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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

@Lyla- Then I guess I don't have to go through the trouble of raising my hands 😆😆

[offense not intended)😆😆

Edited by Boogleton.Schiz - 13 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: Lyla
I guess 'All Good Things Must Come To An End...'

I felt there should have been more on Geet's part, 'a closure' was missing on her part. This is just my way of saying that I do not like it to end... I want more!!!

Maan turned out to be a better man than I thought, the true intention was to save people's lively-hood, and the cause was greater then the means. And whatever happened to Venkat? You left us with an open ending...

I will not hold back on complementing you on the research and music selection which perfectly fitted every update and I had enjoyed it to the core. I am going to miss Emily, and I do hope she drops by in Convergence. ;)

"What was it like, in the end?

- What it always is. A handful of yarn; a little weaving and stitching; some embroidery perhaps. A few loose ends, but that's only to be expected..."

Clotho and Lachesis, talking about the death of Morpheus, in The Kindly Ones.

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640638

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

Glad that Mitalee was chosen. My feminist heart was satisfied. Maan and Geet were meant to be. I enjoyed your story a lot. Thanks!

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

👏
Thank you Sookie for another wonderful masterpiece of yours. Will see you on the new thread.

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#325

awesome end...

life is really good...

they together saved KC...n now all r happy in their lives...at least seem to be...

will be waiting fro an epilogue...hope u write it...

thnx for a wonderful FF...

enjoyed reading it...

u r a wonderful writer...

thnx for PM...

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anu.happy4ever

@anu.happy4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#326

Cheers for finishing off the story !

The music companion was great, I assure you. Many times I even downloaded the mp3 after watching it on youtube.

See ya in the next thread ! 👍🏼

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#327

will miss this. but hope u'llcome with next ff soon tht on jst maaneet

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Lily201

@Lily201

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#328

@Sookie- I read the entire thread in a go and I don't have words to appreciate as to how you could precipitate the entirely complicated,thrumming story to such a simple,uncomplicated end !!⭐️

And talking of the end- gotta say the "back to where we first met MG" moment aka VIP ward was truly amiable and touching - while we saw how the real Maan surfaced from his veneer when he was first introduced -talking to the woman who'd chosen to hide her affections -yup its one fine journey from 'opaque' to 'translucent' 😳

Also-the way you showed that none of the characters from Vikram to Mitalee to Varun to Maya to Dileep to Pratap to Venkat to Tara to Satya & Emily -had dispositions that were neither starkly black or white but had different shades & tints of their own -so they too were translucent all the way.

Thanks for such a fine story - you really weave characters,situations that makes delve deep inside the whole tale.😃

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ammu5

@ammu5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#329

finally the end. last part was superb n hilarious. maan hiding frm emily?? u simply rock. this was something different. knowledgeable as v came to know hw the financial world work. plz pm as u start a new one.