::OS::Destiny's Child part 2 2 OCTOBER PG 10

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

awesome
really very well written
but abhay has baby with alina unimagininable
he can nebver cheat pia
does pia know about this
please update soon

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

wow di!

it's amazing.

love the future

have so many questions for rpesent!

Well, M sure jannat is abhay pia's unseen daughter?

I love jannat... her personality as portrayed and her behavior and language! haha

also the name!

Allina is a nice girl..

let's see if pia can get abhay to do what she wants...

continue soon

love, Khushi

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Exciting update! So both of Abhay's kids are not exactly angels, are they? 😆 I'm glad Jannat met her parents but I'm sort of shocked how she said Abhiya are nothing to her. I'm sure she'll turn around after seeing Abhiya's love for her. 😊 As for Pranay, I hope he knows he's about to attack his grandparents! 😡 Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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vijayata123

@vijayata123

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Awesome Ayesha!!!Loved it..!!I hate myself for reading it LATE:(
Anyways so Jannta is Abhiya Daughter n Pragay is Abhina's son ohh sounds InterestIng!!!Felt bad for Pia..!!!They took her daughter away coz of revenge!!!They don't know anything except for REVENGE!!!!

Thanks for PM and Continue..!!!

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Too good ayesha but alina and abhay intimate and child i cant digest it lol and u made both of the children monster aur dipu yaha bhi apni harkato se baaz nahi ayi thanx for the pm and do continue ur os

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EVil mind

@preet111

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

awesome really very well written updated soon

thnx 4 pm

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Brilliant Update!

From where do you get these wonderful ideas?Deepanita toh kabhi sudhar hi nahi sakti 😆! Pranay is Abhina's son😲.Poor Pia😔.Concept is really very interesting and refreshing too !!! 😊. Looking forward to the next update!