::OS::Destiny's Child part 2 2 OCTOBER PG 10

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Nidz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Nyc..

It's beautiful.. i loved the way u describe c.s with pictures..!!

applause..!!

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: cuteteddy
wah wah is baar new pics use ki hain they all are just awesome n please pm me whenever u update

comment - amazing start dear well done bechara abhay stuck beteen jannat n pranay

I know it's a shocker but this is where my FF A twisted Love was heading. The twins were going to be kidknapped by the superiors but then i had already but ABHIYA through so much and i like the bobble squaky image of babies. So in this shot i thought i'd spin my own twist on it

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
wow, really great start ayesha. so does Jannat now know that Pia is her mom and Abhay her father?

Yes. She found the connection through Pia but Jeevan her foster father will keep Jannat from feeeling any humane emotions

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: shivanirajput
awesome
really very well written
but abhay has baby with alina unimagininable
he can nebver cheat pia
does pia know about this
please update soon

I know but technically ABHAY never cheated on Pia. Pranay was concieved by magic. Abhay and Alina didn't get jiggy with it. Have U never seen Wiccan spells cast by on tv shows yaar. It can happen without getting up close and personal U know😆 Alina would be up for it but not Abhay however he was heavily under a dark spell and it is all done clinically. IVF bhi is zamana main bohot popular choice hai😉

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi
wow di!
it's amazing.

love the future

have so many questions for rpesent!

Well, M sure jannat is abhay pia's unseen daughter?

I love jannat... her personality as portrayed and her behavior and language! haha

also the name!

Allina is a nice girl..

let's see if pia can get abhay to do what she wants...

continue soon

love, Khushi

Xx

Jannat is ABHIYA's cheeky kinda evil daughter with super enhanced powers. I can imagine Jannat being very fiesty with traits of SID AND ABHAY and a dose of Pia U can only expect fireworks.

Alina may be broken as a woman but she is torn by family loyalty and her son is already over to the dark side. U have a taster of how conflicted i can get and throw everyone at the deep end.😉

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Exciting update! So both of Abhay's kids are not exactly angels, are they? 😆 I'm glad Jannat met her parents but I'm sort of shocked how she said Abhiya are nothing to her. I'm sure she'll turn around after seeing Abhiya's love for her. 😊 As for Pranay, I hope he knows he's about to attack his grandparents! 😡 Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

How would ABHIYA's and ABHINA's child turn out if they had an upbringing filled with violence and no love bestowed on them the result is before U. Jannat is stubborn to the core she is Pia's daughter nad don't forget she is raised by the cold hearted Superiors to only kill and not feel so is it any wonder she is as dark as she is here. In due time she'll surprise U all as for Pranay he may mean LOVE by name but by nature he is anything but LOVE

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Abhiya_vijata
Awesome Ayesha!!!Loved it..!!I hate myself for reading it LATE:(
Anyways so Jannta is Abhiya Daughter n Pranay is Abhina's son ohh sounds InterestIng!!!Felt bad for Pia..!!!They took her daughter away coz of revenge!!!They don't know anything except for REVENGE!!!!

Thanks for PM and Continue..!!!

The fire burning within Pia and that vocano she has erupting inside her will help bring back her daughter. Revenge is a dish best served cold unfortunately for Jannat and Pranay they are stuck in a feud they have no intention of getting out of

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
Too good ayesha but alina and abhay intimate and child i cant digest it lol and u made both of the children monster aur dipu yaha bhi apni harkato se baaz nahi ayi thanx for the pm and do continue ur os

Its all clinically done yaar on one fateful night🤣Don't forget there are other ways of having a child😲😆 Deepu ki watt Pranay lagayega.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
Hmm ayesha I agree.I too found Abhina hot but still whn I say Abhiya I feel their love is pure I never found stelena,delena or edwella love as pure as Abhiya.Suppose if same magic was done wid jiya would u accept their baby I wont coz if Pia's love can break metz spell so is Abhay love 4 Pia is so strong tht it wont allow him 2 get intimate wid any gal.Abhiya love itself is strongest magic spell wich outshine all evil spell + in dis I really felt tht Abhay betrayed Pia & Alina both & u know how much I adore him.He is the only ekta's lead hero who is not having babies wid one & all he may do fake dating but all his love is 4 Pia & in dis u made my perfect hero into mess.I spoke wht I felt but I have 2 admit the way u write I completely indulge myself into story😳.Sorry if I hurt u darling but 4 story point of view I m on 2 c ki who wins,whether there will b bloodshed all around or love will blossom agn

🤣 I never take any words too seriously. Its just my crazy plots i like to throw at people. Jiya could have a baby i have no probs😕 But then we have half human breed and even then the vampires a little more stronger of the species i find and ABHIYA would give the same result as well when i would rather see vampire/werewolf HYBRID its an obsession of mine. But tumahaari baat main dum hai lekin meri imagination ki daag deni paregi. I have fulfilled my wish with ONSE SHOT.

I have already explained in my comments that Abhay did not get Jiggy with Alina it was all done artificially. I am a woman of the 21st Century and all these celebs are now having IVF babies so i included it here.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: prerna26
Brilliant Update!

From where do you get these wonderful ideas?Deepanita toh kabhi sudhar hi nahi sakti 😆! Pranay is Abhina's son😲.Poor Pia😔.Concept is really very interesting and refreshing too !!! 😊. Looking forward to the next update!

Its a whirlwind but i like myself some DRAMA

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