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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Loved the end! So they did end up together! lol Now I can peacefully re-read this whole story! Great one, Sookie! I learned a lot about finance too, and the music was awesome. I appreciate you taking the time to research all these things and music! :)

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

Sookie.. this was just perfect. Really enjoyed this story and your writing so much. I applaud all the effort you put into your research girl !

The characters, their dynamics, and the plot lines were just super.

I am so glad Maan didnt wind up in Khurana biz.. I had wondered a while back about his masters thesis, and I was grinning like a fool when I read he became a physicist ..very pilleased. :D

and they got married !! Hallelujah !😆

And the songs , yep, were well chosen and I liked most of them.

So thanks for this fantastic FF, and cant wait for convergence to begin!

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

[awsum endin luvd it

all da ff was beautifully written x 😊

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Murlal

@Murlal

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

Thanks,Sookie,for a lovely tale. Am glad it ended well. The amount of research that's gone into the inner workings of a company's finances is amazing; even more so the work you've put in to finding the music for each chapter, I have to thank you for introducing me to some terrific pieces- gangsta's rap, benediction and the last one from grouplove. I'd would never have known about them but for you. So double thanks.

Looking forward to convergence now.
😃

👍🏼 👏 👏

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Oooh that was spiffy - nicely done...and life is good again! Convergence here I come!!!

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Minz aka Minnie

@*Dakoo_Minzy*

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Amazing FF Sookie! 😳

Reallyy Loved reading this masterpiece from you! 😛 Nowww Maaneet are together.. 😳 It was so cute the way you told us two identical gold rings 😉 and bought the story again to VIP suit... ☺️ Maan's back to the naughty self..it felt so refreshing... 😳

And i loved the way you develped each character...😳 It was just the best! 👏 👏

I haven't read your other FF yet...will do 😳

and a looong bear hug huney! 🤗

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Awesome. Loved it. Awww the end made me smile. Maan &Geet were just like in their real essence, that's how we met them in beginning in a vip room, and that's where we say goodbye. They all found their niches in the world, so cool. Thanks for the pm. Loved it