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Posted: 13 years ago
Nupur's past was really sad😔 I felt horrible for her but I agree with mayank her past is no reason for her to act the way she does👎🏼 it's true that god took away everything from her at a very young age but to a great extent he returned everything to her by bringing mayank in her life😊 very few people get such loving husbands👎🏼 I love the one sided confession and it was very sweet that she already knows that he loves her😍 the end was too romantic☺️ I blushed liked crazy at the end☺️ the question was very straight forward I must say😆 end was again☺️ I'm sure she'll return his feeling soon😊 and will realize that love is more important than money😊 thanks for the pm🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
read it once twice thrice...and now going back to read again...:P
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Posted: 13 years ago
I can c u online..! r u updatin..????! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u so much for all the lovely response .. 🤗

Chapter # 9

Waking up in the arms of an extremely gorgeous body couldn't have been arguable at any point for nupur. Mayank had drove her to the contemplation of carnal pleasures, and she just agreed upon on flowing, she had been doing so many wrong things, one more wasn't a problem.

Their times with each other had turned more romantic, hours and hours they could spent talking to each in bed, stroking, rubbing, kissing, whispering and love making, everything had turned beautiful for mayank except for one thing.

"I never thought this relation would be so beneficial ... financially and physically", she teased slowly scraping his lips and he kissed her, "u forgot to add emotionally", he whispered and kissed her again, before she could wound his heart with outrageous refusals.

*

Nupur knew mayank loved her and mayank knew that she didn't love her, but still they both weren't afraid of physical nearness.

*

"mayank ..", nupur said slowly, almost at midnight, and mayank who was half asleep just murmured a "hmmm", and snuggled to her.

"pooja has invited us to dinner, she said ayaan and ishita will be there also, she wants me to meet them again".

Mayank opened his eyes and saw lines of stress on her forehead, "are u afraid?", he asked kissing her lightly, "no!, but they better don't create problems for me", she breathed deep and hugged him tightly.

**

Welcome both of you", pooja greeted them warmly,

"thank u didi", nupur hugged her and they entered the huge mansion of Pooja Agnihotri.

"her husband is also bloody rich", nupur whispered to mayank as they were walking in and mayank just sighed.

"welcome both of you", Sahil Agnihotri was a man in his middle fifties, a well known business tycoon, handsome and rich.

"thank u Mr Agnhitori", mayank shook hands with him while nupur opted for a hug, "thank u sahil.

Mayank was just left staring at the endearment in her voice, and the change of expressions on sahil's face made him burn all over and the couple of moments of their hug were like infinity for him.

"please come in", he led them inside and mayank slipped his arm across nupur's waist. She looked at him instantly, "don't tell me u are jealous of that hug", she giggled and mayank pulled her more close, "trust me this is not funny", his voice was strict and realizing that it was not good to mess up with him, she just stayed quiet and decided to stay away from sahil for the evening.

"Come in both of you, ishita and ayaan will be so glad to meet you" , pooja said excitedly, leading them through the corridor and nupur shook her head and leaned to mayank, "glad? , trust me they are going to be disgusted, especially that little bitch ishita is', she whispered bitterly and mayank passed her an angry look which she ignored.

"see ishita, ayaan .. nupur is here",

Pooja exclaimed joyfully as they entered the living area, where ishita and ayaan were seated. They both stood up seeing guests and mayank clearly observed the forced smiles on their faces, being a lawyer, he could judge lies.

Hello nupur", ishita came forward and smiling, nupur hugged her.

Dressed in a simple but expensive pink knee length skirt, her shoulder length hairs were beautifully straightened and left open, small accessories gracing her ears and a few bracelets made her look simple, elegant and graceful.

"hello my sweetheart", it was clear that the warmth in nupur's voice was manipulated and they both hugged, and ishita then moved to mayank, "hello sir", she said lightly with a subtle smile and mayank smiled warmly, "good afternoon ishita, how are u?

"I am fine sir, thank you", she smiled back.

"seems we are in a courtroom, ishita sweety, no need to address mayank as sir over here", nupur casually said, slipping her arm across his arm, leading ishita to fumble and mayank just glared, "It's alright nupur, ishita is a good student', he said affectionately and this reduced ishita's fumble.

"oh that she is", remarking casually, she headed to ayaan, who also hugged her coldly. At the age of 15, the boy seemed to have a sense of recognizing affection.

"how are studies ishita?", mayank asked and payal nodded, "good, next year, I ll be entering my degree program for law", she said excitedly and mayank smiled, "and I'll be waiting for my assistant", he smiled leading ishita to giggle.

In his initial days of struggle in the city, Mayank had been a law teacher to ishita for her 12th standard law course, and that is where he entered the Ahluwalia mansion and affairs. Although he had judged nupur's evil intensions from the very first day, he always had a soft corner for Ishita. She was a darling and respectful girl, although he left the tuitions after a short while, and was hired as a legal advisor in the Ahluwalia estate, but ishita still addressed him as sir, and he really liked the spirit through which she had pulled herself up after her mother's death., accepting a step mother and catering her younger brother.

Nupur was observing this sight of giggles and laughter between mayank and ishita, and was forming some conclusions, which she marked in her mind to discuss with mayank later at night.

"so nupur, how is life?", sahil came there and forgetting the chaos in her mind, she smiled, "life is great, mayank is a dream to be with"

"hmm, should I say the great Nupur is finally seeing her dreams fulfilled", sahil laughed and nupur went at a loss of words.

Did she really said that?. Mayank was a dream to be with?, She couldn't remember when exactly did she dream about a life partner, but suddenly it felt as if a voice came from her unconscious and over powered all her materialistic dreams.

"well, my dreams are about to be fulfilled, only if your wife helps me out a little quick", she huffed and sipped her juice and sahil giggled, "come on nupur, pooja is really trying, it is just a matter of two more months, ishita turns 18, and then she becomes the legal guardian of ayaan, so she'll sign, till then pooja is trying her best that u all come on good terms",

"I appreciate her efforts sahil, that is why you see me sanding here", she poured in some more juice for herself, "by the way, what about the collaborated venture of the Agnithotris and the Ahulwalis?, can we delay it till power of attorney shifts to my name, I need to supervise it myself",

"I'll try, there are other investors involved too, I'll try if they all agree then we can delay the launce by a period of three months."

*

"bua you didn't tell me nupur was here", ayaan entered the kitchen, almost shouting.

"ayaan, darling be nice, she is a guest", pooja stroked his cheek and he moved away, "she is not a guest, she is a witch, why did you ..

"ayaan .. ", pooja interrupted him strictly, and with brimming tears he hugged her, "why do you do this bua?, I don't like meeting her, why do you do this?"

Pooja lovingly rubbed his back, while she could feel her heart ache with every tear that was falling on her shoulder, "I understand ayaan, but we can't cut her off, she was your father's wife, an equal share holder in every thing, we just can't.

"just give her what she wants and cut her off, that is what she has wanted always and ..

"ayaan , your voice is almost reaching the living room", ishita entered alarmed and pooja signaled her to calm down, and sensing the tears in the eyes of her younger brother, ishita rushed to hug him, "I understand ayaan, I understand what you are going through, trust me everything will be fine", she tried consoling him with teary voice, "I hate her di, I just hate her", he hugged back tight, while pooja pulled of them in a tight warm hug.

*

I bet there is some family drama going on in the kitchen, I saw pooja going, then ayaan following and finally your sweet student going in there", nupur said slowly, eating the pineapple delight.

"my sweet student has a beautiful name, and I prefer if you address her with that", mayank replied, grimly.

"beautiful name", nupur raised her eyebrow, "I wonder what more things do you find beautiful in her", she placed away the bowl and mayank laughed, "stop behaving jealous, you know I love you", he smiled and nupur felt waves of pride and contentment running through her body.

"I know, but accept or not, you do feel for ishita too", she said, although casually, but mayank sensed the undertone and chuckled,

"I am amazed to see this side of yours' too early nupur", he winked and headed to the table to help himself with another serving of chocolate mousse while nupur just stood there, realizing what strange things she was uttering today.

Chapter 10 - Page 53

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing update

the family really hate nupur to the core and why not they
love mayank in it
Edited by crazymayurian - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 update Fantu...👍🏼
Mayank n ishita...n nupur having an effect due to this...hmmm...🤔
Interesting...😉
Continue soon...😳
Luv ya...God Bless..❤️🤗
Annu😳

Edited by Annu_Arti_Mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏👏
i loved it lodsss...😳
d kids r nt dat evil as Nupur said n i thought...😳
i think dey r pretty good...😳
felt bad for Ayaan...😔
i loved Mayank here mostly n his jealousy...😉
bt Nupur...sigh😳
dont wanna comment abt her in dis update...😳
waiting eagerly for d next update...😳
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i dnno wht to say abt this chapter...!! hope they wont be reach at dead end...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful...!
I loved the Mayank-Ishita part...! :D
Hmmm... Nupur... *sighs*... Lets c wat happns...

Do continue soon...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
i still cant absorbe dis new theme of ur ff

but loving it

eired but nice

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