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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Last 2 parts were awesum

Loved it

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Oh Godd that was a total HOT update!! 😆 atleast I found so..☺️...superbly written as always! Love It when u show Nupur's wicked side cos along with that you also show her vulnerable side ! how amazingly you bind both the aspects is just Superb , Angel !!

and Mayank..God...😳 I just love him :D lol...and really waiting how the story turns up ahead..do cont soon...and once again, the update was quite very romantic, without deviating from the main issues the two charac hav!! BRILLIANT...❤️ ⭐️

Take care...🤗 love ya <3

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 13 years ago

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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#263

ahem ahem...dat ws sooo... ☺️

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#264

nice part! that was a step ahead.

nupur was getting addicted to mayank kissing her good morning. and when he wasn't there, she was low the whole time.

mayank realized this too. she actually did wife things for him! aww! and of course he liked it.

they were lying on the bed together? how cute. and she wanted to talk, but he was telling her to sleep. and omg, they kissed? <3 thats awesome! mayank really likes her, and its obvious. she pretends to not like him, but even he can see through that pretense.

thanks for the pm

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

it was romantic yet a wild update...

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RoohPay

@RoohPay

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#266

romantic...but clueless abt next part...!!

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Amrita

@Maahzabeen

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#267

finally mayank has told his feelings to her! now lets see till when nupur is able to hold herself from confessing to him..!!
i hope mayank will help her to come out of this evil thinking..!
thanks for the pm

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#268

asmani rang ho,
pyaar ki boond ho,
roshni ho,
dhoop ho,
chahaton ki goonj ho

aanchal mein hain dhanak chandni,
haaton mein woh chaand hai,
gairon se bhi hai wasta
apno mein pehchan hai,

ta ra ra rat ta ri ra[3], tu zindagi
mera izhaar hai..

pyaar hi pyar hai,
yaaron ki yaar hai,
tu zindagi ...

ta ra ra rat ta ri ra[3], tu zindagi

tujhse main kya kahoon
tu hi mera sukoon,
sang tere rahoon,
tu zindagi!!!!!

asmani rang ho,
pyaar ki boond ho,
roshni ka aang ho
mein tere dhoop hu
tujhe se hi hai meri bandagi
tujh se hi meri jaan hai
saaya tera mera aashiyaan
tu mera armaan hai

la ra la ra la ra (3) tu zindagi
mera izhaar tu
mera iqraar tu
pyaar hi pyaar tu...tu zindagi

ta ra ra rat ta ri ra[3], tu zindagi

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#269

And I comment finally. 😊

You've improved a lot through these updates as a writer, and mind you - before I am held guilty, I have been reading all. Anyway, so - Mayank and Nupur are what, hormonal maybe. But yes, the man's gentler still than his lady and she's truly cunning. So, maybe the title of the story syncs better now than it did before. Beautiful stuff, I would say.

I'd be looking forward to what you write, eh. Trust you to give the story a nice, subtle ending - it's beautiful, don't stretch it. But well, anticipating interesting reads forward. =)

Thanks for the PMs.

-Savage