I'm Not in Love (Rt-Mc ff) part 5 on pg 18

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

that dialog was hilarious dear janvar honeymoon manane ate honge😆..good part dear...mansi ko farmhouse pasand a gaye..hmm..waiting for next

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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

beautifully written 👍🏼

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fathima

@fatzfathi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

hey karuu..nice intro n a beautiful part yaar... 👍🏼 i loved d concept n also d name manasi..it suites mc really well...😳 ur writin is good enough for a 1st timer re..👏👏👏 d scene between mansi n her family was fun...a typical mom n a mre typical bro..!😆😆😆 do continue soon...

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Maliha

@lisalafaiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

awesome update i liked the lil bro a lot he was hillarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update fast

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

awesome part!! loved manasi's efforts to take permission n mayur the perfect narad muni bro!! and mom n dad too!!
janwaron ka honeymoon that was hillarious
so three girls r ready to start new life :D
and who is that mr.??? for manasi??????
waiting for update

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

lovely update karu

so our Manasi is a strong willed girl. I luv this kinda girls.

Awe her family is typical indian family and her mom is typical affectionate mom. Looking forward for the adventurous journey of life to commence. And when will b our hero's entry?

update soon.

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Pratibha mehta

@Riasa

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

wowww ...beautifully written ...loved it ..

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Gauri

@gauri_tvfanatic

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

thanks 4 pm & sorry for late reply...i was busy...exams r coming...

well excellent start...loved it...& mayur naughty brother...cute...

please update soon...waiting for first meeting...