MN FF 'Limpidness Of Heart '..PART 9..PG34...04/12 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gopi06

lovely updt
loved mayur moments
thanks for the pm

tHANKS ALOT DEAR... 🤗
M GLAD U LIKE IT... 😊
tHANKS ALOT DEAR... 🤗
M GLAD U LIKE IT... 😊
QUOTE=vivak]nice one,
tHANKS ALOT DEAR... 🤗
M GLAD U LIKE IT... 😊
QUOTE=Radhikarani123]Nice Update !!!!!!!!!
tHANKS ALOT DEAR... 🤗
M GLAD U LIKE IT... 😊

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

awesum update maha!!
i luvd MN!!❤️
cont soon!🤗

tHANKS ALOT DEAR... 🤗
M GLAD U LIKE IT... 😊
QUOTE=Radhikarani123]Nice Update !!!!!!!!!
tHANKS ALOT DEAR... 🤗
M GLAD U LIKE IT... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

awesome update Maha👏

just loved it ... Mayur r too good ... loved them loads...😃

aur ye gunjan kuch jaida hi bol rahi hai ... LOLz ... poor mayank ... bechara kitna embarrassed ho gaya tha ...LOLz😆

love mayur cute nokh-jhokh ... they r so sweet.😳

awww ... sayank r adorable ...😃

loved their fighting ... poor mayank ... sammy ne use kahika nahi chora by god ... aur mayank apne engagemnt ki baat sam ko bataya hi nahi 😕

ye sahi hai ... mayank deserve this punishment😛

icecream scene was so sweet ...n mayur moment was a moment of lifetime ...😍

that scene was very nice ... i was sad them ... u knw the reason..

Maha... awesome writing.👏

d way u building up the story was brilliant... hats off to u..👏

continue soon

thnkas for the pm.

HAYEI SUJA...
mayank bhi kch kam nai hai... 😉by god...
dont be sad just see wht life brings for both of thm...
thanlks a lot jani m glad u liked it... 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited my comment on pg 25
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 7:

S:Samrat took a picture of them silently?? aaray loogoo yeh public place hai?.

G: maine kch nai deikha bhabhi aur bhai??

Both samrat and gunjan burst out louder and made both of them embarresed??.

After droping nupur all of them came back and waiting for the next day to arrive?..

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Next day arrived with a huge smile.sunrays were welcoming them with a big hug.entire wether changed was dancing with breeze...

SA: mayank uth ja beta aaj tu teri sagai hai aj k din bhi late uthai ga?..

M: nai maa mai tu utha hua hu?. He huged her from back side...

SA: mayo kia ker raha hai?. Irritated.

M: kia maa ek tu mai ek awaza pai uth gaya aur tum daat rahi hu?.. sad face?.

SA: mai janti hu teri nautanki tu meray kehnai pai nai buhat pehlay ka utha hua hai.. smile?..

M: embaresed? nai vo tu mai???

SA: bas bas teri maa hu aachay se janti hu tjhey?. Chal aab ready huja buhat tiyari kerni hai?. Left the room?..

M: m soo happy finally me and nupur officially would soon become one now no one can stop us to meet eachother??. Dreaming???

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RATNA: tu fiker na ker jo tu chahey ga waisa hi huga? bas thora intezar ker?..

Person: aur intezar aab mjhse nai hota..uss mayank ko tu ?. Fuming

Ratna: sshhh?..maine kaha na...mai bas koi moka dhoond rahi hu phir deikhna kaisey hamara plan pura hota hai?? smile???

Person: theik hai?.. I trust u I know u can do it?? rakhta hu .bye??

Ratna: bye??

NF: kis se baat ker rahai thei?.. confused?.

Ratna: surprised after composing herself? vo tailor tha ..aj kal k tailor paise itnai mangtai hai par kch na kch kharab kerdaitai hai??

NF: aacha?.. aur tiyari hugayi haina aaj sham ki?..

Ratna: haa haa sab hugaya hai?? irritated ..

NF: chaloo acha hai aaj beti ki sagayi hujai gi tu sakoon hujai ga?? leave to washroom??.

Ratna: beti ki fiker hai biwi ki nai?. Mai bhi deikhti hu kab tak chalta hai yeh sab kch??. Evil smile??

Mayank was looking at his evening dress and making faces?..

M: uff yeh kia hai itna heavy ?. Maa bhi na pata nai kia soch ka banaya hai..cartoon lagoo ga?

Sam: carton lago gai nai cartoon hu?? 😆?..

M: bakwass na ker? deikh kitna heavy hai?. Mjhse ziyada tu innka wait hai??.. cheerless

S: deikh mayank pehena tu tujhy para ga. Bechri nupur ka soch uss ka tu terai se bhi heavy hai?.. suppressing smile???

M: aray haa bechari meri nupur?? yeh formality kerna zaori thei simple way se bhi tu engagement hu sakti thei?? sad face

S: oyei mr romeo.. yeh devdas bana band ker aur shakespear ki tarah ban??. Cross his hands on chest...

M: kia?.. shocked?.. cant believe tu abhi tak waisa hi hai?? tu nai satyanaas kerdia phrases aur idioms ka.??

S: matlab?

M: yeh romeo, phir devdas aur phir shakespear ko ek hi line mai lagadiya?. Abhi zinda hotai tu yeh deikh k maar jatai aur tu saari zindagi jail mai guzarta?? 😆😆???..

S: shut up yar?.. tu janta hai yeh romeo, devdas meray samjh nai aatai iss liyei jaha dil kerta hu inn ko laga daita hu?? sad smile??

M: .. tu bhi na? aacha chal jaldi se tu bhi ready huja?.

Nupur was upset..she was missing her mother a lot?tears were dwelling in her eyes??..

G: hey didi??huged her?..

N: hayei gunjan?. Remove her tears??.

G: pls didi aaj nai yeh rona. Aaj tu khushi ka din hai ? aaj tu ahem ahem .. winked??

N: hit on her shoulder?tu bhi na kch bhi bolti rehti hai?.. shying

G: aacha didi aaj mai tumhay tiyar keroo gi .. deikhna mayank bhaiya tu pagal hujayai gai?. Lol?..aur aaj tu ma waisey bhi ladki waloo ki traf se hu?..

Everyone was getting ready for the function?and poking eachother?.

S: mjhey koi bachyei hayei maar gaya?? 😲

M: mayank ran towards him and ask wht happen sami?. Y u r shouting??

S: mayank meray bhai, meray yar, meri jigger, ??

M: aab agay bhi kch bolay ga ya saaray words yahi khatam kerdai ga??.worried

S: pls mayank mai phans gaya yeh sherwana merai galay tak phans gayei na neechay jarahai hai na ooper??. Meri saans ruk rahi hai?. Abhi tu maine teri eagagment bhi deikhni hai?. Aur phir apni shadi bhi kerni hai?. Mai marna nai chata meray dost? abi meri omer hi kia hai??. 🤣

M: lol lol lol??? tera kch nai husakta sami??.

S: tu hans raha hai?? 😭

M: hansoo nai tu kia keroo?.. stupid sherwaana ka ooper ka button tu khol?..

S: opened the button and sheerwani easily slipped down?? hayi aab sakoon hua??.

M: meray dost tera ye ahsan kabhi nai bholo ga??. Huged him??.

M: chal nautanki kahai ka?? lol lol??.aacha deikh mai kaisa lag raha hu??

S: amazing?.. kisi ki nazar na lagay?. Smile??

M: tub hi bilkul maa jaise baatai kerta hai?.. glare??..

Another side gunjan making nupur ready for the function??.nupur wera white and pink churidaar with heavy silver embroidery lookin simple yet adorable??..

G: didi ek baar apnay app ko deikheyi tu??

N: slowly raise her head and looked herself in mirror?.. blushed and hide her face??

G: q didi lag rahi huna pari?? winked??..

Ratna: aaray ladkiyo tum loogoo ki tyari khatam nai hui neechay ladkai walai aagyei hai?? annoyed

G: jii aunte bas 2min??. didi aunte itnai saroo q hai?. I don't like her?.

N: aise nai kehtai gunjan badi hai tumse?. Respect kertai hai ??.

G: didi apki inni baatoo ki wajah se loog ap ko use kertai hai?. Aacha chalay mayank bhaya nai tu khud laine ooper aajyei?? both burst out loudr??

AT ENGAGMENT:

M: yar sami yeh nupur kaha reh gayei hai?.. keenly searching for nupur

S: ahem ahem?.. koi abhi se itna bechan huraha hai..pata nai shadi pai kia huga?..winked?..

M: chup ker?. M serious? glared...

Meanwhile nupur came wearing white and pink churidaar,side plait hair style lookin immensely cute and adorable?.mayank mouth was hang open he couldn't be able to control himself..his heat was throbbing too fast he wanted to take her in his arms, he wanted to feel her he wantwd to touch her? he was engrossed in his emotions whn he felt sumones jerking him?.

S: oyei romeo baher aaja aagayei teri Juliet?.. grin?..

M: embarresed ?..

Gunjan made her sit besides mayank.

G: q bhai kaisa lag raha hai? Winked??

M: chup ker. Glare?? tum dono aaj kch ziyada hi bol rahay hu? tumlogoo ko tu baad mai pochu ga??.

He slightly came closer to nupur.. nupur heart start beating fast she can feel his warm breath on her face which made her go feeble?.

M : u lookin beautiful nupur?? smile?..

N: nupur blushed and bow down her head to hide his intense gaze?..

S: chalo aab rasam start kertai hai?.. aunte! He called ratna?.. pls. pass on the engagement ring??

Ratna: haa haa meray pas hi hai mai aarahi hu pehananai?. Smile??.

S: sami was surprised. He could expect ths?? an idea strck in his mind??? aunte..! per rings tu dono khud exchange keray gai na??.

Ratna: bte hamari family mai yeh rasam badai kertai hai??. Bachai nai?? wicked smile??.

whn ratna move forward for the ritual samrat called her??

s: aunte koi courier wala aaya hai ap ka poch raha hai. Keh raha kch urgent hai?.. maine ussko kaha k mjhey daidoo but he insisted k ap ko bulayai?.

Ratna: courier wala?? Puzzled??

Siddarth: jao ratna deikho kaun hai? Hum intezar kertai hai?..

Ratna: jii ?? she was abt to go whn samrat called him?

S: aunte? rings daideije. Itni expensive rings sath laijana theik nai??. Suppressed smile??.

Ratna: glared and pass on the rings??

M: mayank looked him angrily and pass on don't do this look??.

S: winked him? calm down?.. itna late huraha hai pata nai yeh ratna aunte kaha rehgayei hai?..i think hmay rasam kerdeini chayei. Q uncle?

Siddarth: haa merai bhi yahi khayal hai?. Beta rings doo ??

S: kia uncle aaj kal k zamany mai bhi ap rings pehenay gai aaj tu inndono ko rings exchange kernai dai??. Pls?.

Siddarth: theik hai? yeh aajkal k bachae bhi?? smile?..

S: chalmayank yeh lai pehena bhabhi ko ring ? iss se pehlay k teri hitler saas aajayei?.. winked and smile??..

Mayank and nupr exchange their rings whole hall was congratulatin them whn ratna came??

Ratna: yeh kia huraha hai?..? surprised??.

S: vo aunte ap late hugayei aur mohrat nikal raha that u mayank aur nupur nai rings exchange kerlii aur bhi khud aunte?.. isn't amazing??..smile??.

Ratna: furious?. Par?.. her sentence left incomplete??

Siddarth: haa ratna tum kaha reh gayei thei maine hi kaha rasam kernai ko?..

Ratna: nai bas vo aisei hi?. Courier ghalat aagaya tha kisi aur ka tha?? gave I'll kill u look to samrat?..

S: koi baat nai yeh courier walay bhi na?.. waisey ap nai miss kerdia buhat aamza aaya?. Yeh aaj kal bachay bhi na suntai hi nai hai.. lol??. Haina?..???

Ratna: left out?.. iss ko tu mai chooro gi nai??

Shilpa: she kissed nupur?. Jeeti raho aab jaldi se aajao ghr?.. smile??.

Siddarth : haa haa bhabhi aab tu yeh ap loogoo ki amanat hai?.. put her hand over nupur head?..

G: samrat waisey tumhay ratna aunte sath aisa nai kerna chayei?.

S: maine jo kia theik kia?. U know vo kis tarah ki hai?. I don't like her??. angry

G: aacha chalo ab mood theik keroo? smile??..

Event was successfully ended with loads of memories??. At night every 1 went for their rooms as it was the tiring day for all of them??.but sum1 was waiting at the terrace.nupur knew this so she after make sure tht ever one is sleeping went to the terrace??

hope u like it...
precap: engagment break...😉
Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

very very nice. update...

Ratna is so.. evil...

thanks to samrat..

i just.. hope...

she doen't do.. any bad to nupur..

happiness.. have just started to come in her life.. in the mane of mayank..

his.. love..

is only.. support for her...

well.. update.. was.. mindblowing..

i am glad finally both are engaged...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
so finally engagement ho hi gayi...
m sooo glad bt kash sab ase hi chalta rehta...
precape is scary...
loved it lodsss...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so nice update par precap ka dar lag raha hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
samrats trick was nice
lovely part
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Posted: 13 years ago
vryy cute update the engagement took place... n samrat was toh awesum yeh hui na baat
eit ka jawab pathar se
bt the precap seems terrific
hope evrything get well
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful update...
Ahh glad that engagement is done..
Loved it...
Cont soon...

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