MN FF 'Limpidness Of Heart '..PART 9..PG34...04/12 - Page 16

Maha,apki ye ff ki sath kya dushmani hai?Kyn aisa small update dete ho?:(
ur update was fab.Oye hoye ech n evry mayur scene was too good.hehehe he adressed nups mom as vamp.Lol.Loved mayur scne at shopping mall.Very gud part.Bt apka intention kuch fishy lag rahe.Hope u wont seperate my mayr n update a long part next time.
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btw maine apko kuch likhne k liye order kia tha,uska kya hua?

super cute update maha...beautifully written...mayur and majan are adorable...like their bond...ufff nupur's mom, a unique piece to say the least...loved the pallu part though😳...cont soon...!

M: maa ap ladies ka yahi kaam hai ek'. Pehlay shopping pai itna time phir ghar aak k uss ko discuss kernai '.. u guyz r impossible'.. irritated tone

G: aacha bhai khud bade mazey se shopping ker raahay thei..bhabhi jo thei haina'.. 😉'.

M: gunjan tu aaj kal kch ziyada nai bolnai lagi hai' glared.

Sa: aacha aab tum do no mat shroo hu jana'.. nupur beta tum apni list banaloo jis ko bulana hai waisey tu ratna se kehdia tha maine tum bhi banaloo''.

M: maa aacha hua jo dad nai alag ghr lailiya rent pai'. Smile

SA: haa beta thorai dinoo kit u baat hao phir tu hum bhi wapes chalay jayei gai kisi pai iss trah se burden dalna hmay bhi aacha nai laga''.

N: maa ap aisey baatai q ker rahai hai? kia vo ap loogoo ka ghar nai hai? sad

SA: nai beta aisey baat nai hai.. kia haina tum logo ki engagmnet honai wali hai haazar kaam hai aur meray bhi kch arman hai tu bas issliyei''.. smile 'aacha chaloo gumjan khana lagao phir nupur ko ghr bhi jana huga' buhat late hugaya hai'.

G: ok maa'. Left

N: nupur was abt to stand whn she felt her hand grab by sum1'she turned around to found mayank intense gaze on her''. Mayank mera haath choreyi'.kitchen mai maa ki help kerni hai..

M: gunjan haina vo kerdei gi ..tum betho' he made her sit beside him''.

N: aisey kia daeikh rahu hu mayank?puzzled

M: deikh raha hu k kitni jaldi god has fulfill our wish'. Yaqeen nai hota kabhi k tum meri honai wali hu '' cupped her face

N: mayank'.. caressing his cheeks'.. ek na ek din tu yeh din aana tha na aur jab hum ek dosray k sath hai tu yaqeen na kernai ka tu sawal nai hai'.. smile'.. rite?

M: hmm'.. he was cuming close to her'..

N: mayank pls.. koi aajay ga'. Leave my hand''

M: he was keep cuming''

N: mayan vo maa peechay khari hai''. scared tone'

M: kaha.. he immediately left her hand and turned around to see but no one was there''..

N: nupur was laughing''.

M: nupur yah aacha nai kia 'aab deikhna mai kia kerta hu'.. he ran after her''.

N: nupur run for her life and bumped into Shilpa aunte''

SA: aray yeh kia huraha hai hai''? confused

N: mom see mayank mjhey tang ker rahay hai''. showed tongue to him

SA:mayank''!!! Glared

M: mom aisa nai hai '. Vo tu mai'. Bas'.. left his sentence incomplete'

SA: nxt ime be cautious'.. clear.?

M:he nodded and pass an angry glare like ' I wont spare u nxt time'

SA: maine tujhey kaha tha k list bana'.. angry

M: mom banalei hai meray koi itnei relatives thori na hai aur na koi friend? Sad'.

N: ap ka koi friend nai hai? surprised'..

M: nai '. Ek tha but'.. he left incomplete ehn he heard sum1 voice' he turned around and left stunned beyond the limit''..

SAMRAT: tujh jaisa khabees insane maine apni zindagi mai nai deikha'' tujh jaisa selfish dost maine apni zindagi mai nai deikha''.. dost bana k chor daina koi tujh se sekhai'.. he was keep on speaking'..

M: sami tu''' I cant believe this yar'. Tu kab aaya'gosh I so missed u. mayank was moving towards him''.

S: vohi rahay khaberdar meray kareeb aaya''. Kia kaha tu nai k tera koi dost nai hai mai kch time k liyei US kia chala gaya tu bhool gaya'' furious'

M: meri baat tu sun pls'. deikh ek baar shant huja' sab batata hu''

S: shant hoti hai meri jooti''apni engagmnet ka nai bataya. Bhabhi se nai milwaya''

Namaste bhabhi' kaisey hai aap'' apse will tlk face to face to face later'' 😆😆 hum thori der mai detail mai baat kertai pehlay mai issei nimtaloo...lol...

N: jii theik hu'. Nodded'.. gunjii whos is this? Aur yeh mayank pai itna ghussa q ker rahay hai'..

G: bhabi yeh samrat hai mayank k best frnd' US gayei thei aab wapes aagayei hai.maa se hi inko ap k aur mayank bhai ki engagement ka pata chla hai.. tab se ghussai mai hai' abhi tu scene start hua hai' agay deikhyei hota kia hai'..

S: tu ruk tujhey mai abhi batata hu'. He picked up a cushion and ran behind her.

M: maa pls mjhe bachao iss khuraant se. yeh tu mjhey maar dalay ga'.. folded his hand in front of his maa'..

SA: yeh tum dono ka mamla hai mai kch na kaha gi'' smile

S: wow thanks aunte'' love u'..

M: oyei kia love u pehlay mai tera friend bana tha ya mom'..?? glared.

S: throw a cushion on him and said ek baat tunai sahi ki aaj tu nai bahcy ga..

Both were running behind eachother and nupur and gunjan thoroughly enjoying it''.then they both tired and sit '..

M: sami m so happy to see u '.smile''

S: me too. Both huged eachother'.. bhabhi se nai milwayei ga officially?

M:oh haa'. Nupur'!!!

N: jii.

M: Yeh mera best friend samrat hai'. naamtu suna huga'.

N: she Nodded'..

S: hayei bhabhi.. ap k barey mai buhat suna but aaj mil bhi liya 'aaj maloom hua m mayanak itna deewana q hai apka'' kasam se bhabhi meray kaan paka deita hai yeh nupur nupur keh k'' lol''

M: hit on his shoulder'. Shut up'' embarresed'

N: blushed'

S: ohh hoo ap sharmati bhi hai'.. kia baat hai'.. waise mayank aab deikhna teri engagement pai kaise maza aayei ga'..loog yaad rakhey gai'.. naughty smile''

M: haa yar aab tu aagaya hai haina tu mai bhi enjoy kero ga' tujey yaad hai yaha jab hum rehtai thei tu mr. khurana ko kitna tang kertai thei unki vo puaranai model ki car yaad hai''

S: aaray haa'. Uss car ka tu humnai kia haal kia tha'' 😆

Both burst out with laughter'' abhi bhi kia vo un k pas hai''?

M: haa '. Aur ab tu unno nai dog bhi rakh liya hai'.. jana danger hai

Waha'..😲

S: tu fiker na ker'' samrat baba aagaya hai tu sab theik keray ga'' both gave hifi'.

M: gunjan pls khana laga dei''samrat tu fresh huja phir baatai keray gai''.

S: okii'.. waisey room kaha hai mera?

N: gunjan tu samrat ko room deikha mai khana lagatei hu'..

S: kaisey hu gunjan?

G: theik hu buhat jaldi khayal aagaya pochnai ka/? Glared''

S: tum nai sudhroo gin a waisey hi nakcharii raho gi'.. smile'.

G: excuse me'.. nakcharii kis ko kaha? Furious'.

S: nakcharri maine nakchari ko kaha'.lol'..

G: samrat'..!!!

S: gunjan'..!!!

Both laughed out'.

S: I missed u soo mch gunjan'' thanks mayank k baray mai batanai ka'..

G: most welcum' dost hi dost k kaam aata hai hai'.. both huged eachother''..

Every one enjoying dinner'.

SA: mayank beta jaldi khao aur nupur ko ghar chorna hai raat buhat hugayi gai'. Bhai sahib ka bhi phone aaya tha''

M: jii mom''.

S: ohh wow phir tu sab chlaay gai icecrea bhi khay gai''. Excited

N: nai buhat late hugaya hai '.. ghar pai sab tensed hugai' phir kabhi chalai gai''.

S: pls bhabhi merai aabay ki khushi mai '. Pls pls'' begging'..

N: smile. Oki..

S: hurray'' bhabhi u r too good''.

M: bas bas buhat butter laga liya''. Glared'..

S: ohh hoo possessive''. Lol''.

M: jii nai'' angry''.

At ice cream parlour:

M: nupur kaun se khao gi' vanilla..?

N: maloom hai tu poch q rahay hai'' smile''

S: ahem ahem'.. yeh kia huraha hai bhai yeh kia hu raha hai'.. koi tu batayei yeh kia huraha hai... start singing...

M: shut up sami. Yeh public place hai''..😡

S: vohi tu indirectly mai bhi keh raha hu k yeh public place hai'' lol'..

M: tu nai nai sudharna'.. smile'..

G: bhai mjhey apni chocolate ice cream taste karo na'.

M: uff ho gunjan tum badi kabhi mat hona'' yeh loo he give her a spoon of ice cream'..sami tujhey pata hain aissk bachpan k addat hai sab ki ice creams taste kernai ki''.

S: chalo aaj hum sab try kertai hai'. maza aata hai.. every one tasted eachother icecreams flavor''

M: nupur!. He forward his spoon towards er mouth and both got stuck there''

S:Samrat took a picture of them silently'' aaray loogoo yeh public place hai'.

G: maine kch nai deikha bhabhi aur bhai'' closed her eyes... lol...

Both samrat and gunjan burst out louder and made both of them embarresed''.

After drooping nupur all of them came back and waiting for the next day to arrive'..

Hope u like it''😉

awww its sooo nice

awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
it was such a cute part...
u know m feeling so sad dat soon dis story will turn a sad story...
kya asa nhi ho sakta ke ap iss story ko ase hi happy happy rehne do plzzz
loved it lodsss...
loved d frndship Mayank n Samrat share...
awesome part...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love U...🤗🤗🤗

res *Edited*

That brilliant part dear

loved the cute Mayur moments sayank were lovely cont soon n thnx for the pm

mahaaa
awww sami agayi- goood - sam-mayu bonding was mind blowing
love it dear
and mayur scene was veryyy cute...
loved sam-mayank and mayur nok-jhok
very cute part
keep it up