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Posted: 13 years ago

very very nice update...

thank you that you noticed my request and showed us.. what kind of dressing sytle our nupur used to wear...
i am happy that you showed both their inner feelings towards each other..
is mayank falling for nupur??????????????????????
and what does nupur feel for mayank...
she also have some feeling for mayank... the way he used to drag her towards her on bed...
what he wanted to show...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahhh...Fantuuu...dat Was a Masterpiece ⭐️👏
u left me speechless...after this...Do Continue soon This Time...plzzz...😒
i m really reallyyy eager to read next...😳
Gr8 Job...👍🏼
Luv ya...God Bless...❤️🤗
Annu😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Har pal hai jawan, har lamha haseen hai
Jahan hum hain wahan koi gumm nahin hai
Yeh jo hai zindagi khushiyon mein doobi hai
Hum toh yunhi jeetay hain
Rozana, subah leke aati hai roshni
Rozana, hai shaam laati dilkashi
Jaagi si zindagi hai, yeh gaati zindagi hai
Jaagi si zindagi hai, rozana
Rango ki baarishein hai, aisi nawazishein hain
Rango ki baarishein hai, rozana

Dil chahta hai har pal muskraane ko
Koi dhun haule haule gungunaane ko
Jo bhi mila hai usko dost hi samjho
Zindagi jashn hai jaise manaane ko
Jo bhi suna usse khushkhabri jaana
Woh o o khushiyon ko humne pehchaana, rozaana
Rozana, subah leke aati hai roshni
Rozana, hai shaam laati dilkashi
Yehi hai kahaani apni, yehi zindgaani apni
Yehi hai kahaani apni, rozaana
Rango ki baarishein hai, aisi nawazishein hain
Rango ki baarishein hai, rozaana

Phoolon mein khushboo, kaliyon mein rang jaise
Hum mein hai jeenay ki ik umang jaise
Umeedon ki hai buji ragini si
Dil mein hai har nayi ik tarak jaise
Sapno ka jahaan hai jaana pehchaano
Ik naya hai sapna dekha rozaana
Rozana, subah leke aati hai roshni
Rozana, hai shaam laati dilkashi
Bas hai yehi tamasha, har pal hai yeh aasha
Bas hai yehi tamasha, rozaana
Rango ki baarishein hai, aisi nawazishein hain
Rango ki baarishein hai, rozaana

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Posted: 13 years ago
BEAUTIFULLL!!!!!! m in love with this ff even more now!! Mayank is simply extraordinary but Nupur in herself is veryyy special!!!
lovingthe characters and they way u write1! i mean kinzu u just write so damn good!!!!!!! love u bestieee!!!!!!!! mwahhh!!!!!!
eagerly waiting for the next part!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
another fab update and no the story isnt moving at snail's pace at all👍🏼 I'm loving each and every single moment and development in it😃 i knew nupur had some sort of dark past to make her act that way i'm guessing she was forced into marriage with her first husband or something🤔 the end was the best bit from the update😍 i love the way you described her feelings and her reaction to his closeness shows that his proximity effects her as well😍
amazingly written thanks for the pm🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing
Thanxx for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u guys ..
okay now firstly, all of those who ask me when will i update, guys .. i guess u all should have recognized the pattern that i update on alternative days ..
secondly, this update .. ermm .. turned out something i didn't expect .. 😳


Chapter # 8

Next morning and many more mornings in the near future, nupur woke up to a soft caress on her cheek and a gentle soothing whisper of "good morning". It was an addiction; an addiction which didn't let nupur sleep the whole night when mayank was away for some crime site visit with his clients.

"seems you didn't sleep the whole night", mayank remarked as he saw nupur's puffy eyes, vigilantly concentrating on a magazine,

"I didn't, you've made me an addict", she replied, in a stony rock voice and went in the kitchen to make him some warm breakfast.

"addicts normally enjoy their drug, you don't seem that pleased", he followed her and stood on the kitchen door, crossing his arms around his chest, observing her keenly.

"addicts enjoy till there is supply of drug, ask them when they have to live without it", she cracked the egg with a force and started beating it vigorously.

"nupur ..",

"coffee or tea", she cut his statement, giving an indication that she didn't want any soft talk.

"whatever u want", he said and went to change, hearing the egg being beaten with much more force now.

**

A coconut.

He was heading towards home through busy streets when this struck him. Nupur is a coconut. Hard, unbreakable and strong from outside and soft and gullible from inside, that is the reason she keeps that oh ' so strong I -don't -need -anyone masquerade.

"silly", he scolded himself, "this is so damn clich, better was expected out of you Sharma", he sighed, "nupur is not as simple as a coconut, she is deep, she is complex, she is tangled".

He reached home in this argument, and following the routine since a couple of weeks, nupur was waiting for him on the dinner table.

"good evening", she smiled and mayank returned back the gesture.

This one smile, made him long to come back home as soon as he use to leave it. Sometimes he thought he had turned into a crazy freak that used to look towards night rather than mornings.

"how was the day?", she asked taking his briefcase. He loved these little wifely things she used to do. It was just so amazing.

"my day was fine, hope yours' went well", he stroked her cheek and she smiled wider, "it did!, I have almost taken pooja into confidence, she has promised me to let those assholes sign the will"

"nupur, you can be polite about those kids, ", he looked in her eyes, "please", he added, being sure of the effects, but she remained stiff, "I can't", she breathed deep, "go freshen up, I'll heat the dinner".

She went in the kitchen and sighing mayank went to change.

The dinners were normally cooked by nupur, because according to her, she cooked better than mayank. Apparently, the time they both had decided to spent together, till the property transfer was going smooth, they were on friendly terms, almost romantic terms, where mayank did use to steal a couple of cheek kisses here and there and saw no strong resistance from her side except for glares, which he thought was utterly cute. No matter how much he longed to kiss her tender lips, he decided to go slow.

Going slow brought him to the reality that she had to leave, and here he used to feel his world coming to a halt. Nupur married for purpose, promising mayank a 15 % share of her part, and mayank smiled and agreed.

It was never that 15%, it was always that glimpses of hopes to get her, and he did get her. Comforting her in his arms was a dream come true, but nupur had to leave, and the problem was ' he didn't want her to leave, not today, not tomorrow, never.

"seems you are very near your eternal dream", mayank said casually , flipping thru channels and nupur smiled wider , reading her novel, "yes!", she sighed dreamily and mayank turned to her to see the glow in her eyes.

"it .. it would be just so great to OWN things, it .. it would amazing, right mayank?", she closed her novel and moved close to mayank, who observed the glint in her eyes and then placed his arms around her, "I bet it is', he tucked a few strands of hair behind her ears and feeling ticklish, she hugged him, "I am sure it is", she sighed, with her body breathing calmly against his body.

He hug tightened from her side and slowly stroking, he looked down to see that she had closed her eyes and entered her dreamland. He sighed and smiled, wonder what her dreams were like?. One moment she was an innocent child demanding apology and the other she was a vicious woman.

He carefully slid in the blanket, with nupur in her arms and kept on stroking till late. Just when he closed his eyes and sleep was about to engulf him, she said, "mayank.."

He opened his eyes with a start, "you are awake", he moved a bit away to look in her eyes and she smiled, "yes, I am in a mood to talk, is cooperation expected?"

"no!, it's midnight, go to sleep", he pulled her close and started stroking , and nupur giggled, "come on mayank, I am not a baby", she placed her chin on his chest and looked up to him and he opened his eyes, "tell me about it!", he glared,

"means cooperation is promised", she smiled and sat up excitedly, "you are going to screw up my career", he sat up sighing.

"trust me you won't need to work even with that 15 %", she said proudly, leaning unto him and mayank smile vanished, "I work because I want too, don't think I never got a chance for easy money", his voice turned stiff and nupur smiled, "alright mayank, wrong topic I guess, lets..

"why do u do this nupur?'

And now her smile vanished, "what?"

"this money chase .., you are such a nice person, and I am saying this because I know this and you know that also, then why this evil and ..

"some things don't have a reason, I guess it's a bad idea to talk to u half asleep", she smiled and hugged him, "good night mayank"

"the last thing I wanted to hear is that u do it by choice", he spoke in a broken voice and pulled her close while nupur sighed, "I do it by choice", she finally decided to clear all his doubts.

"lie"

"truth, I do it by choice",

"then why do I see this regret in your eyes", he made her look up and she smiled, "that is because sometimes I hate myself for being so weak, so weak that I surrendered to all my selfish desires,", and the softness in her eyes was replaced by bitterness.

"thousands of children grow up in orphanages nupur, thousands of them, all of them don't ..

"but I do", she replied stiffly, "I do!!, I am not from those thousands of orphan children, I am one of those who will make the world pay for what God didn't grant me", she breathed deep.

Mayank looked at her cheeks going red with frustration and anxiety, he wanted to stop all this, but he knew he couldn't, because nupur was wrong.

"but well if God didn't give, then His choice, I'll go get it myself", she smiled, "do u think God isn't helping you?', he asked.

"maybe He is, compensating for what he didn't give me earlier", she said casually and snuggled closing her eyes.

"nupur, you are wrong", he said, simply and she smiled and looked up, "and you still love me".

Her direct comment made his heart pump at a double speed, but he was glad finally topic came up.

"and you know and deliberately avoid", he said, finally getting a chance to confront her.

"for your good, I don't want you to love me and then be disgusted with yourself, you are such a nice person maynak"

"and for me you are nice also", he stroked her cheek and nupur smiled and closed her eyes, "good night mayank".

She was still smiling with closed eyes, and mayank, unable to hold his emotions anymore, liefter his hand and slowly brushed his thumb over her smiling lip. With a sudden rush of harmones, nupur opened her eyes and saw him looking with eyes burning with passion, "mayank .. don't ..", her lips started trembling but mayank paid no heed, and shifting her head to the pillow, he leaned over her, "do I need to tell you how much you mean to me?, I am even ready to welcome every disgust coming my way", he whispered, nuzzling on her neck and unconsciously her hands went up to his hair, "mayank .. all this .. wasn't .. decided ..", her breath was losing rhythm on the soft wet kisses being planted on her neck.

I agree", he raised his head, kissing the corner of her lips softly, 'falling in love with you wasn't decided", he now explored the other side of her neck, and nupur nails were scraping his scalp, while her rational mind was giving alarming warnings to push him away and her heart begging her to pull him more close, and absorb his warmth, "mayank .. you'll regret .. don't ..

"I am not asking you to love back", he brushed her collar bone, "but atleast you can help me get my share of love", he nibbled her ear and whispered, "is cooperation expected"?.

It is was his gruff voice that nupur finally shut her mind and crawled her hands up to his back, all her underlying physical attraction came to surface when he was so sensually and lovingly kissing her neck, rubbing her toes over her foot, crawling them upto her legs, his hands roaming around her back, and lips teasing her in a most wildest manner.

"and you call ME evil", she gripped his collar and slightly bit his neck and chuckling huskily, he headed to her lips, "don't ever blame me to fall in love with you, you are bewitching", he said against her lips and final placed them over. It was a mere second has ignited every passion in both their bodies, the kiss went deep and passionate from both sides. Breaking the kiss, the only audible sounds in the room were moans and sighs of pleasure being showered upon each other by them.

*

"how many times did u sleep with karthik?", after a couple of hours, both of them were lying in each other's arms and mayank was softly circling his fingers around a mole on her navel, when he suddenly broke the silence with this question.

,"grow up mayank", nupur giggled in return and the punishment of giggling over his serious question was a harsh kiss,

"how many times did u sleep with karthik?", he asked again and gaining breath nupur replied, "I don't remember, it was almost everyday" , she shrugged and feeling waves of jealousy and possessiveness running in his body, he kissed her more harshly this time, injuring her lips, "mayank ..", she placed her hands over his chest, requesting him to stop, "please .. your're hurting ..", she sighed and realizing what he was doing, he moved a bit away, snuggling to her neck, he pulled her more close, if it was possible.

"but with him it was mere physical intercourse, you have actually drove me to the ecstasy of love making", she said slowly and looked in his eyes, which suddenly started glowing, not that she lied to see that glint, it was the truth.

"and the same is what I think, I have never felt this before", he stared kissing her neck again and nupur sighed, "good for you!, but it only matters to you, not to me", she said and the very moment, she felt a sharp bit on her neck making her moan in his name, "mayank ..

"this was the punishment for lying", he kissed the love bite and crawled his lips to her face, to her smiling lips "and to make sure you don't lie anymore, you are not allowed to speak", he kissed her and she responded back. She herself wasn't interested in speaking when she was on the apex of such ecstasy.

Chapter 9 - Page 47

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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no.1 position yet again😛

i m still shivering, hving read their lumpish way of discussing nupur's past...sigh*...it quivered me 4m the very bottom of my soul...!! :(( that part was literally gross and indigestible...other dan dat rest of the chapter is way too heavenly to even put forward through words...the stimulated making out through which both of them rejuvenated each other, strengthening a bright hope of a better future together, is being successfully envisaged by the readers...!! i just wish nupur helplessly loses the battle to her heart in the near future and mayank makes her his 4 ever...!! 😳
Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so finally he tells her his feelings...i dont think itll be long before nupur reciprocates those feelings 😳...looks like my predictions about mayank were right!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I GUESS 3RD POSITION
LOVED THE PART
ALTHOUGH IT WAS AWESOME AS USUAL PLEASE DON'T MAKE NUPUR TALK ABOUT THAT KARTIK SUCH THINGS IT WAS SHUDDERING ME WHEN SHE SAYS""I don't remember, it was almost everyday"
IT WAS PAINFUL TO HEAR HER SIDE OF STORY YAAR!
OVERALL LOVED THE PART AS USUAL
LOVE Y🤗
LOVE NUCKTS!!!!!
Edited by nuckts - 13 years ago

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