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parul_bansal

@parul_bansal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

vryy nic update 👏

thanks 4 the pm

god bless u

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Anila

@-Anila-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

awesome update API...

i loved it...

as i said earlier dat Nupur had suffered a lottt n now its showed pretty clearly wid her fears...

bt still i guess she is loosing herself for Mayank...

d same way as Mayank has admitted dat he love dis lady...no matter hw she is...

i loved dis Mayank a lottt...

n d dreesing of Nupur was awesome...

i can really imagine her like dat...

i really loved d deep meaning of Mayank's words as being alwaysss der...

dat was adorable...

i really loved d way dis ff is going...

awesome job API...

n d last part was heavenly...

i jst loved it to d core...

waiting eagerly for d next part...

love u API...🤗🤗🤗

Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Lovely chapter dear 😊
I just loved the way you brought out their feelings...
Keep it up 😃

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

i can feel nupur. its like having a hole in you soul, wanting to fill it but afraid to do so at the same time.what if the hole gets bigger while trying to repair it with your novice hands?

Edited by -roshnee- - 13 years ago

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Nupur has a past that bothers her every now and then...Thats why she dsnt want to enter any serious relationship i think...
But with mayank she is surely loosing her heart...The convo and the last part ws amazing...
And truly speaking i like this snail speed rather than jet speed which reveals all so early...Let the feelings sink in to the readers...im personally loving this pace...
Cont soon...

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

awesome update.so mayur r getting friendly...liked it

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Nupur's behaviour is a total mystery to me..after her touching apology I expected her to remain in the same amicable mood..but she was back to her blunt and cold attitude..I really feel bad for Mayank..but the very fact that inspite of knowing her intentions and her greedy nature,he still find her perfect and love her like crazy.Love is blind and mostly painful but even that pain is too sweet.I have this awful feeling that Nupur had a terrible past unless she just cannot ignore Mayank's feelings which are very obvious..I'm so eager to know her past..
update soon Kinzu😊