Translucence II - Complete - Page 32

I love confusing people is foreign languages.

I forgot to say something, it doesn't really matter but whatever.

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

I forgot to say something, it doesn't really matter but whatever.

I have always imagines Aa...add.addiii sss..ssir as Satya 😆

😆 I haven't seen much of him to include him in my series...
But thanks for reminding...I needed a name for Geet's cousin in Convergence so used it now 😆

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

😆 I haven't seen much of him to include him in my series...
But thanks for reminding...I needed a name for Geet's cousin in Convergence so used it now 😆

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Ehhh!! Et tu!!

Where do I hide!!!

ha, ha, that brought you out!
Where do you hide? I think you hide behind your characters and not just the main ones, and you peep out just occasionally through them and of course, beneath your pretty pink umbrella.😎

Oh arrter de le nier..

😕 and totally so. Shows you how ignorant I am

Okay, my french grammar is appalling :\

part 36
u FINISHED this?
my GOd thats shocking...
nice part...
so Mitalee is the new chairman well didnt see that coming...
wow awesome Maan and Geet are together, wedded?
excellent...
so all is well...
really had a good time reading this one dear...

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

As much as I say I don't have a heart (which I'm sure I don't) the ending just made me go 'aww', I'm glad MG have gotten their happy ending. Unless they're just wearing matching rings for the heck of it. I mean why not? Why can't two people wear the same rings on their wedding finger just for fun? Okay, I'm rambling nonsense now.

They say "All's well that ends well" Can't seem more true and apt here!
The way you researched and the things revolved and flowed was surprisingly awesome...and this was somewhat a patient and calm series for me...though it got a bit heavier for me during a particular time and I had taken a break from it but coming back to it again all rejuvenated was worth!

I won't go on and on with this comment partly due to the fact that I'm tongue tied and the realization is yet too seep in me that its finally done but the one thing that I really liked about this series was the relation that Maan and Geet shared, it is the kind of relationship that you don't see in reality and somewhere you long for it..though its not transparent yet there are no hidden deceits and lies that would shatter the other person to the core and that's the kind of relation that I guess somewhere down the heart one pines for...And yes Future can't be more brighter for them...after all love is all you need

Mitalee being the heir I guess was the best thing to happen...she does seem to be the best bet out of the foursome ! And step relations too was highlighted wonderfully who says step moms and sis can't love each other like their own kin...I guess this story rightly said Blood is always not thicker than water seeing the Khurana siblings war!

All in all this was a wonderful package...and I'm glad I was a part of this journey!
Did I mention that you are one of those writers that I can't get bored reading off even though at times I might need a break :)

Take Care girl you need it after all the hard work and home work you've done!!!!

Cheers,
Fatima