MN FF 'Limpidness Of Heart '..PART 9..PG34...04/12 - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
feeling bad for mayur
waiting for the next updt..cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesom update
well written
feeling bad for Mayur
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Feeling bad for them...
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
UFF MAHA TU GAI..SUKAR YEAH UPDATE TUM NY MERAYGHAR ANY K BAD DIYA WARNA MEI KHANY MEIN TUM K KUCH AUR HI KHELATI
iahhh...so ur now on ur track of the story...
it was too much i hate her father who doesnt trust his daughter yet knwoing how nupur's ,mom is they need to be carefull sigh but the damage has been done...
fearing further
update soon
lolvy part
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic FF
loved all the parts
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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely update...But feeling bad for MN...

Cont soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update hun
felt bed for my Mayur
i;m sorry for the late comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maha, i really dont knw wht to cmnt... whn i m so sad after reading this update.

i wish i kill ratna ... she is so mean ... n so low ...

so finally mayur separate ho hi gaye ... i dnt like it ...

mujhe pata hai aage kya honewala hai ... phirbhi mujhe bahut bura feel ho raha hai ...

sorry for short comment.

bt i feel bad for mayur ..

continue soon.

love ya ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot for the beautiful comments,...🤗
from this part part the story will take loads of turns and twist...
hope u guyz will like it...
if u found any place loose or want an improvement pls tell me ur criticism and ideas wuould be appreciated...
with love
maha
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 9:

M: nupur mjhse promise karo tht u'll take care of ur self …..she cuped his face……

N:I promise maayank…..

Mayank left with heavy heart and filled eyes….

But I guess faith had something different in store for them……

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Next morning:

ND: mai soch bhi nai sakta tha k mera bhai meray sath aisa bhi kersakta hai…. Angry

Ratna: see I told u before tht don't trust him par ap k tu saar pai apnai bhai ki muhabbat ki bhoot sawar tha… deikha isska nateeja……. Furious….. mai tu kehti hu k nupur bhi shamil hai iss sab mai.. jab se vo loo g ayei thei nupur buhat badly hui lag rahi thei……

ND: tum sahi thei ratna… mjhey tumharai baat maan laini chayei thei…. Upset

Ratna: with wicked smile….. ab aaya na line pai….. aaap rest keijei mai ap k liyei nashta bhejwati hu…….

….

N: whole she wasn't slept and cried a lot….. she was talking to her mother…

Maa ap q chali gayei dad bhi mjhpai shak kertai hai…. Crying….

Ratna: nupur.!!!

N: turned around….. and hide her mother pic…..

Ratna: aa k breakfast kerloo….. glared

N: mjhey bhook nai hai……

Ratna: bhook nai hai ya apnnay aashik k gham mai bhooki hu….. fuming

N: meri marzi mai khana khao ya nai ap kaun hoti hai mjhey bolnai wali….. with louder tone

Ratna: aacha tu aab maharani k nakhrai tu deikhoo.. she came and hold her tightly… sun ladki aab teri marzi nai merzi chlai gi iss ghr mai…..aur teri shadi bhi meri marzi hug gii……. push her

N: never… mai aisa kabhi nai honai doogii ..shadi hugi tu mayank se warna kisi se nai aur ager apnai majboor kia tu mai apni jaan daidoo gi……

Ratna: tu daidoo jaan….. aur waisey bhi tumharay honai ya na honay se kisi ko koi farq nai parhta……. With she left from the room…..

N: strted crying and dila mayank no……

N: hello mayank…… cring……

M: kia hua nupur……. Y u r crying……??

N: mayank mom meri shadi karana chatei hai…….but I don't want to.. pls mjhey lai jao yaha se pls………

M: nupur mai aisa nai honai doo gat um meri u sirf….. don't u worry I will cum soon… maine kch soch hai……

N: kia mayank?

M: abhi nai waqt aanay pai bas tum tab tak mera intezar keroo…..

Ratna: was listening their convo….. aacha tu yeh baat hai… she came into the room and grab the mobile…..

N: mom pls mjhey mera cell deijei…. Glared….

Ratna: haa haa phir tum apnai aashiq se yaha k bhagnai ka plan bana sakoo haina……? Angry……

N: mom…..!!! shouted….

R: slap her….. shut up.. aab se tum vohi keroo gi jo mai kaho gi….

Mayank was listening their convo he was dam upset at her behave…..

M: meri nupur waha akeli au rmai yaha… tears dwell in to his eyes……

SA: kia hua mayank?

M: mom.. nupur ki maa uss k sath aach anai ker rahai . he narrated the whole story…

SA: yeh tu sach mai sahi nai hai .. par hum kia kersaktai hai mayanak…. Vo uss ki maa hai…

M: kia matlab maa vo kch bhi karay kahi bhi us ski shadi keray hum deikhtai rahya…… nai mainupur ko kisi aur ka honai nai dooga chahyai mjhey kch bhi kern aparay………. Left the room…….

SA: ayei bhagwaan madad ker….. kch ghalat mat honai deina………

…….

Door bell rings….

N: open the door and stuned to see adiraj there….. tum?

A: yes mai sweet heart… wow I must say u r lookin dam hot…. scrutinized her from top to bottom…….

N: shut up…..!!! she was left…….

A: hmmm … nakhrai tu buat hai.. bas kch din ki baat hai phir tu….. he was lost in her whn sum 1 caled him……

Ratna: adhi….. broad smile……

A: hayei masi….. he huged her…. Kaisei hu?

R: mai theik hut u suna… kaisa raha safar koi muskil tu nai hui……

A: nai masi mushkil kaise…. Aur jo thori buhat mushkil thei vo nupur ko deikh k khatam hugayei….. winked……..

R: hit him.. tu nai sudhray ga na.. chal fresh huja phir khana khatai hai…..

…..

Nupur was sitting in garden and lost somewhere whn he felt some1 presence wich made her runcomfortable.. she raise her head and see adhiraj..

A: hi nupur….. smile….

N: hi.. stand and was abt to leave whn he felt her hand caught by adhiraj…….

N: wht is this…? Leave my hand.

A: itni jaldi kia hai sweet heart…… winked….

N: she slap him hard…

A: teri itni himmat… he held her by her shoulders and coming closer to her.. nupur shouted and called her mom…. Ratna smiles but to pretend in front of her she slap adhiraj…….

R: teri himmat kaisey hui meri beti kkareeb aanay ki.? Dobara nazaer aaya tu tangai toor doogii……

A: left with furious……..

………

Nupur dad wokeup in the morning and felt chest pain… he called nupur….

ND: nupur…….!!! He placed his hand on his left side…….

N: rushed towards his room.. dad……. Kia hua apko?

Ratna also came and hold her….. they take him to hospital….. docters diagnosed heart attack.this news shattered nupur. She cried her heart out….

R: docter sahib yeh theik tu hujayie gai na?

Doc: abhi tu he is mch better but kisi bhi tarah ka stree could be harmful so take great of him…….

R: jii doc…..

Ratna move to his room and sat beside him……

R: mjhey apse kch imp baat kerni hai……?

ND: haa bolo…..

R: mjhey ghakat mat samjhey ga.. zindagi ka pata nai hota mai chatei hu k ap ki zindagi mai hi nupur ki shadi kerdoo aur ap bhi apni beti ki khushi deikh saktai hai. Adhiraj ko ap jantai hai buhat aacha bacha hai……. Ap ka kia khayl hai?

ND: mjhey koi aiteraz nai hai… adhiraj ghr ka bacha hai…. Mai nupur se baat keroo ga….

R: with weird smile left the room…..

………..

Precap:

Nupur weds adhiraj😉

Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago

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