MN FF 'Limpidness Of Heart '..PART 9..PG34...04/12 - Page 20

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QUOTE=palz_ArTi4ever]v nice update, just hope nothing ugly happens to mayur...dont let nupur get harmed by any1 plz.

SORRY FOR THE LONG DELAY... 😔

REPLYED TO ALL OF U...

THIS UPDATE IS SHORT BECAUSE FROM THE NEXT PART STORY WOULD BE LONG...

Part 8:

At night every 1 went for their rooms as it was the tiring day for all of them…….but sum1 was waiting at the terrace.nupur knew this so she after make sure tht ever one is sleeping went to the terrace…..

M: I knew tum aao gi……thanks for cuming…looking deeply at her…his intense gaze made her blush……

She was gradually moving to him.

N: mai aana chati thei khud….. She said looked into his eyes……

Mayank smiled at her sweet gesture and held her hand and kissed her she felt goosebumps…..how mch his presence effecting her she knows it very well……..they came closer…….

M: nupur…..he held her waist…… mai uss din ka intezar ker raha hu jab hm ek hujayei gai….. kissed on her earlobes….jab koi hmaary bech nai aayei ga aur na hi hmmai is starah chup k milna paray ga…at the same time he caressing her cheeks, kissing on her eyes, ….which makes nupur loosing herself in his arms……. As mayank moved fwd she turned around and hugged him… he pulled her more tightly. Both were engrossed in their moments whn nupur heard her name…………..

N: mayank….!!

M: hmm….

N: mayank mjhey daar lagta hai mom se… pata nai but she is not happy….depressing

M: mayank move slightly and made her face turn towards him…. Nupur mjhey farq nai parhta kaun khush hai kaun nai.. tum meri hugayei hu m soo happy aur koi hmay kabhi alg nai kerskta….. smile…..n: N: aur kisi nai kia tu…..??

M: nupur I trust u and whtever happened I'll always be there for u….. kissed on her forhead..

N: I love u mayank….!!! Huged him…..

M: love u too sweet heart….. smile……

After abt a min both heard a thunderous voice……

Ratna: nupur !!! Looking fiercely

They immediately broke apart and was shocked to death to see ratna standing there…….she move closer to them and slap nupur…..nupur eyes filled with tears….

M: pls aunte ap meri baat sunai ….aisa kch nai hai jaisa aap soch rahi hai….. nupur aur mai ……..

Ratna: chup karoo tum……. Nupur aur tum kiya ker rahay thei yeh maine daikh liya hai……… tum loogoo ko sharam nai aati iss tarah se aadhi raat ko youn besharami ki harkatai kertai hui…….. apni nai tu apnai khandan ki izzat ka khayal kerliya hota……….brutally said

N: maa pls meri baat sunay ……… ek baar tu……..before she could complete her sentence ratna again slaped her this time her nose start bleeds…. This makes mayank hell angry…….

M: pls aunte…… aab nupur pai hath uthanai ki ghalti mat keijei ga…… apko jo kehna hai mjhey kahaye but nupur ko nai…………fuming

Ratna started scremeaing loudly……. All the family members gathered there….. ratna narrated the whole story in front of them with 90% fake……..

Ratna: daikh aapnai mai na kehti thei k iss ladki ki harkatai theik nai hai…… yeh bigad chuki hai…… ap nai kabhi meri nai sunii…… aaj daikha iss nai hmari izzat ki bhi parwa nai ki……..this made siddart bhushan hell angry……

ND: tell me nupur… whtever ur mother said is tht true? kiya tum dono terrace pai thei?

N: dad pls meri baat tu sunyei……pleading

ND: I want to know k kiya tum loog terrace pai thei.. just say yes or no……..glared

Nupur: nodded……..and ND slaps her….

M: uncle pls meri baat tu sunayai……… papa ap mere baat sunai.he pleaded in front of his dad……

MD: mjhey apnai betai pai bharosa hai vo aisa kch nai kersakta…. Aur siddarth hum tu tum se aisa expect nai kertai tum apni biwi k jhoot pai yaqeen ker rahai hu….

ND: bas kaijei bhai sahib……aur kitna zalil karay gai ap……??? Meri property k liyei ap apnai betai ka use karay gai maine kabhi soch anai tha……….mjhey tab hi samjh jana chayei tha jab ap log meray ghr aayei thei holi ka bahanai ker k……aur meri biwi k baray mai kch bhi kehnai ki zarorat nai hai I trust her…he was non stop blaming him……

MD: siddarth…… !! he shouted ..iss k aagay ek baat bhi mat kerna.. mera beta mera ghoroor hai ……. Vo kabhi aisei koi ghatya harkat ker hi nai sakta……..

Nupur was terrible crying and gunjan making her calm down………

ND: ap log pls yaha se chalay jayei ..iss se pehlay k mai bhool k tum meray bhai hu……… was saying in a louder voice……..

MD: theik hai .hm chalay jayi gai par yaad rakhyei ga u'll will rgret……..saing tht he held mayank hands and was abt to leave whn nupur hold his arm……

N: uncle pls jayei mjhey chor k pls……. aisa kch nai hua hai…..crying histerically……

MD: placed his hand on her head…… beta hum jantai k k is mai apki koi galti nai hai …. Hm majboor hai…. Tum hmesha hmari nazroo mai beti hi rahoo gi……. Said this he left from there…….

Nupur and mayank both looked at eachother…..nmayank eyes filled with tears……..meanwhile nupurs mom held her tightly and take her to room and locked it…….

N: mom pls. mjhey band maat keijei pls. mom…… apko bhagwaan ka wasta pls….. mjhey meray mayank k pas jnay deijei pls…. mai maar jao gi …….mayank meri zindagi hai pls……..she was crying cynically…..

On other side mayank packing his luggage but his mind was again and again diverting to nupur….. he stop packing his luggage and left outside……

Nupur heard sum noice at her window she quickly turned and found mayank standing there……she ran towards him and huged him tightly as there will be no tomorrow….. she was sobbing whn mayank held held her face and made her look to him……..

M: wiped out her tears…..nupur aaj jo bhi hua nai hona chayei tha…. Mai janta hu tum pai iss waqt kiya guzar rahi hai….. I promise I will come back to take u away….but u have to wait for me…. Karogi na intezar………

N: nodded…..i will wait mayank till my last breath…….

Mayank put his finger to shut her mouth…… both looked intensely to eachother and kissed with passion which also enclose pain……..pain of getting separate………pain of not seen eachother……… they both want to make this kiss full of emotions…… as this is the thing which gave them feeling of content whn they would far away from each other……..… they broke apart and huged eachother to feel solace…..

M: nupur mjhse promise karo tht u'll take care of ur self …..she cuped his face……

N:I promise maayank…..

Mayank left with heavy heart and filled eyes….

But I guess faith had something different in store for them……

awww my poor mayur

n that nupur's step mom ahhh

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