I'm Not in Love (Rt-Mc ff) part 5 on pg 18 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Riasa

wowww just amazing karuu loved it ...👏
continue it ...Manasi naam kuch boring hai 🥱dusra nam de na ...

Thanx shonaa... :)..are naam boring hai bt ladki interesting hai yar.. ;-)

Originally posted by: shruja

First of all thanks for starting rtmc ff it will make our wait for rtmc easy😃
and i can know hindi n english😆
humm so it is manasi not believing in love
waiting to see how these three frnds life take turns
update soon

Hey no thnx dear... 😊

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

intresting story

n dnt say so that u r not a writer even m not a writer but see m so stubborn i still write so u can do tht also

continue soon

Thanxx khushi 😊

Originally posted by: lisalafaiya

di awesome plz update fast!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nd who said u cant write ur an awesome writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank u sooo much dear 😃 ... I ll update by tonight...

Originally posted by: b1h1

interesting didi😃

update soon👏👏👏

Thanx dear 😃

Originally posted by: sweetshera

wow cool intro dear...luvd it

Manasi...hmm...sounds different

continue soon.

Thank u so much nanduu 😊

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

different story...liked the intro...

please update soon & give the pm when u update...eagerly waiting...

Yea ...thnx ..ll update by tonight 😊

Thanxx jhum n rukmini... :)

Part -1

Finally they were flying to South Africa..'God.. It was not that easy as she thought initially'...Manasi remembered all the conversations with her mother and her dear brother who was her critic, her opponent and the most annoying person in her life..
Mother was not at all ready for this 'girls only trip' to South Africa as there was not any elder one with them...and moreover it was not just a tour ..if everything goes well they have decided to stay there for may b 2 or 3 yrs..
So it was obvious that mother was totaly against of this decision..bt thanks to her papa..he was her best support ..in her each n every decision...every time he was there...he always gave her the best guidence but never forced her for anything...but convinsing her mother was not easy job..the day of packing came in her mind ...
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It was very eventful day for her...papa was out for some importent work...and after the long session of convincing .. finally manasi was packing her stuff...and suddenly she heard someones sobbing..
Manasi :- (in her mind) Uff !!! Nooo..not again !!
Manasi :- Ohh mamaa! Ab kya hua?? Sab kuchh to clear kar diya maine...
Mother :- tere clear kar dene se meri chinta kam ho jayengi kya...tum log wahan akele jaa rahe ho...aur...
Manasi :- par mamma...ham teeno bas plane me akele honge...airport tak to aap sab log aa rahe ho na...
Mayur ( manasi's younger bro) :- (interrupting manasi )Aur mamaa, plane me bhi di akeli kaha hongi...gangsters, terrorist, highjackers...ye sab honge na di ko company dene k liye...
Manasi :- (with greeted teeth) Mayuuur...apna muh band rakh samze...
Mother:- Usse q dant rahi ho...?? Teri fikra hai isliye bol raha hai...
Manasi rolled her eyes..
Mother:- (with concern )waise wo advocate Mr Naath tumhe recive karne aa jayenge na thik se???
Manasi :- ''han momaa...ab aap bilkul tension mat lijiye...wahaa ka sab intajaam ho chuka hai...(hopefully)...aur waise bhi ab mai bachhi nahi hun...jo..''
Mother :- ''haan haan...pata hai badi ho gayi ho...isiliye to meri koi baat nahi sunti ab...''
... And the sobbing started again...Manasi banged her head with the suitcase...
One thing was clear this sobbing and crying session was not going to end so soon...she has to tolerate this till her departure...but still she was trying to control the situation ..and her dear little bro was doing his job of adding fuel to the fire sincearly... ( Narad muni kahin ka !!!)
Mayur :- (patting his mother's shoulder ) Don't worry momaa...Hamari Phulan Devi jaldi wapis aa jayengi...
Manasi :- Oyee ...tuze kaha na apna muh band rakh...
Mayur :- Are waise bhi to tu next flight se wapis aa hi jayengi...to mom ko q dara rahi hai...
Maanasi :- Achhaa...aur tuze kisne kaha ke mai next flight se wapis aa rahi hun...
Mayur :- (in teasing tone )oye bhai hun tumhara !..achhi tarah se janta hun tumhe ..abhi to jaa rahi ho Zansi ki rani bankar ..par wahan thodi si bhi problem ho gayi to aa jaaongi Bhigi billi banke wapis...
Manasi :- ( in firm voice ) achha thik hai...ab to chahe jo ho...chahe jitni bhi probs aaye...mai wapis nahi aanewali ...u get it ...
She hardly finished the sentence and the next session of sobbing was started already...
*** Flashback end***
Manasi smiled as she rememberd all this...she looked at her sides Jyoti n aarti were sound asleep in the plane..and why not after all they didn't have to face such family matters as jyo was orphan and aarti lost her parents in an accident...they were free to take their own decisions ...but now when manasi was going away from her family she was really missing them...
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After few hours the plane touched down the land of Boswell city ..South Africa.. A man holding a bord of Aarti Kapoor's name was there to receive them..
Unexpectedly Mr. Naath was out of station for some imergency ...he was not there for about 1 week ..Mr Naath was the advocate of Mr Kapoor-aarti's uncle ...when aarti told him about her visit she didn't tell about her actual plan..so he thought it must be a casual visit ...he was unaware of Aarti's settling plan there...so he booked a hotel for the girls and a guide for the tour..
...But as the girls were too desparate to visit their destination they moved directly to the farmhouse ...
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[SIZE=3]O god !! This can't be the house !'' Jyoti exclaimed as she looked over the house in that deserted area...the house was surrounded by wild grass and trees..
Manasi :- ''Off ho Jyo ..ek baar andar chalke to dekhte hai..and this is not that bad yaar..''
Manasi stepped out from the vehicle and turned around to see the hill side area which was covered with beautiful cactus and paam trees...
Manasi :- ''wow it's just like I imagined.''
Aarti :- Girls ...let's go inside yaar...I'm very tired now...
..But as they stepped in ..they got stunned...the house was really really in very bad condition..
Manasi was the first to start the conversation...
Manasi :- okk girls ...I know this is not that good but atleast we can check the house ...
'' manu have u gone mad ! Just look at this house ...yahan bas janwar rah sakte hai insaan nahi..aur iss ghar ki condition dekh ke to lagta hai ke jungle ke saare janwar yahin honeymoon manane aate honge''- Aarti frowned..
Jyoti :- (observing all around) but Aarti uncle ki will me to farmhouse n garden proper condition me bataye the...fir ye sab..
Aarti :- han yaar..uncle ki will me likha to tha ke puri estate achhi condition me hai ...aur iss farm me double crope bhi le sakte hai...but see the actual condition now..forget about double crop i can't even find a garden here...bas jungle hi jungle hai yahan...aur shayad janwar bhi '' Aarti got frustrated...
Manasi :- nahi yaar.. muze nahi lagta yaha koi jangli janwar aate honge...agar janwar hote to uncle ne yaha gardeing kaise ki hoti...'' manasi concluded..
Aarti :- I don't know yaar...I just want to leave from here
Manasi :- Off ho Aarti.. ! ab ham yahan aa hi gaye hai to kuchh kar ke hi jaayenge '' manasi said with excitement...
But jyoti rolled her eyes and said...
Jyoti :- Manu ..I know you are very much excited ..but sorry to say.. Aarti is right...this house is not worth living for human..
Aarti :- I know yaar...it's better we leave now..i saw a hotel on the way...we will stay their for night and tomorrow we will leave for India...
''Nooo...I don't want to be Bhigi billi...'' a loud voice resonate in that empty house...
Jyoti and aarti startled as manasi yelled loudly...
''whattt''...they asked gazing at her...
Manasi :- ''I mean ham aise kaise wapis jaa sakte hai ...without trying anything ...atleast we can try na...'' Manasi tried to convince them as her brother's evil smyle flashed in her mind...
Jyoti :- What try manu ! yahan to bathroom bhi nahi hai...aur naa hi kitchen...
Manasi :-''Ohh come on jyo..!! Uncle ko gujare 2 saal ho chuke hai...2 saal se yahan koi nahi tha to ye halat to hongi hi na...aur waise bhi ham apni ek alag pahchaan banane yahan aaye hai...nayi duniya banane ..to sabkuchh aasanise mil jaayenga aise kaise soch liya...aur maja to tabhi aata hai jab zero se starting hoti hai...pahle se hi sabkuchh set ho to kya maja..!
Aarti :- But it's all very frustrating yaar ...
Jyo :- ''okk ..look I have a suggestion...'' jyoti said observing their faces..
Manasi was looking with great curiocity and hope...and Aarti with annoyed face...
Jyoti :- I think Manu is right ...ab jab yahan tak aa hi gaye hai to we shuld try ...ham six month dete hai...iss ghar ko...iss farm ko...garden ko...aur apne aap ko...usske baad bhi agar ham adjust nahi kar paaye to back to India ... What say??? ''
''Greattt...I'm in '' Manasi said enthusiastically...
''okk...but only for six months ...'' finally Aarti compromised...
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Precap :- 1st face off between manasi and Mr ... 😉

Wohooo...1st part..amazing...omg mayur is awsom char:):):):) nd finally de reached der destination... Hahahahahaha farmhouse me janvar honeymoon manane ate hai..very interesting...oh gosh in next part entry!!!! Do update sooon