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Posted: 13 years ago

u have updated after many days...I was waiting for it...but I must say that ur FF is the toughest FF to write...

now Damini was Deshmukh's friend and share holder in his company...game is deepening

amazing update...thanx for pm

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BluntlySpeaking

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Posted: 13 years ago

cool...so uve speeded up the story...hmmm

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9staroneserials

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey this is a surprise...DESHMUKH & DAMINI😲😲😲...UPDATE after a long time 😳😳😳thank u very much😳😳😳

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mechantefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome!! Damini has shares? Wow lil did I know , you'd be getting her back in the sotry - but then I think...boy was I stupid...of course she'd be back!!

Superbb update...I loved the convo b/n Maan n Varun- so spicy! ssslick!

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 13 years ago

Uff... the least expected Sookie!

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Uthra

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Posted: 13 years ago

There is no dummy player in this game, isn't it?

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 13 years ago

same here , business matters never go inside my head . but loved the way maan made varun to accept his desicion . last line brought a new twist in the story . awesome and waiting for more .

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

geet sure is a dark horse like maan...

she knows a lot than we give her credit for...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesooome...fab...upd. dear...loved it...

thanx for the pm...take care...

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mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG...u give us a new shock everttime sooks..if i survive this..god bless me...

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