRETARY for a party..
and now i am standing at her door like romeo waiting for juliet..
oh maan! what are u thinking??
i knock again louder!
somebody finally opens the door after several attempts of banging my hand against the door..
a tall man in his late 40's come out..
"ji aap koun" came the voice of that man..
maan: emm.. i am maan singh khurana.. main geet ko laine aaya hoon..

NO ONE'S POV:
mr. handa looks in his eyes..
trying to judge him..
what kind of a person he is?
mr. handa: (serious now) how do u know my daughter?
maan: main us ka boss hoon.. aaj hamaray clients ne aik surprise birthday party throw ki hai for his son.. so i m just hear to pick her up..
mr. handa: oh acha.. tussi ander aao.. baar kyun khaday huway ho?
maan nods n goes inside..
right then mr. handa gets a call..
mr. handa: hello?
he's leading maan to the living room while talking on the phone..
rano: (on the other end) ji tussi kithay ho? maain aap ka intezaar ker rahi hoon.. main rajji ke saath xxx shopping maal main hoon.. tussi aa jao abhi isi waqt werna main naraz ho jaon gi..
mr. handa: haan haan main aa raha hoon.. wait kerna..
he hangs up..
mr. handa : (to maan) ji i am sorry.. woh meri wife aur merti beti mera intezaar ker rahay hain.. emergency hai jana paday ga.. samjha kerain wife alert..
maan smiles..
maan: yea u go ahead..
mr. handa: geet! beta thallay aa! (come down)
geet yells from upstairs..
eet: baba main abhi nahi aa sakti.. main tayyar ho rahi hn..
but mr. handa doesnt hear her reply because he has already left..
maan just ignores her reply..
maan waits for her more than 10 mins..
maan's pov:
6:15 pm ho gaye hain aur abhi tak yeh ladki tayyar nahi huwi..
mr. sharma hamara wait ker rahay hon gaye..

NO ONE'S POV:
maan had it enough..
maan: geet! geet!
geet in her room still confused between her dresses hears maan's voice..
geet: (shocked)oh teri maan sir? nahin geet. maan sir nahi ho saktay.. agar maan sir hotay to baba ne mujhay pata diya hota ke woh aa gaye hain.. tu bhi na.. baba hon gaye..
geet: baba! main aa rahi hn.. bs 2 min aur.. abhi maan sir bhi to nahin aaye..
maan rolls his eyes..
maan gets up n goes upstairs..
maan: lagta hai isko ab neechalay khud le ker aana hi ho ga.. per is ka room kahan hai??
maan reaches the 2nd floor.. he looks here and there.. but then sees the only room with lights on.. the room is in the corner.. maan walks up to that room..
through the window he can see geet babbling to herself..
maan knocks on the door..
knock-knock..
geet: aayi..
geet goes to open the door.. and found maan standing in front of her eyes.. she is totally shocked..
geet: AAP?!
maan: geet ahista bolo.. main behra nahi hn.. aur haan main..
maan comes in and stands next to her bed.. he stares at her dresses.. geet follows him..
geet: per aap yahan kya ker rahay ho?
maan: geet tum shaid bhool rahi ho ke aaj maine tumhay pick kerna tha.. party ke liye.. aur neeche main pichle 15 mins se baitha hoon.. aur haan aik aur baat jo maine abhi tumhara naam liya tha neeche se woh tumhare baba nahi thay woh main tha.. woh ghar pe nahin hain..
geeT: kahan gaye hain woh?
maan: apni wife and beti ke paas..
geet: oh..
geet goes back to her bed and picks all of her dresses.. geet is still confused.. maan notices her confusion.. maan slowly walks up to geet..
geet notices him coming closer..
he takes one step forward and she takes 2 steps back..
geet: s-sir a-aap kya k-ker rahay h-ho?? mere kareeb mat aayen..
geet hits the wall..
maan is only 2 inches away from her..
mahiii...
maan: geet?
geet: (frightened) j-ji?
maan: lo apne dresses mujhay do.. i will help u chose a dress..
mahiii..
geet is dumbstruck and she nods like a robot..
maan takes her dresses and places it on the bed..
he examines all of the dresses for a lil while..
while geet is still pinned to the wall..
maan finally comes across a white dress.. (the dress geet wore on their confession day in GHSP)
maan: geet,, yeh wala pehan lo..
geet comes back from la la land..
geet: ji..
she takes the dress..
maan: i'll be waiting for u downstairs.. jaldi kerna..
geet nods n maan leaves..
after 5 mins geet comes downstairs..
maan looks at her and he's mesmerized by her beauty..
he doesn't see anything but her?
has he ever seen such an innocent and beautiful thing on earth??
no..
geet notices him staring at her..
she gets this weird chills down her body..
maan finally get out of his geet land..
he was actually getting jealous because geet was looking dead gorgeous that any guy will go gaga over her at the party.. and he didnt want that. anything but that..
geet: (awkwardly) maan sir? chalain?
all he could blurt out was, "hmmm.."
words couldnt find its way out through maan's tongue..
geet is also mesmerized by maan's beauty.. after all he's the most bechelor person in delhi. no not only in delhi but in india.. all the girls drool over him.. they would just want one lil moment with him.. if not that then they just want him to say their names one.. and no complaints will be given afterwards.. geet is the most luckiest girl on earth.. she's his personal secretary after all.. any girl would die for this kind of post.. staying with maan singh khurana 24/7.. ok maybe not 24 hrs but almost spending the whole day with him is the most amazing thing..
maan and geet finally reach maan's car. they both sit down.. it's dead silent.. maan starts driving. no one talks.. hoping that the other will start the conversation..
after 15 misn of driving they finally reach disco.. the whole disco was reserved for mr. sharma's guests..
geet didnt know where they were going for the party till now.. after seeing the place, her eyes popped.. she have never visited a disco before.. she hated going there.. her friends would encourage her to hop along with them to disco.. but she would just make a new excuse everytime..
geet: yahan party hai?
maan: haan geet..
geet: (innocently) but i've never been to a disco.. n i hate that place..
maan smirks..
he was happy to hear that from her lips.. public discos are not really friendly places to visit.. especially for girls like geet.. he was beyond happy.. a word that probably doesnt even exist..
maan: geet it's ok.. this a private disco.. they are better than public discos.. yahan pe double securtity hoti hai..
geet: per phir bhi yeh disco hai.. maine kitna suna hai is jagah ke baare main yahan pe ladkiyan (geet shuts her eyes in disgust and maan was loving it) per yahan pe to bande drink kertay hain na? chi chi.. Allah ji! aur phir bhi security mere hamesha aas paas to nahi ho gi na.
maan: per main to hoon ga na..
geet couldnt believe her ears.. maan singh khurana is going to help a girl.. geet just smiles.. they both enter the disco..
it was pitch black..
geet walked a lil further but then...

precap: kya ho ga wahan??


IMORTANT NOTe: ok guys! a long update! please do hit the like button and do comment! i love reading ur comments! cant wait! AND ONE MORE THING GUYS! ITS IMPORTANT FOR ME! i wanted to know if u like the way the story line is going.. is it going so slow?? if u dont like it then should i go a lil faster.. but then i wont be able to promise u about giving some fun moments between geet and her gang! and maan ne bhi to milna hai na unse abhi! ;) but do tell me if i should go faster! but then again gangs ke scenes nahin aa paye gain.. maybe bhot thoday!! so do reply! :) ~sara~
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update
curios about next update cont. soon



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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear
no u are ok dear
we love it
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