Yeh rishtoon kee uljhan-Maaneet#2-lnk#3

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Radhika Shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome part..

Thanks for the pM

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zaara2212

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Posted: 13 years ago

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oh my my lovely 😛☺️

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friends_4dream

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Posted: 13 years ago

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😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#684

Kya baat hai Di aaj toh double treat mil gaya and I must say i loved the update u wrote it so beautifully that i could actually visualize everything in front of my eyes

Okay pehle toh part 40 se start karti hoon

Hmm... So Maan ne aadhi baat sunkar Vinod k kamre mein entry le li I was so relieved k Maan ko filhaal sachhai pata nahi chali otherwise he would have been in a big dilemma

luckily Vinod and Manyata handled the situation O maan look Geet aapka intezaar karte karrte so rahi hai

But Love works like magic haina Maan k ek touch se Geet ki neend bhag gayi aur Geet ki ek jhalak se Maan ki pareshaniyaan gayab ho gayi

I Loved the scene where Geet realized that it was their first night and she covered herself with the viel and Maan toh is ful too fida on his angel

Beautiful update

Now part 41

This was penned down beautifully Di Geet's innocence her shyness was beautifully described

the hunger of Maan for Geet and the way he was trying to make her comfortable by playing those games hehe jiske rules geet break kar rahi thi was amazing

loved the sherni avtaar of geet when she removed maan's vest aur iske aage kya likhu Di it was a magical journey of their love which made them two bodies one soul

love u Di and love ur ffs muahh

urs Piggy (Piya)