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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Nice character sketch


i like it and i'm looking forward 2 it



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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
hey awesome character sketch...
loved it...
yay... ARYA 2 telugu movie right...
continue soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: jazz07_dh

Omg I just looovvveeeddd maan's character sketch but is he really look like that???
I mean don't get me wrong, but I never liked him pati patni wo days (infact never watched his Ramayana or ppw ever) I just watched him as maan and just love him in maan's look.
So if it's not too much of a hassle and it doesn't collide with your story, could you plzzz change his pic to msk avatar??!! *puppy eyes* the only reason is as I read the story, I imagine them in my mind

other than that I just loved it...plz continue soon n thx for the pm


Thanks

maan's photo will be changed soon wait a while just 2 updates

even i hate this photo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Madhukon

HAHAHAHA...I LOL'D WHEN I SAW MAAN'S PIC 🤣.. THAT IS THE TIME WHERE I HATE GC'S FACE .. UFFF .BUT YOU HAVE A REASON FOR CHOOSING THAT PIC 😉 ...SORRY IF YOU ARE A GC FAN ... I AM NOT 😆 .. BUT I ADORE MAAN ❤️.. HE IS MY ULTIMATE FANTASY;) ❤️☺️.. I KNOW, A LIL COMPLECATED 😉 .. HEHEHEHEHEHH .. .. YOU CHOSE BRAMHANANDAM .. AS A CHARACTER .. I AM FROM SOUTH BUT DO NOT WATCH TOO MANY MOVIES SOOO NO IDEA WHICH MOVIE YOU ARE BASING YOUR STORY ON .. BUT AM LOOKING FORWARD TO IT .. CONTINUE SOON .. :)


Hi- 5 ... i suffer from same problem Hate GC but Love MSK ...( hope GC"s fans don't throw chappels on us)
this is a telgu movie 'arya 2'
Are u from TN?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

i cant believe u r writing this movie as ff

to b frank its a bit bore except for hero

bujt plz make sure u change geets character to some wht strong n logicall not as dumb as geeta

hope u understand bcoz i loved only hero in original movie so in ur ff i want to love both maaneet


i know why u like the hero coz bunny is the best...

i love the movie so will not spoil it

i can't believe u didn't like the movie
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Tammana_Maaneet

Character sketch revealed nothing...as in abt the story...
Just abt Maan...n y did u post such a pic...eww...
Sorry but I hate it...let's see whts related to it to compell u to use such a picture of his...
Waiting for the next part...thnkx for new FF n keep writing...


thanks

pic will be changed soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: sarkh26

wow

that was an awesome concept
yaar what is maan
his character is really confusing
eagerly awaoiting for this ff to start
pls continue soon


thanks

plzzz mention in comment if its srini or nitya i m getting confused
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
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Shalve, gangesegb,rupzloveu, wajiha-1, t_areeb,ChillwidMG,swetha10,maaneetsangel,
soni4eva,Dreamy_Mystique, shalinisaran89,angel_smily,preethia, maansee, -afsha, zunaiba5, nida6
thank u

@ritzy09

well this is not a hindi movie

@ytanuja
bramanandam means laughter yaar

@niticool
u r rite he is the one from mozi

@eiya22,swathi9889,amalu123, jyothinajo
yes its arya 2

whose names are not here ... i have quoted ur comment and replied so plzzz check ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
As i thought many of u were right in guessing the movie , it is " ARYA 2 " ... tats not tat tough as well yet pat on ur shoulder...well regarding maan's photo u ll find in next chapter ( all men are not as smart as bunny in all looks... nothing offensive on GC... this is to those who have seen the original movie )
NOTE: i have lost the DVD of the movie so there will be lots of additions from my pocket don't mind tat ...while typing this chapter i wanted to type maan but i ended up typing arya so if in future chaps u find this mistake inform me i ll edit this is kind request ...well i ll not have prob with the heroine's name as they both share the same name geet ...

CHAPTER - 1

St.Joseph's Orphanage 1993,
A man at his late 30 was teaching to few students about friendship ... and one boy at his age of seven was listening to it carefully...

" friend is most important part in our life ... everyone should have a friend ..." said the master

These words were registered hard in the boy's heart ... he came out of the class and saw few boys chatting and playing together ... " i should have a friend " he wrote in his diary ... but he was not sure how to choose his friend ...

He was chewing boomer he suddenly spit it on the path and thought to himself ..." the one who stamps it first will be my friend " ...He was waiting impatiently looking at all boys's leg he was getting anxious each passing second ... and one (unfortunate) boy stamped that boomer ...

" now he will be my friend " he said to himself and ran behind the boy who went to the river side ...

" hey ..." he said
" hai " the boy said with smile
" i m maan" he said to the boy
" i m ajay " the boy said politely
" u have to be my friend" maan said as an order
" wat? " ajay was shocked by his order
" yes ... u ought to be my frd "
" but why i shd be ur frd ? "
" why shouldn't u ?"
" coz u didn't help me or be nice to me so how can i be ur frd " asked ajay

Maan thought he was right ... he thought for few mins

" do u know swimming ? " asked maan
" no ... why? " ajay asked questioningly

Without second thought maan pushed him into the river ... ajay was shocked he was trmbling in water ... and shouting for his life ...maan looked at him for few mins then jumped in water to save him ...they both came to shore ...

" are u a fool ?" ajay asked angrily

maan stood up

" now i have helped u so be my frd" maan said casually and extended his hands ... ajay stared at him in disbelief but he was left with no option he can't risk his life once again so he agreed...

1994

All boys were playing in ground maan came running to ajay and showed him his hand ...maan had tatoo of Ajay's name in his hands ... ajay was shocked than happy or touched ... he knew wat was comig next ...

" did u tatoo my name ? " maan asked curiously

Ajay nodded in negative maan's expression changed ...

" aren't u my frd " he asked in stern voice
" i m " ajay replied helplessly
" so come with me tatoo my name " maan said

Ajay had to agree after all it was maan and he will not hear a no for an answer ...

1995

The father of the orphanage called maan and ajay ... they went to his room and found a couple there they some how guessed wat was going on ...

" they are here to adopt a kid ... anyone of you can go with them ... decide among urself ..." said the father ...

Ajay ran to their room with all excitment and started to pack his stuffs ...

" are u intrested to go " came maan's voice from behind

Thats when ajay realized he is vikramaditya and he has a betal which coudn't be left behind easily ... he turned to face maan with horror ...

" i ... u ... can ... go " ajay stammered and closed his eyes.
" no ..." maan said promptly .

Ajay was relieved he thought he had some hope now but maan was maan he came up with an idea ... the most famous coin toss ...

Maan tossed a coin ...

" head " said ajay

maan slowly opened his hand to find tails ... Ajay was crashed his life was dark now he thought ... he sat on his bed holding his head ...

Maan came to him and touched his shoulder ... ajay lifted his head ...

" u can go with them " maan said
" are u sure ? " ajay asked excitedly but still he was doubtful " but u won the toss so u shd go " he said
" ohk yaar u r my frd anything for u " said maan with a smile ...

Ajay hugged him and ran ...

Ajay was relieved ... he felt like a free bird released from cage ... but he didn't know his happiness was short living ... coz his so called entere his life again ...

Maan came to delhi searching for ajay the very next month itself ... maan was very much liked by ajay's parents thanks to his brilliance and humour sense ... they considered maan as their son as well ...

2011

Maan was brilliant but not in studies ...Ajay was the uni topper so his father handed over his business to ajay before his death ... as maan has given many ideas for improvement of company knowingly or unknowingly 36% share was in his name but Ajay was working partner with just 15% shares ...But maan never cared abt money ... in fact he has never visited the office Ajay was the sole boss ...

Ajay was lost in his thoughts while driving his car and another fast car scratched his car ...This made ajay furious he got out from his car and started to shout at the guys in another car who was fully boosted ...They used abusive language and so ajay didn't want to create a scene in road so he went away ...

LATER THAT EVENING

The guys heard a knock at their door and one of them opened and saw a man with a first aid box
" who are u ? " asked one of them

But he didn't answer all he asked was " who abused ajay " ...

The guys were questioning him but all the received was same question ... they got p****** off and replied " we did it do u have a problem ? " said one of the guys ...

Maan gave a strong punch on his nose and immediately opened his first aid box took a bandage and placed on his wound ...The guys were confused " who r u ? " aked the guys
" i m ajay's frd" said maan proudly...The same treatment was followed with all who opposed maan ... soon everyone were knocked down and maan ended up in Jail ...

Ajay came to the station and personally signed and took maan with him ... maan was driving the car puffing a cigarette while was ajay was beside him as usual giving him his piece of mind ...But maan was nowhere listening ...Ajay took the cigarette from him and started to puff hitting his forehead with his thumb...

Since teen they had this habit of sharing their cigarette ... maan would puff half and give it to ajay or vice versa ...

" i want to join the office " said maan

That was the last thing ajay expected he was shocked

" tats not possible " he said
" why ?"
" i can't allow u in my office " said ajay
" dude tats my office " said maan

Ajay didn't expect tat

" but ... i ..." he was searching for answer
" chill dude ... i want to come to office " said maan
" NO " ajay shouted

Maan turned the car to extreme right very fast and Ajay almost slipped from the seat as he was sitting in right side he was hanging from fly over only supported by maan's hand

" lift me damn " ajay shouted
" tell me tat i can join office " said maan casually

Ajay agreed fearing his life maan lifted him and they both were on road catching for breath ...

" u r crazy wat if i had died " said ajay
" do u think i would have left ur hands if u had said a no ... dude u r my frd " said maan

Ajay was taken aback ... not because of maan's love for him but for his foolishness by agreeing to maan's terms

" ohk ... u can come to office but remember u shd behave good if i get any complains i ll kick u out of the office " said ajay

Maan took his diary from pocket and wrote " behave good in office " then he showed thumbs up to ajay ... ajay looked at him in disbelief and murmered under his throught " he is impossible "

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PRECAP : INTRODUCTION OF MR.PERFECT


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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update loved the intro of maan
waiting for next part Mr.Perfect
Mr.Perfect perfect he is Mr.Perfect
Lense esi vethuku dorakadhu ra ee defect

continue soon

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