I'm Not in Love (Rt-Mc ff) part 5 on pg 18

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karuu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

sorry im late..
congrats for the ff..
really amazing concept..
loved the first part..
simply awsum..
continue soon,...
thnx for the pm...

Thanxx anu for reading n cmnting... 😳

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karuu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ridzzi
hey...
awesome story...
concept is amazing...
i like mansi's character...and her lil bro...

loved the first part...
do update soon...

Thanxx ridzzi ...yup m updating 😊

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karuu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

hey guys really very sorry for delay...

Part 2

All the three girls were ready to start their new south african life, but the house was not yet ready for humanbeings .
So,they decided to stay at a hotel near from the farmhouse for that night...

Hotel 'Royal Palm' was situated at the eastern side of the Boswell city. It was a beautiful hotel surrounded by a well maintained garden which was decorated by colourful lighting.The atmosphere was pleasant and refreshing.

They got rooms easily there. After freshning up all the three gathrered together. They were looking stunning in saries with matching bindis.

Manasi beamed with delight as she looked around the hotel lounge, this was completly new experience of life for her.

But the story was little diffrent for Aarti n Jyoti. Aarti was still upset and jyoti was observing the place coldly.So, to energies the air Manasi said,

''Hey girls, let's have some drinks'' jyoti n Rti nodded their head and they headed towards the hotel bar-room.

The bar-room was shining with lights . The music was loud and happening as the party was in its full swing. Everyone was enjoying their evening.

''Hmm ..nice party !!! Everything is exciting and amusing here'' jyo exclaimed as they reached the counter. Jyo n Rti being party animal were now looking relaxed..

But Manasi frowned as she was looking for some quiet place but now it was not possible as the bar- tender was asking her for order..she ordered three orange juices for them..

By now Mansi had noticed that many eyes in that room were looking at them with amazement.

Manasi didn't get it first and then it struck ..it was the affect of their Indian attire. Manasi ran her eyes through the hall, there were some Indian girls and womens but everyone was in western dress.

Three of them were now feeling awkward. But manasi didnt give much attention . Rti n jyoti first looked at each other and then turned towards Mansi who was busy enjoying her drinks ..they kept staring at her narrowing their eyes n folding their arms as it was her idea to wear 'sari' in S africa..finally she replied,

''Whattt?? We are looking stunningly fabulous '' she amused them ..

''Ohh, everyone in this bar-room is looking at us in awe , coz we are looking stunningly fabulous??? '' jyoti asked sarcastically raising her eye-brow.

''Absolutely'' manasi answered confidently..

''matlab ,isliye ye sab hame itna ghur rahe hai?? Arti was confused now...

''Han yaar, itni khubsurti eksaath pahlibaar dekh rahe hai na...bas isiliye. '' Manu said innocently and winked at them.. And with this innocent answer they burst in to laugh...

Rti and jyoti were now enjoying this, in reverse Mansi was fuming inside ..

..why these people behaving like they had seen something strange or odd ..wearing sari wasn't a crime or may be wearing sari in S africa's happening hotel seems like 8th wonder of the world ...whatever..she wasn't going to ruin her mood for these stupid people..

Mansi shaked her head, ran a hand through hairs and as she looked ahead , a girl who apparently was busy watching her turned and told something mischievously to the person sat next to her[ may be her bf]

The girl herself was in silvery evening gown with matching purse and shoes with snobish smile..mansi didn't like her attitude ..

Now it was height ..manasi's fuming gaze turned towards the guy..

A very handsome Indian face was looking at her with raised eyebrows and tight lips as his eyes were full of surprise and curiosity..

Manasi didn't budge an inch and continued her gazing..she was looking straight in to his eyes.

He smirked at her posture as if he was enjoying this 'eye-war'
The staring went on as both were not in mood of back off..

''Who are these girls?? Indians??'' mansi guessed the question from the lip movement of that silvery girl..

He just smiled and nodded yes without taking his eyes off mansi..

Mansi was burning with rage as one more guy had joined that 'Great teasers group'...

''Damn !!what the hell !!'', Mansi couldn't stop herself now..
''what happened ??'' jyoti turned her head towards the group..

''hmm.. that group...may be unhe pata chal gaya honga ham uss jagah pe gardening karne aaye hai jo ab 'animal special' ban chuka hai...that's why they are laughing at us'' Aarti concluded..

''but iska matlab ye to nahi ke aise group banake hamara majak udaye..mannersless ...pata nahi apne aap ko kya samzte hai...hun''

''Chill manu ..leave them'' jyo patted her..

But mansi was still staring that rude tall guy ..actually not staring she was glaring at him as he was still holding his eyes on her..

Unknowingly she had started watching his ravishingly handsome features ...
'rude proudy face .. smoky black eyes with fires of passion which were exploring her to the core...thin slightly pinkish lips sipping the drink in his hand ...really he was the most handsome man in that bar-room'

''Hey manu...look that handsome guy...abhi bhi tumhe hi ghure jaa raha hai'' jyoti gestured that tall rudy ...nd jyoti's voice brought her senses back..
''sahi kaha tha tumne lagta hai itni khubsurti pahli baar dekh raha hai'' she winked grinning at mansi..

No doubt mansi herself was very beautiful ...her big black kohled eyes had the magic to make any man her slave..her fair velvety skin ..delicate chin ..dark pink lusious lips and long silky black hairs were adding their charm to her perfectly carved figure..

She was looking breath takingly beautiful in her sky blue sari ...her neck was raised gracefully and she was confidentaly looking in his eyes as it was quite high time they were looking at each other in sach a way...she had already sensed and accepted his challange as he had constantly fixed his gaze on her ...he was endlessly peering her with his sharp eyes...

..And now she was feeling little uncomfortable under his constant gaze

That silvery girl tryed to speak something but he totaly ignored her and continued his gaze...

... mansi started getting nervous as it was unable to bear his passionate smoky eyes...she swallowed down the lumps forming in her throat and finally lowered her gaze with slight blush ... cursing him under her breath...

...and with this a slow winning smile lit up his extremely handsome face which was really a sight worth watching...

Edited by Manipadma - 13 years ago

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Arunita Chandra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

hmm rt ka entry ho gaya...your descriptions are fabulous..we can see them without any picture...and thjose eye-war...its great...keep it up

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Nandini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Finally u updated karu

I was thinking of nagging u yet again

ok now coming to the update -

Awesome update

luvd it

wow just luv the staring session bt manasi n that handsome, rude, guy (no wonder who is he)

Awe finally she lowered her eyes

y yaar? that rudy had to put his weapons down first

but neways luvd it 2 bits

update soon

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Rukmini13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

So finally u update...anyways i m not mad on u coz u give us such nice part with eye-waaar.. Manu what's dat ate hi war han nd woh bhi most handsome,charming good looking guy in party...khuleam challenge...aagas Isa ho to anjam kya hoga...we can imagin whole scene...good going padma...luv u...update soon...