I'm Not in Love (Rt-Mc ff) part 5 on pg 18 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Rukmini13

Wohooo...1st part..amazing...omg mayur is awsom char:):):):) nd finally de reached der destination... Hahahahahaha farmhouse me janvar honeymoon manane ate hai..very interesting...oh gosh in next part entry!!!! Do update sooon

Originally posted by: jhum_86

that dialog was hilarious dear janvar honeymoon manane ate honge😆..good part dear...mansi ko farmhouse pasand a gaye..hmm..waiting for next

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

beautifully written👍🏼

Originally posted by: fatzfathi

hey karuu..nice intro n a beautiful part yaar... 👍🏼i loved d concept n also d name manasi..it suites mc really well...😳ur writin is good enough for a 1st timer re..👏👏👏d scene between mansin her family was fun...a typical mom n a mre typical bro..!😆😆😆do continue soon...

Originally posted by: lisalafaiya

awesome update i liked the lil bro a lot he was hillarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update fast

Originally posted by: shruja

awesome part!! loved manasi's efforts to take permission n mayur the perfect narad muni bro!! and mom n dad too!!
janwaron ka honeymoon that was hillarious
so three girls r ready to start new life :D
and who is that mr.??? for manasi??????
waiting for update

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, beautiful start
continue soon

Originally posted by: sweetshera

lovely update karu

so our Manasi is a strong willed girl. I luv this kinda girls.

Awe her family is typical indian family and her mom is typical affectionate mom. Looking forward for the adventurous journey of life to commence. And when will b our hero's entry?

update soon.

Originally posted by: Riasa

wowww ...beautifully written ...loved it ..

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

thanks 4 pm & sorry for late reply...i was busy...exams r coming...

well excellent start...loved it...& mayur naughty brother...cute...

please update soon...waiting for first meeting...