::OS::Destiny's Child part 2 2 OCTOBER PG 10

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Know wat? I thought what would happen if Abhina did happen in the show yesterday after seeing them together. I will always be an Abhiya shipper but just got this thought n now today I get to read on OS on that 😃 Super like 👍🏼👏. Liked the context a lot. So different from the campus environment. Much mature and much darker. 😳 I liked this vampire lycan hybrid concept ever since I saw the Underworld series. So Abhay has fathered children with both of them? 😲 Pia, its fine coz he loves her but Alina its real sad 😭 I really like tat gal a lot n its very painful to see her broken But how could Pia forgive him for double crossing her? I dont blame Alina for hating him.

Loved the OS though. ⭐️

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

wow nice update. continue soon...

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Resh

@SheDevil

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: matwamango
Current mar dala. Magic can do a lot to one being and Deepanita and Alina together i don't know i like expanding my horizon. Plus i wanted all out negative children because i have portrayed Abhay's kids as ANGELS in every update. This is me being risky and thinking outside the box.
I agree with U that Abhay and Pia share a love thats unbreakable but i also wanted to show Blood can be thicker than water.

Hmm ayesha I agree.I too found Abhina hot but still whn I say Abhiya I feel their love is pure I never found stelena,delena or edwella love as pure as Abhiya.Suppose if same magic was done wid jiya would u accept their baby I wont coz if Pia's love can break metz spell so is Abhay love 4 Pia is so strong tht it wont allow him 2 get intimate wid any gal.Abhiya love itself is strongest magic spell wich outshine all evil spell + in dis I really felt tht Abhay betrayed Pia & Alina both & u know how much I adore him.He is the only ekta's lead hero who is not having babies wid one & all he may do fake dating but all his love is 4 Pia & in dis u made my perfect hero into mess.I spoke wht I felt but I have 2 admit the way u write I completely indulge myself into story😳.Sorry if I hurt u darling but 4 story point of view I m on 2 c ki who wins,whether there will b bloodshed all around or love will blossom agn

Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago

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rashika aggarwal

@rashika27.1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

awesome dear

thnx fo rthe dear

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.Reshama.

@.Reshama.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

am speechless its a thumps up for me😳

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

woh gr8... ayesha... does jannat knows d truth... is jannat pia's daughter??? cont soon

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

great one

oh god how i am waitng for next part

do continue

bye sumi

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Liked the the concept. Abhay is the father of two kids. Pia seems like a lost soul and his son is no less a lost soul too inbetween the waring grand ma and his mother. But looks like his daughter was brought up as a warrior. So now waiting to see the encounter between the two kids.

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Superbb concept Ayesha... as usual brilliant and different... but the only thing which is for me next to impossible is seeing Abhay having a baby with anyone else then Piya I can't even imagine that... 😆

but hats off to your creativity that you presented this in a different manner...poor Alina.. and Poor Piya and Poor Abhay as well.. dono bacche itne khatarnak 😲 😕

aur ek to trained by lipstick chudail eager to find out more and how Jannat will accept Abhiya...continue soon 😳