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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Maan found Geet but hesitating to touch her because he loves another girl...

this is confusing yaar...if he loved another girl that doesn't mean that he should let other girl die who is fighting for her life in front of him...

chalo yaar uska hesitation kam kar do...Geet ki payal dikha do use...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#232

read all 14 parts all together n atlast geet saw maan though for 1 moment only...maan is little bit high descent...very much perfect...n thinking too much abt lv...itna sochega to pyar kaise hoga...pata nehi kaab geet maan ko dekhegi...kaab dono ki bate hogi...kab dono ko apne soulmate ki pehchan hogi...kaab geet maan ki personal bedroom dekhegi...kaab maan ki pocket me apni payal ko payegi...

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#233

loved it.. Maan is decent. hope he continues to be the same..

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shriya_94

@shriya_94

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

Finally completed reading this story and guess what I love it :) This story has that freshness and subtle essence and is beautifully written

Maan the gentleman...hayee! Loved it radzi! Brilliant :)

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TanuDDian

@TanuDDian

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#235

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Sharon Khan

@-ChikniChameli-

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#236

Amazing stories...would like to read more. please PM me..too

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Angel

@amita5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#237

Amazing story

Loved the way Man feels restlessness for Geet

Please update soon

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bharadwajrad

@bharadwajrad

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai
Superb part..
But ds was sumthg i expected from maan..!
Naina s really a true friend..
Geet s very lucky to have her in her life..

Thank u so much dear 😊 glad u liked it :) Well, Naina is someone to be trusted blindly :) glad u like her :)